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'''Nika:''' Connelly.  Tell me what the protocols are when all the alarms go off, what is the first thing that happens down in the munitions bays. Do they lock down?  What happens?<br>
 
'''Nika:''' Connelly.  Tell me what the protocols are when all the alarms go off, what is the first thing that happens down in the munitions bays. Do they lock down?  What happens?<br>
  
God forbid should someone steal a nuke.  Or set the damn thing off while still aboard ''Decatur''.
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God forbid should someone steal a nuke.  Or set the damn thing off while still aboard Decatur.
  
 
'''Brian:''' I don’t know. It’s not exactly my field. I’m a Tactical Officer, not a Security Officer. I’m guessing yeah, the bulkheads would lock. It’s possible the fire suppression systems would come on.<br>
 
'''Brian:''' I don’t know. It’s not exactly my field. I’m a Tactical Officer, not a Security Officer. I’m guessing yeah, the bulkheads would lock. It’s possible the fire suppression systems would come on.<br>
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'''Nika:''' If you were to blow the alarms, what would be your goal? What would be the first thing you would try to do to create chaos here?<br>
 
'''Nika:''' If you were to blow the alarms, what would be your goal? What would be the first thing you would try to do to create chaos here?<br>
 
'''Rina:''' Lock down the ship.<br>
 
'''Rina:''' Lock down the ship.<br>
'''Nika:''' That’s what they just did.  Paranoid Schizo-Woman. ''Tell me what happens.'' If you want to lock down the ship and get all of these people out of your way, what would you take? What would you be trying to do?<br>
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'''Nika:''' That’s what they just did.  Paranoid Schizo-Woman. Tell me what happens. If you want to lock down the ship and get all of these people out of your way, what would you take? What would you be trying to do?<br>
  
 
No hesitation from Rina.
 
No hesitation from Rina.
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Paranoid Schizo-Woman much?
 
Paranoid Schizo-Woman much?
  
'''Nika:''' ''Harry.'' Are there any passageways to get us down there through the lockdown?<br>
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'''Nika:''' Harry.  Are there any passageways to get us down there through the lockdown?<br>
 
'''Harry:''' Nika.  The automatic bulkheads have sealed. Nobody’s getting anywhere.<br>
 
'''Harry:''' Nika.  The automatic bulkheads have sealed. Nobody’s getting anywhere.<br>
 
'''Rina:''' Atmo vents. Sub-ceilings.<br>
 
'''Rina:''' Atmo vents. Sub-ceilings.<br>
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Brian goes over to a locker near the command console and entering a code into the lcok, opens it up. It’s a weapons locker and he starts yanking weapons, including grenades.  Rina eyes them enviously.
 
Brian goes over to a locker near the command console and entering a code into the lcok, opens it up. It’s a weapons locker and he starts yanking weapons, including grenades.  Rina eyes them enviously.
  
'''Rina:''' Grenades. Now look at that.  Now why can’t we do that? <br>
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Rina: Grenades. Now look at that.  Now why can’t we do that? <br>
'''Arden:''' Cuz we’re not a Naval ship.<br>
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Arden: Cuz we’re not a Naval ship.<br>
'''Rina:''' (turning back to her hack) Like that’s ever stopped us before.<br>
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Rina: (turning back to her hack) Like that’s ever stopped us before.<br>
  
 
Harry and the intelligence officer are furiously working through the manual to bypass the door controls.  Had this been Harbinger, it would have taken maybe a minute.  Decatur, however, is a larger and a vastly more complex ship and her current crew have had her for only about a year.  Hence the manuals.  Nika eyeballs Harry and calls out to her.
 
Harry and the intelligence officer are furiously working through the manual to bypass the door controls.  Had this been Harbinger, it would have taken maybe a minute.  Decatur, however, is a larger and a vastly more complex ship and her current crew have had her for only about a year.  Hence the manuals.  Nika eyeballs Harry and calls out to her.
  
