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'''Rava:''' We’re not sure what’s happened to you.  Your heart rate was through the roof.  As was your pulse.  Pretty much everything was past the normal…we were not sure if you were going to make it and you may have done some tissue damage to your organs.  
 
'''Rava:''' We’re not sure what’s happened to you.  Your heart rate was through the roof.  As was your pulse.  Pretty much everything was past the normal…we were not sure if you were going to make it and you may have done some tissue damage to your organs.  
  
Meanwhile a message has been sent to ''Summer’s Gift'' that Dr. Arden has appeared to have suffered some sort of collapse.  He has been taken to observation and he appears to be past the worst of it, but if we have the time we might want to come by and look in on him.
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Meanwhile a message has been sent to Summer’s Gift that Dr. Arden has appeared to have suffered some sort of collapse.  He has been taken to observation and he appears to be past the worst of it, but if we have the time we might want to come by and look in on him.
  
 
Do we have the time?  Oh, hells yeah.
 
Do we have the time?  Oh, hells yeah.
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'''Rava:''' Oh, yes. Of course.  I’ll be right back.
 
'''Rava:''' Oh, yes. Of course.  I’ll be right back.
  
At which point, the crew from ''Summer’s Gift'' shows up: Rina, Nika, and Joshua. They get right up to his bed and look him over.  Standing close to him, Rina gets a fleeting whiff of…something.  Something pleasant but too ephemeral to pin down and there are bigger things that demand her attention.  Like Arden sitting propped up in a hospital bed with a livid spot on his forehead, looking as if he’d been hit by a pool cue.
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At which point, the crew from Summer’s Gift shows up: Rina, Nika, and Joshua. They get right up to his bed and look him over.  Standing close to him, Rina gets a fleeting whiff of…something.  Something pleasant but too ephemeral to pin down and there are bigger things that demand her attention.  Like Arden sitting propped up in a hospital bed with a livid spot on his forehead, looking as if he’d been hit by a pool cue.
  
 
'''Rina:''' What the hell happened to you?
 
'''Rina:''' What the hell happened to you?
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'''Nika:''' Oh, shite!<br>
 
'''Nika:''' Oh, shite!<br>
'''Rina:''' Only you, Arden. ''Only you''. You okay?<br>
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'''Rina:''' Only you, Arden. Only you. You okay?<br>
 
'''Nika:''' How bad was it?<br>
 
'''Nika:''' How bad was it?<br>
 
'''Arden:''' I’m fine. I seem to speed up in some way.<br>
 
'''Arden:''' I’m fine. I seem to speed up in some way.<br>
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'''Rina:''' Oh, that’s not good.<br>
 
'''Rina:''' Oh, that’s not good.<br>
 
'''Arden:''' Yeah. And my doctor, the doctor who’s attending…aaahhm, some Indian woman—<br>
 
'''Arden:''' Yeah. And my doctor, the doctor who’s attending…aaahhm, some Indian woman—<br>
'''Rina:''' (lightbulb!) ''Woman''?  Does she wear perfume?<br>
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'''Rina:''' (lightbulb!) Woman?  Does she wear perfume?<br>
  
 
That’s what Rina detected for that one instant. Perfume.
 
That’s what Rina detected for that one instant. Perfume.
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'''Nika:''' I don’t.<br>
 
'''Nika:''' I don’t.<br>
 
'''Joshua:''' I don’t.<br>
 
'''Joshua:''' I don’t.<br>
'''Arden:''' ''Be that as that may''.<br>
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'''Arden:''' Be that as that may.<br>
  
 
Rina leans over Arden and takes a really big sniff.  Yup. Perfume. Nika laughs as Arden gets flustered.
 
Rina leans over Arden and takes a really big sniff.  Yup. Perfume. Nika laughs as Arden gets flustered.
  
