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We find Iskariot.  He didn’t go far.  He’s in the vineyard, walking and talking to himself. Rick was scouting ahead of Rina and the others, so Rick catches up with the errant Shepherd first.  They talk.
 
We find Iskariot.  He didn’t go far.  He’s in the vineyard, walking and talking to himself. Rick was scouting ahead of Rina and the others, so Rick catches up with the errant Shepherd first.  They talk.
  
'''Iskariot:''' What is it that I can do for you, sir?<br>
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Iskariot: What is it that I can do for you, sir?<br>
  
 
Rick tells him about the cure for the Prion disease.
 
Rick tells him about the cure for the Prion disease.
 
   
 
   
'''Iskariot:''' Mmm-hm. I assumed it would be cured eventually.  It only makes sense.<br>
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Iskariot: Mmm-hm. I assumed it would be cured eventually.  It only makes sense.<br>
'''Rick:''' So…you just want to die from the Prion disease and you think that that would be your penance.<br>
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Rick: So…you just want to die from the Prion disease and you think that that would be your penance.<br>
'''Iskariot:''' I did kill people with Prion disease. I did horrible things. I am a monster and need to be destroyed.<br>
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Iskariot: I did kill people with Prion disease. I did horrible things. I am a monster and need to be destroyed.<br>
'''Rick:''' I’m not for or against you being destroyed, but don’t you think you should spend more time atoning for your sins?<br>
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Rick: I’m not for or against you being destroyed, but don’t you think you should spend more time atoning for your sins?<br>
'''Iskariot:''' Yes, I probably….if I am to be redeemed somehow through my actions, I would have to spend a considerable amount of time.  More than my lifetime, it’s possible.  Especially my now-shortened lifetime.  But I’m sure that…(breathes a laugh) … that it’s impossible for me to be redeemed in this regard.<br>
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Iskariot: Yes, I probably….if I am to be redeemed somehow through my actions, I would have to spend a considerable amount of time.  More than my lifetime, it’s possible.  Especially my now-shortened lifetime.  But I’m sure that…(breathes a laugh) … that it’s impossible for me to be redeemed in this regard.<br>
  
 
The others have caught up with them and Arden hears the last half of Iskariot’s statement.
 
The others have caught up with them and Arden hears the last half of Iskariot’s statement.
  
'''Arden:''' It’s no reason not to try. <br>
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Arden: It’s no reason not to try. <br>
'''Joshua:''' (murmuring) You’re right, there. <br>
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Joshua: (murmuring) You’re right, there. <br>
'''Iskariot:''' My concern is that… being the monster that I am, that if I live much longer, I might decide that I ought to continue to live.<br>
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Iskariot: My concern is that… being the monster that I am, that if I live much longer, I might decide that I ought to continue to live.<br>
'''Rick:''' But do you think you ought to continue to live and return to the life of being a monster? Or…just continue to live because that’s what humans want to do? <br>
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Rick: But do you think you ought to continue to live and return to the life of being a monster? Or…just continue to live because that’s what humans want to do? <br>
'''Iskariot:''' You think I’m not a monster now? Do you know what I ''did'' to those people?<br>
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Iskariot: You think I’m not a monster now? Do you know what I ''did'' to those people?<br>
'''Rick:''' Do I know what you did to those people with the Prion disease? <br>
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Rick: Do I know what you did to those people with the Prion disease? <br>
'''Iskariot:''' ''Yes''.<br>
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Iskariot: ''Yes''.<br>
'''Rick:''' You told us about it, yes.<br>
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Rick: You told us about it, yes.<br>
'''Iskariot:''' Isn’t that monstrous to you?<br>
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Iskariot: Isn’t that monstrous to you?<br>
'''Rick:''' I….do think that it is monstrous, yes.<br>
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Rick: I….do think that it is monstrous, yes.<br>
'''Iskariot:''' Yes, and these were innocent helpless victims. And ''I used'' them.<br>
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Iskariot: Yes, and these were innocent helpless victims. And ''I used'' them.<br>
'''Rick:''' Why did you choose to do that?<br>
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Rick: Why did you choose to do that?<br>
'''Iskariot:''' I saw advantage to it. I saw potential weakness….and I decided it might be worth the effort, since they were going to die anyway.  But it is a careless disregard of the value of human life.  I’m clearly not redeemed in that regard.<br>
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Iskariot: I saw advantage to it. I saw potential weakness….and I decided it might be worth the effort, since they were going to die anyway.  But it is a careless disregard of the value of human life.  I’m clearly not redeemed in that regard.<br>
'''Rick:''' So you haven’t really learned anything from the experience that brought you to become a Shepherd.<br>
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Rick: So you haven’t really learned anything from the experience that brought you to become a Shepherd.<br>
'''Iskariot:''' Uhnn.<br>
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Iskariot: Uhnn.<br>
'''Rick:''' Other than to turn your back to the death and destruction you were a part of before, but only for a new kind of death and destruction.<br>
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Rick: Other than to turn your back to the death and destruction you were a part of before, but only for a new kind of death and destruction.<br>
'''Iskariot:''' Were I to merely tend to the flock, as I did a little bit of while I was here, and suppose did that for the rest of my life, would I have paid off my debt.<br>
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Iskariot:  Were I to merely tend to the flock, as I did a little bit of while I was here, and suppose did that for the rest of my life, would I have paid off my debt.<br>
'''Rick:''' No, but you don’t have to just tend to the flock. There are plenty of other things you can be a part of. <br>   
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Rick: No, but you don’t have to just tend to the flock. There are plenty of other things you can be a part of. <br>   
'''Iskariot:''' (skeptically) I could do what?<br>
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Iskariot: (skeptically) I could do what?<br>
  
 
Despite Arden’s earlier comment, Iskariot just now becomes aware that the rest of us as Rick replies.
 