'''Nika:''' Commander?  I have an expert hacker over here. (to Arden) I don’t care what Connelly says. Help her.  I’ll keep Connelly busy. (to Brian) I know we’re not security personnel but at least let us help, okay? Rick is downstairs.  And he’s not armed, because we came aboard unarmed.<br>
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Nika: Commander?  I have an expert hacker over here. (to Arden) I don’t care what Connelly says. Help her.  I’ll keep Connelly busy. (to Brian) I know we’re not security personnel but at least let us help, okay? Rick is downstairs.  And he’s not armed, because we came aboard unarmed.<br>
  
 
Arden and Joshua move to help, Arden to hack and Joshua to pore over the manuals. Brian considers it for a split second.
 
Arden and Joshua move to help, Arden to hack and Joshua to pore over the manuals. Brian considers it for a split second.
  
'''Brian:''' Harry, they might be waiting for an opportunity for the computer systems to be opened.  Have you thought about that?<br>
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Brian: Harry, they might be waiting for an opportunity for the computer systems to be opened.  Have you thought about that?<br>
'''Harry:''' Yes, that’s true.  That is a possibility.<br>
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Harry: Yes, that’s true.  That is a possibility.<br>
'''Nika:''' Or they could be getting ready to blow us to hell.<br>
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Nika: Or they could be getting ready to blow us to hell.<br>
'''Brian:''' Well, it could be both, but if you break down security—<br>
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Brian: Well, it could be both, but if you break down security—<br>
'''Arden:''' If they’re trying to get into the system they wouldn’t have tripped the security protocols to make it harder to get into the system.<br>
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Arden: If they’re trying to get into the system they wouldn’t have tripped the security protocols to make it harder to get into the system.<br>
'''Brian:''' No, but it puts everyone on an even playing field.<br>
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Brian: No, but it puts everyone on an even playing field.<br>
  
 
Arden’s not entirely convinced and Brian moves to cut him off before Arden can make it to the computer systems. Nika intercepts Brian.
 
Arden’s not entirely convinced and Brian moves to cut him off before Arden can make it to the computer systems. Nika intercepts Brian.
  
'''Nika:''' ''He can do this,'' okay?<br>
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Nika: ''He can do this,'' okay?<br>
'''Brian:''' Forgive me if I’m not 100% confident in what the side effects of what he does might be. If you unlock the system—<br>
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Brian: Forgive me if I’m not 100% confident in what the side effects of what he does might be. If you unlock the system—<br>
'''Nika:''' Do you want to die?  Did you want to die? Did you want me to leave you there, on the ground, bleeding out?<br>
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Nika: Do you want to die?  Did you want to die? Did you want me to leave you there, on the ground, bleeding out?<br>
'''Brian:''' I ''am'' dying.<br>
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Brian: I ''am'' dying.<br>
'''Nika:''' Is ''this'' the time or place?  Really?<br>
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Nika: Is ''this'' the time or place?  Really?<br>
  
 
Talk about dying later.  Work on living now.  Then again…
 
Talk about dying later.  Work on living now.  Then again…
  
'''Nika:''' If you want to have this fight right now, standing on the bridge, we can do that.<br>
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Nika: If you want to have this fight right now, standing on the bridge, we can do that.<br>
  
 
Brian looks ready to chew nails and Harry goes up to him and puts a hand on his shoulder.
 
Brian looks ready to chew nails and Harry goes up to him and puts a hand on his shoulder.
  
'''Harry:''' Remember your blood pressure.<br>
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Harry: Remember your blood pressure.<br>
  
 
Brian’s expression changes and steeling himself, he turns away to stand over Rina to watch what she’s doing with the door controls.  Harry returns to the computer screen, intensely focused on what she sees there, and says softly to Nika at her side.
 
Brian’s expression changes and steeling himself, he turns away to stand over Rina to watch what she’s doing with the door controls.  Harry returns to the computer screen, intensely focused on what she sees there, and says softly to Nika at her side.
  