 
'''Rina:''' Oh, yeah.  So, did she play doctor? <br>
 
'''Rina:''' Oh, yeah.  So, did she play doctor? <br>
'''Arden:''' ''Stop''. She knows about the extra gland.<br>
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'''Arden:''' Stop. She knows about the extra gland.<br>
'''Nika:''' They were ''scanning'' you?<br>
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'''Nika:''' They were scanning you?<br>
 
'''Arden:''' No, I had to tell her.<br>
 
'''Arden:''' No, I had to tell her.<br>
 
'''Joshua:''' You had to tell her?<br>
 
'''Joshua:''' You had to tell her?<br>
'''Rina:''' You ''had'' to tell her? <br>
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'''Rina:''' You had to tell her? <br>
 
'''Arden:''' I didn’t have to tell her….It sorta…came out.<br>
 
'''Arden:''' I didn’t have to tell her….It sorta…came out.<br>
'''Rina:''' Did she ''torture'' you?<br>
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'''Rina:''' Did she torture you?<br>
 
'''Arden:''' In a sense.<br>
 
'''Arden:''' In a sense.<br>
 
'''Rina:''' (looks at him slyly) Ahh.  You know, I can see how.<br>
 
'''Rina:''' (looks at him slyly) Ahh.  You know, I can see how.<br>
'''Nika:''' (swatting Rina) ''Damn'', Rina.<br>
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'''Nika:''' (swatting Rina) Damn, Rina.<br>
 
'''Rina:''' (pointing to Arden) You can’t leave him alone for ten minutes.<br>
 
'''Rina:''' (pointing to Arden) You can’t leave him alone for ten minutes.<br>
'''Arden:''' (indignant) ''Two hours''.<br>
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'''Arden:''' (indignant) Two hours.<br>
 
'''Joshua:''' Do you want to leave now, Arden?  Because it looks like you might want to leave.<br>
 
'''Joshua:''' Do you want to leave now, Arden?  Because it looks like you might want to leave.<br>
  
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'''Rava:''' I wouldn’t recommend it under these conditions.  He had a seizure which was quite dramatic.  I wouldn’t recommend that he be put into a ship and leapt out into space under those condition.<br>
 
'''Rava:''' I wouldn’t recommend it under these conditions.  He had a seizure which was quite dramatic.  I wouldn’t recommend that he be put into a ship and leapt out into space under those condition.<br>
'''Rina:''' (exasperated) It’s not like he’s going ''alone''.<br>
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'''Rina:''' (exasperated) It’s not like he’s going alone.<br>
 
'''Rava:''' Are you a physician?<br>
 
'''Rava:''' Are you a physician?<br>
 
'''Joshua:''' I can be.  (beat)  Don’t ask.<br>
 
'''Joshua:''' I can be.  (beat)  Don’t ask.<br>
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Rina notes how Rava specifically looks at her and Nika and internally nods: Rava is crushed out and jealous.  She rolls her eyes.  Arden calls her on it.
 
Rina notes how Rava specifically looks at her and Nika and internally nods: Rava is crushed out and jealous.  She rolls her eyes.  Arden calls her on it.
  
'''Arden:''' Oh, right. Like ''you’ve'' got something to talk about.
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'''Arden:''' Oh, right. Like you’ve got something to talk about.
  
 
Nika just half-smiles at Arden and he just closes his eyes in defeat and sighs.   
 
Nika just half-smiles at Arden and he just closes his eyes in defeat and sighs.   
  
''Women!''
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Women!
  
 
'''Rava:''' (to Arden)You do look like you have a bit of a headache.
 
'''Rava:''' (to Arden)You do look like you have a bit of a headache.
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'''Arden:''' Okay.<br>
 
'''Arden:''' Okay.<br>
  
We leave.  And on the way back to the ''Gift'', Rina asks the others:
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We leave.  And on the way back to the Gift, Rina asks the others:
  
 
'''Rina:''' Are any of you getting this weird vibe off that doctor? She was practically licking her whiskers over him.<br>
 
'''Rina:''' Are any of you getting this weird vibe off that doctor? She was practically licking her whiskers over him.<br>
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'''Arden:''' Does Blue Sun have a research facility on this station.<br>
 