'''Harry:''' One of the side effects of Brian’s treatment was a thinning of the blood vessels in his brain. If his blood pressure gets too high, they’ll burst and he’ll die. (A pause) It may have caused some other psychological effects.<br>
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Harry: One of the side effects of Brian’s treatment was a thinning of the blood vessels in his brain. If his blood pressure gets too high, they’ll burst and he’ll die. (A pause) It may have caused some other psychological effects.<br>
'''Nika:''' Ya think?<br>
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Nika: Ya think?<br>
'''Harry:''' He’s alive.  As you said.<br>
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Harry: He’s alive.  As you said.<br>
'''Nika:''' And he’s pissed. I don’t blame him for that. I’ll remember that when we have that conversation later.  Thank you.<br>
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Nika: And he’s pissed. I don’t blame him for that. I’ll remember that when we have that conversation later.  Thank you.<br>
'''Arden:''' And many many Quaaludes.<br>
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Arden: And many many Quaaludes.<br>
  
 
Nika looks at Arden and thrusts a finger at the computer.
 
Nika looks at Arden and thrusts a finger at the computer.
  
'''Nika:''' ''Get us in''.<br>
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Nika: ''Get us in''.<br>
  
  
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Rick puts the comms on, hoping to find the other saboteurs chatting to each other. He hears a calm voice saying:
 
Rick puts the comms on, hoping to find the other saboteurs chatting to each other. He hears a calm voice saying:
  
'''Saboteur:''' We have accessed Section 11-F.  This should be the one.  Everything okay up there, Alpha?<br>  
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Saboteur: We have accessed Section 11-F.  This should be the one.  Everything okay up there, Alpha?<br>  
'''Rick:''' Yes.<br>
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Rick: Yes.<br>
  
 
Rick uses all the showmanship he’s got to passably imitate the man he’s just taken out.  Apparently he’s successful, because the man at the other end continues as if nothing is amiss.
 
Rick uses all the showmanship he’s got to passably imitate the man he’s just taken out.  Apparently he’s successful, because the man at the other end continues as if nothing is amiss.
  
'''Saboteur:''' No time for nerves. Don’t let those alarms bother you.  We’ll be in and out of here in two minutes.  You just wait.  Just like in simulation.<br>
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Saboteur: No time for nerves. Don’t let those alarms bother you.  We’ll be in and out of here in two minutes.  You just wait.  Just like in simulation.<br>
  
 
Rick recalls what he’d seen when taking the clothes off the look-out.  The man was ripped, clearly a martial arts master, and Rick gets the feeling that these guys have done more than just simulations.  If Rick hadn’t literally gotten the drop on the guy, chances are very good the guy would have mopped the floor with him.  Luckily that was not the case and now Rick is in a position to listen in on the others and try to head them off.
 
Rick recalls what he’d seen when taking the clothes off the look-out.  The man was ripped, clearly a martial arts master, and Rick gets the feeling that these guys have done more than just simulations.  If Rick hadn’t literally gotten the drop on the guy, chances are very good the guy would have mopped the floor with him.  Luckily that was not the case and now Rick is in a position to listen in on the others and try to head them off.
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Rick draws back around the corner and starts scanning for a channel to the bridge on his stolen comms.  He finds a public/all-ship channel.  A man’s voice fills it and it’s obviously not a recording, but a live person on a live mike. Going by his military experience, Rick judges it’s not an officer but an enlisted on the line.
 
Rick draws back around the corner and starts scanning for a channel to the bridge on his stolen comms.  He finds a public/all-ship channel.  A man’s voice fills it and it’s obviously not a recording, but a live person on a live mike. Going by his military experience, Rick judges it’s not an officer but an enlisted on the line.
  
'''Man:'' We have ascertained this is not an emergency. It’s a computer malfunction.  Everyone stay where you are. We are not expecting any danger.  If you wish to return to your ships, the doors are sealed now so you’re going to have to wait.  I suggest you all get comfortable.<br>
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Man: We have ascertained this is not an emergency. It’s a computer malfunction.  Everyone stay where you are. We are not expecting any danger.  If you wish to return to your ships, the doors are sealed now so you’re going to have to wait.  I suggest you all get comfortable.<br>
  
 
Rick breaks into the channel.
 
Rick breaks into the channel.
  
'''Rick:''' I need to speak to one of the military officers—<br>
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Rick:  I need to speak to one of the military officers—<br>
'''Man:''' Who am I talking to?<br>
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Man: Who am I talking to?<br>
'''Rick:''' I cannot get on a different channel.  I need to speak to one of the officers now.<br>
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Rick: I cannot get on a different channel.  I need to speak to one of the officers now.<br>
'''Man:''' Who am I talking to?<br>
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Man: Who am I talking to?<br>
'''Rick:''' I just need to speak to one of the military officers.<br>
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Rick: I just need to speak to one of the military officers.<br>
  
 
Rick can hear the man at the other end of the mike pause and then answer back in a whisper.
 
Rick can hear the man at the other end of the mike pause and then answer back in a whisper.
  
'''Man:''' There’s nobody else here. I’m assuming that this isn’t a real emergency.  I just told everybody that it wasn’t. How are we doing? Is the ship gonna blow up? Is there a fire on board?  I mean, we might get one of the doors to the ship open. I’ve got like, thirty-five people here.<br>
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Man: There’s nobody else here. I’m assuming that this isn’t a real emergency.  I just told everybody that it wasn’t. How are we doing? Is the ship gonna blow up? Is there a fire on board?  I mean, we might get one of the doors to the ship open. I’ve got like, thirty-five people here.<br>
  
 
You have to give the man credit for taking control of the situation, even at the expense of a lie that could bite him in the ass later.  Thirty-five people locked in a room, stampeding with nowhere to go, could turn into a meat grinder in a flash.  Rick answers back just as quietly.
 
You have to give the man credit for taking control of the situation, even at the expense of a lie that could bite him in the ass later.  Thirty-five people locked in a room, stampeding with nowhere to go, could turn into a meat grinder in a flash.  Rick answers back just as quietly.
  
'''Rick:''' It’s a false emergency as of right now.  But I know where the people that are attempting to break into the systems at the moment so I need to talk to someone who knows the layout of the ship, so they can tell me what is in the munitions door these people are trying to go through.  It’s in Section 11-F.<br>
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Rick: It’s a false emergency as of right now.  But I know where the people that are attempting to break into the systems at the moment so I need to talk to someone who knows the layout of the ship, so they can tell me what is in the munitions door these people are trying to go through.  It’s in Section 11-F.<br>
'''Man:''' Okay….um.  The communications systems are going haywire, they’ve taken over every frequency with these alarms, the automated alarms.  But…<br>
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Man: Okay….um.  The communications systems are going haywire, they’ve taken over every frequency with these alarms, the automated alarms.  But…<br>
'''Rick:''' Is there anyone with you that is familiar with the ship or who knows what Section 11-F is? Can you ask them and then tell me?<br>
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Rick: Is there anyone with you that is familiar with the ship or who knows what Section 11-F is? Can you ask them and then tell me?<br>
'''Man:''' I’ll go check. I don’t want to alert anybody by yelling ‘ammunitions’.<br>
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Man: I’ll go check. I don’t want to alert anybody by yelling ‘ammunitions’.<br>
'''Rick:''' Yeah, yeah.<br>
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Rick: Yeah, yeah.<br>
'''Man:''' I’ll get back to you. Stay where you are,… or, you know, just wait.  I’ll get back to you.<br>
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Man: I’ll get back to you. Stay where you are,… or, you know, just wait.  I’ll get back to you.<br>
  
 
Rick peeks around the corner to see if the other saboteurs overheard the conversation over their comms and nope, the others are still trying to push through the hack.  Rick notices the sound quality on his purloined comms is much better than ours.  The effect is surprisingly subtle, with the sound seeming to come from inside the wearer’s head, so finely calibrated are the ear pieces.  Rick notes the saboteurs’ channel and the all-ship channel and swaps back and forth between them to make sure he’s got them down, then switches back to the all-ship to wait for further word.
 
Rick peeks around the corner to see if the other saboteurs overheard the conversation over their comms and nope, the others are still trying to push through the hack.  Rick notices the sound quality on his purloined comms is much better than ours.  The effect is surprisingly subtle, with the sound seeming to come from inside the wearer’s head, so finely calibrated are the ear pieces.  Rick notes the saboteurs’ channel and the all-ship channel and swaps back and forth between them to make sure he’s got them down, then switches back to the all-ship to wait for further word.
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Back on the bridge, Arden susses there’s a way to access the data he needs without breaking into the system, legally as it were, as well as breaking it open.  Trying to find the legitimate way in would be time-consuming but possible.  As he’s mapping the path he needs, Nika leans over to Harry.
 