'''Arden:''' Does Blue Sun have a research facility on this station.<br>
 
'''Director Samuels:''' What? Oh, no I didn’t mean Blue Sun, the company.  I meant Blue Sun, the system.  Our sponsors are looking into it. They’ve got a Research and Development Team out there.<br>
 
'''Director Samuels:''' What? Oh, no I didn’t mean Blue Sun, the company.  I meant Blue Sun, the system.  Our sponsors are looking into it. They’ve got a Research and Development Team out there.<br>
'''Arden:''' If there’s anything I or ''Summer’s Gift'', my ship, can do, please let me know.<br>
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'''Arden:''' If there’s anything I or Summer’s Gift, my ship, can do, please let me know.<br>
 
'''Director Samuels:''' Do you need a better berth or anything for them?<br>
 
'''Director Samuels:''' Do you need a better berth or anything for them?<br>
 
'''Arden:''' Tell you the truth, the best thing we can ask for is maybe some fuel.<br>
 
'''Arden:''' Tell you the truth, the best thing we can ask for is maybe some fuel.<br>
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The Director leaves. Arden considers their conversation and tries to get Rina on the comm.  Only there doesn’t appear to be a comm available.  He calls a nurse to ask for one and she says she’ll see what she can do.   
 
The Director leaves. Arden considers their conversation and tries to get Rina on the comm.  Only there doesn’t appear to be a comm available.  He calls a nurse to ask for one and she says she’ll see what she can do.   
  
Back on ''Summer’s Gift'', we find that our fuel charges have been reversed, neatly reimbursing our fueling costs.   
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Back on Summer’s Gift, we find that our fuel charges have been reversed, neatly reimbursing our fueling costs.   
  
 
Wow.   
 
Wow.   
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We are not going to argue.  Thank you, Pericles Station.
 
We are not going to argue.  Thank you, Pericles Station.
  
Back in the hospital, the nurse returns stating that she’s sorry but the local cortex in the hospital area doesn’t appear to be available right now.  Is there a message she could send to someone? Yes. If she could just send a message to ''Summer’s Gift'' to alert the crew that when they’re available, he’d like to see someone. Of course. Is there anything else he needs?  He’s fine, thank you, maybe another glass of water.
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Back in the hospital, the nurse returns stating that she’s sorry but the local cortex in the hospital area doesn’t appear to be available right now.  Is there a message she could send to someone? Yes. If she could just send a message to Summer’s Gift to alert the crew that when they’re available, he’d like to see someone. Of course. Is there anything else he needs?  He’s fine, thank you, maybe another glass of water.
  
Sure enough, a message goes through to the ''Gift''. It’s Dr. Rava.   
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Sure enough, a message goes through to the Gift. It’s Dr. Rava.   
  
'''Rava:''' Hello? Can I speak to somebody on the ''Summer’s Gift'', please?<br>
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'''Rava:''' Hello? Can I speak to somebody on the Summer’s Gift, please?<br>
 
'''Nika:''' (picking up) Yeah. This is Nika Earhart.  What can I do for you?<br>
 
'''Nika:''' (picking up) Yeah. This is Nika Earhart.  What can I do for you?<br>
 
'''Rava:''' This is Dr. Rava.  I’m trying to pass on a message from your Captain, Dr. Arden…<br>
 
'''Rava:''' This is Dr. Rava.  I’m trying to pass on a message from your Captain, Dr. Arden…<br>
  
Arden?  ''Captain?'' Oh, this we gotta hear!
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Arden?  Captain? Oh, this we gotta hear!
  
 
'''Nika:''' …Okay…?<br>
 
'''Nika:''' …Okay…?<br>
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She turns to Arden.
 
She turns to Arden.
  