Back on the bridge, Arden susses there’s a way to access the data he needs without breaking into the system, legally as it were, as well as breaking it open.  Trying to find the legitimate way in would be time-consuming but possible.  As he’s mapping the path he needs, Nika leans over to Harry.
  
'''Nika:''' Harry, do you mean to tell me that your security personnel don’t have emergency overrides for doors that have trapped people inside? ''Serious oversight''.<br>
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Nika: Harry, do you mean to tell me that your security personnel don’t have emergency overrides for doors that have trapped people inside? ''Serious oversight''.<br>
'''Harry:''' You don’t have doors open to a vacuum that you can just open with a security code.<br>
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Harry: You don’t have doors open to a vacuum that you can just open with a security code.<br>
'''Nika:''' Right, but if they come down accidentally, doesn’t the security quartermaster have security overrides for that?<br>
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Nika: Right, but if they come down accidentally, doesn’t the security quartermaster have security overrides for that?<br>
'''Harry:''' Yes.  If the doors lock automatically, we can unlock them. Unless the ship is telling us that there’s poisonous gas, vacuum, or other things on the other side of it. It’s to protect people from killing themselves.<br>
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Harry:  Yes.  If the doors lock automatically, we can unlock them. Unless the ship is telling us that there’s poisonous gas, vacuum, or other things on the other side of it. It’s to protect people from killing themselves.<br>
'''Nika:''' (dryly)Yes.<br>
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Nika: (dryly)Yes.<br>
'''Harry:''' (snaps) ''It’s an Alliance ship!  I didn’t build it!'<br>
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Harry: (snaps) ''It’s an Alliance ship!  I didn’t build it!'<br>
  
 
Harry never loses it.  ''Never.''  Nika just gives Harry the look.
 
Harry never loses it.  ''Never.''  Nika just gives Harry the look.
  
'''Harry:''' You don’t know the smarts of the typical Alliance security guy is.  You don’t want them opening doors of airlocks into space.<br>
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Harry: You don’t know the smarts of the typical Alliance security guy is.  You don’t want them opening doors of airlocks into space.<br>
'''Joshua:''' (quietly) Do we really have time for this argument?  I mean, really?<br>
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Joshua: (quietly) Do we really have time for this argument?  I mean, really?<br>
'''Nika:''' I’m just asking!<br>
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Nika: I’m just asking!<br>
'''Joshua:''' I know you are.  But.<br>
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Joshua: I know you are.  But.<br>
  
 
Arden pipes up from the terminal.
 
Arden pipes up from the terminal.
  
'''Arden:''' Is there a way to clear out the invalid messages to the ship?<br>
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Arden: Is there a way to clear out the invalid messages to the ship?<br>
'''Harry:''' A way to clear out invalid messages?<br>
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Harry: A way to clear out invalid messages?<br>
'''Arden:''' Somewhere messages are coming to the ship telling it that this-and-this is bad and this-and-this is going to happen. Is there a way to filter that out so it will only take the proper access code rather than the all-alerts?<br>
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Arden: Somewhere messages are coming to the ship telling it that this-and-this is bad and this-and-this is going to happen. Is there a way to filter that out so it will only take the proper access code rather than the all-alerts?<br>
'''Harry:''' You can basically use the same technique that Cassandra uses to tell us that things are going haywire to tell her everything’s fine.  So you might actually be able to capture the Cassandra and point-by-point you can probably make a path through the system. You couldn’t shut down everything on the ship.<br>
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Harry: You can basically use the same technique that Cassandra uses to tell us that things are going haywire to tell her everything’s fine.  So you might actually be able to capture the Cassandra and point-by-point you can probably make a path through the system. You couldn’t shut down everything on the ship.<br>
  
 
Then that’s what Arden’s going to do.  Starting with the hatch codes from the bridge to the munitions deck.  He starts looking for the most efficient path between the two locations.  Across the bridge, Rina gets that bulkhead door open to the corridor just outside.  It goes left and right and she sees there are doors sealed at either end.
 
Then that’s what Arden’s going to do.  Starting with the hatch codes from the bridge to the munitions deck.  He starts looking for the most efficient path between the two locations.  Across the bridge, Rina gets that bulkhead door open to the corridor just outside.  It goes left and right and she sees there are doors sealed at either end.
  
'''Rina:''' Nika. ''Door''.<br>
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Rina: Nika. ''Door''.<br>
'''Nika:''' Hit the next one.<br>
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Nika: Hit the next one.<br>
'''Rina:''' All right.  Can I get a gun?<br>
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Rina: All right.  Can I get a gun?<br>
  
 
Rina gets moving to the next door. Brian moves to follow Rina.
 
Rina gets moving to the next door. Brian moves to follow Rina.
  
'''Brian:''' If you could move to that door over there—<br>
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Brian: If you could move to that door over there—<br>
'''Rina:''' Why?<br>
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Rina: Why?<br>
'''Brian:''' Weapons locker.<br>
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Brian: Weapons locker.<br>
'''Rina:''' Can I get a gun?<br>
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Rina: Can I get a gun?<br>
'''Brian:''' Maybe.<br>
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Brian: Maybe.<br>
'''Rina:''' Tell you what.  I open the door, I get a gun.<br>
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Rina: Tell you what.  I open the door, I get a gun.<br>
'''Brian:''' Fair enough.<br>
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Brian: Fair enough.<br>
  
 
Rina gets to work on the weapons locker. Nika comes up behind Brian and takes the gun off his belt.
 
Rina gets to work on the weapons locker. Nika comes up behind Brian and takes the gun off his belt.
  
'''Nika:''' (to Brian) You’re gonna give me one, too. <br>
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Nika: (to Brian) You’re gonna give me one, too. <br>
'''Brian:''' When the door opens.<br>
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Brian: When the door opens.<br>
'''Nika:''' Okay.  (gives gun back)<br>
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Nika: Okay.  (gives gun back)<br>
'''Brian:''' I don’t know…<br>
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Brian: I don’t know…<br>
'''Nika:''' Grenades would be more fun.<br>
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Nika: Grenades would be more fun.<br>
'''Brian:''' You haven’t been very cooperative so far, so I’m not so sure. You’re a little bossy, Nika.<br>
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Brian:  You haven’t been very cooperative so far, so I’m not so sure. You’re a little bossy, Nika.<br>
'''Joshua:''' For God’s sake.<br>
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Joshua: For God’s sake.<br>
  
 
He’s followed Brian, Nika, and Rina off the bridge and points to each of them, respectively.
 
He’s followed Brian, Nika, and Rina off the bridge and points to each of them, respectively.
  
'''Joshua:''' You’re military, you’re supposed to be military at one point, and you’re just Goddamned paranoid. Why are you frikkin’ arguing?<br>  
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Joshua: You’re military, you’re supposed to be military at one point, and you’re just Goddamned paranoid. Why are you frikkin’ arguing?<br>  
'''Nika:''' (to Brian) You were the one who picked a fight on the bridge.<br>
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Nika: (to Brian) You were the one who picked a fight on the bridge.<br>
'''Joshua:''' Leave it alone.  Just leave it alone.<br>
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Joshua: Leave it alone.  Just leave it alone.<br>
'''Nika:''' (wryly) Have you not figured this is how we blow off stress yet, Joshua?<br>
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Nika: (wryly) Have you not figured this is how we blow off stress yet, Joshua?<br>
'''Joshua:''' Yes, I have but it’s really pissing me off at the moment.<br>
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Joshua: Yes, I have but it’s really pissing me off at the moment.<br>
'''Nika:''' You know, it could’ve been worse, Joshua.  In the old days, we’d be taking advantage of the lull between doors to make out against the bulkhead.<br>  
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Nika: You know, it could’ve been worse, Joshua.  In the old days, we’d be taking advantage of the lull between doors to make out against the bulkhead.<br>  
'''Joshua:''' Feel free. Go right ahead.<br>
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Joshua: Feel free. Go right ahead.<br>
  
 
On her knees at door to the gun locker, Rina just eyerolls the entire exchange and keeps on hacking the lock.
 
On her knees at door to the gun locker, Rina just eyerolls the entire exchange and keeps on hacking the lock.

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