'''Nika:''' How are you feeling, ''Captain'' Arden?<br>
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'''Nika:''' How are you feeling, Captain Arden?<br>
 
'''Arden:''' What?  Um….I’m feeling just fine and I wanted to let you know that the Director of the station is going to be taking care of our fuel costs, apparently.<br>
 
'''Arden:''' What?  Um….I’m feeling just fine and I wanted to let you know that the Director of the station is going to be taking care of our fuel costs, apparently.<br>
 
'''Nika:''' Yeah, we noticed that when we got back aboard.<br>
 
'''Nika:''' Yeah, we noticed that when we got back aboard.<br>
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'''Nika:''' That’s okay. I’ll go back and comm our thanks for the reversal of the charges.<br>
 
'''Nika:''' That’s okay. I’ll go back and comm our thanks for the reversal of the charges.<br>
 
'''Arden:''' I just wanted to let you know.  <br>
 
'''Arden:''' I just wanted to let you know.  <br>
'''Arden:''' I just wanted to let you know…about the… and… it apparently it happened but I want you to know what would happen if…but it already did, so you’d …know….already…so…''that’s'' why.<br>
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'''Arden:''' I just wanted to let you know…about the… and… it apparently it happened but I want you to know what would happen if…but it already did, so you’d …know….already…so…that’s why.<br>
  
 
Yes.  Thank you, Arden.
 
Yes.  Thank you, Arden.
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'''Nika:''' Do you want me to stay? I can stay here or I can have Joshua stay.<br>
 
'''Nika:''' Do you want me to stay? I can stay here or I can have Joshua stay.<br>
 
'''Arden:''' Just for a little while. It just feels…very weird being in this bed and I’m….<br>
 
'''Arden:''' Just for a little while. It just feels…very weird being in this bed and I’m….<br>
'''Nika:''' She’s a little ''odd.'' <br>
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'''Nika:''' She’s a little odd. <br>
 
'''Arden:''' Aaahhmmm…she’s a little awestruck.<br>
 
'''Arden:''' Aaahhmmm…she’s a little awestruck.<br>
 
'''Nika:''' Or she’s very young and not sure.<br>
 
'''Nika:''' Or she’s very young and not sure.<br>
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'''Rina:''' Oh, ma-aaaan, that’s swe-eeeet……<br>
 
'''Rina:''' Oh, ma-aaaan, that’s swe-eeeet……<br>
'''Nika:''' Well, we’re headed towards Highgate anyway and I didn’t mention it earlier but ''Decatur'' dropped a message and so hopefully we’ll be able to run into them at Highgate.  And they might have more information for us on that. In the meantime, you might be able to check on some rumor mills and see what you can come up with.<br>
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'''Nika:''' Well, we’re headed towards Highgate anyway and I didn’t mention it earlier but Decatur dropped a message and so hopefully we’ll be able to run into them at Highgate.  And they might have more information for us on that. In the meantime, you might be able to check on some rumor mills and see what you can come up with.<br>
 
'''Rina:''' (softly) Awesome news. Yeah.  Will do.<br>
 
'''Rina:''' (softly) Awesome news. Yeah.  Will do.<br>
  
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And you can just see the wheels start spinning in her head, shooting off into her own little Rina-Land of shiny possibilities.
 
And you can just see the wheels start spinning in her head, shooting off into her own little Rina-Land of shiny possibilities.
  
'''Nika:''' ''Focus here, darlin’''.<br>
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'''Nika:''' Focus here, darlin’.<br>
 
'''Rina:''' (snapping to) Yeah.<br>
 
'''Rina:''' (snapping to) Yeah.<br>
 
'''Nika:''' Two hours.  Gimme two hours.  I’ll sit with Arden that long. If you need anything, you’re going to have to send a runner. The comm systems don’t work inside, I guess.  Or something.  I don’t know what’s going on with that.  I don’t know if she just didn’t want Arden to get on the comm or what. You know….Whatever.<br>
 
'''Nika:''' Two hours.  Gimme two hours.  I’ll sit with Arden that long. If you need anything, you’re going to have to send a runner. The comm systems don’t work inside, I guess.  Or something.  I don’t know what’s going on with that.  I don’t know if she just didn’t want Arden to get on the comm or what. You know….Whatever.<br>

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