Despite Arden’s earlier comment, Iskariot just now becomes aware that the rest of us as Rick replies.
  
'''Rick:''' I mean, the Verse is in disarray at the moment. and there’s plenty of opportunity for good. So it wouldn’t simply be tending a flock, unless that’s what you wanted to do. You don’t have to be a Shepherd to do good. And many people atone for their sins through different means, other than to become a Shepherd.<br>
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Rick: I mean, the Verse is in disarray at the moment. and there’s plenty of opportunity for good. So it wouldn’t simply be tending a flock, unless that’s what you wanted to do. You don’t have to be a Shepherd to do good. And many people atone for their sins through different means, other than to become a Shepherd.<br>
'''Arden:''' Or sacrificing themselves.<br>
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Arden: Or sacrificing themselves.<br>
'''Iskariot:''' You’re saying that my efforts are not the only way I might do some lasting good.<br>
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Iskariot: You’re saying that my efforts are not the only way I might do some lasting good.<br>
  
 
It’s not a question.  
 
It’s not a question.  
  
'''Rick:''' Yes.  I mean, clearly you think that your efforts were not that good, if you feel that you’ve exploited people in a horrible way to gain some slight advantage against Reavers.<br>
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Rick: Yes.  I mean, clearly you think that your efforts were not that good, if you feel that you’ve exploited people in a horrible way to gain some slight advantage against Reavers.<br>
'''Iskariot:''' Oh.  Well.  That was nothing. My crimes go far beyond that.<br>
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Iskariot: Oh.  Well.  That was nothing. My crimes go far beyond that.<br>
  
 
''Nothing?''  He fed incapacitated people, ''alive'', to the ''Reavers''.  Is there a point more horrible, more criminal beyond that?
 
''Nothing?''  He fed incapacitated people, ''alive'', to the ''Reavers''.  Is there a point more horrible, more criminal beyond that?
  
'''Iskariot:''' But I think you may be right, Rick Allen.  You may have… shown me something. There might be something that I can do that might provide lasting good. I haven’t been a true believer in Providence.  Perhaps, this late in my life, it’s not a coincidence….<br>
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Iskariot:  But I think you may be right, Rick Allen.  You may have… shown me something. There might be something that I can do that might provide lasting good. I haven’t been a true believer in Providence.  Perhaps, this late in my life, it’s not a coincidence….<br>
  
 
Iskariot turns around and his eyes slide to Joshua. Recalling the accusations he’s thrown at Joshua’s head, everyone else tenses. Is he going to attack Joshua? Cue the creepy music….!
 
Iskariot turns around and his eyes slide to Joshua. Recalling the accusations he’s thrown at Joshua’s head, everyone else tenses. Is he going to attack Joshua? Cue the creepy music….!
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Joshua starts to laugh, either from droll amusement despite the situation or perhaps from the tension.  Regardless, Rina slips into a ready stance.  She’s packing and her arms are crossed, her right hand inside her coveralls gripping her gun for a quick draw.  Iskariot’s gaze moves off Joshua and onto her and he regards her for a moment, as if sizing her up.  She stares right back, refusing to back down.
 
Joshua starts to laugh, either from droll amusement despite the situation or perhaps from the tension.  Regardless, Rina slips into a ready stance.  She’s packing and her arms are crossed, her right hand inside her coveralls gripping her gun for a quick draw.  Iskariot’s gaze moves off Joshua and onto her and he regards her for a moment, as if sizing her up.  She stares right back, refusing to back down.
 
    
 
    
'''Joshua:''' This just cracks me up, like….I’m sorry….(getting a grip)… To be honest….no, I’m not going to be honest in this situation….I’m sorry. <br>
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Joshua: This just cracks me up, like….I’m sorry….(getting a grip)… To be honest….no, I’m not going to be honest in this situation….I’m sorry. <br>
  
 
Rick tries to defuse the stand-off.
 
Rick tries to defuse the stand-off.
  
'''Rick:''' You can’t decide if someone can redeem themselves or not.<br>
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Rick: You can’t decide if someone can redeem themselves or not.<br>
'''Joshua:''' (to Rick) You really haven’t been listening to him at all, have you? This man’s sin clearly was hubris. It was like, oh gosh, if I could only, like, if I could toil with the flock… like, I’ll never redeem myself.  Like… (a beat)… Selfish bastard.<br>
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Joshua: (to Rick) You really haven’t been listening to him at all, have you? This man’s sin clearly was hubris. It was like, oh gosh, if I could only, like, if I could toil with the flock… like, I’ll never redeem myself.  Like…. (a beat)… Selfish bastard.<br>
  
 
Strong words, coming from Joshua. Rick pushes on, fastening on something that Iskariot had said back at the Sanctuary.  
 
Strong words, coming from Joshua. Rick pushes on, fastening on something that Iskariot had said back at the Sanctuary.  
  
'''Rick:''' You said ‘one of them’.  You said one of them had already redeemed themselves and that’s what inspired you to change your ways. Why can’t another?<br>
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Rick: You said ‘one of them’.  You said one of them had already redeemed themselves and that’s what inspired you to change your ways. Why can’t another?<br>
'''Iskariot:''' No, no. She ''escaped''.<br>
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Iskariot:  No, no. She ''escaped''.<br>
'''Rick:''' Yes, but she broke everything that she was supposed to be, did she not? That’s what you made it sound like. So…?<br>
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Rick: Yes, but she broke everything that she was supposed to be, did she not? That’s what you made it sound like. So…?<br>
'''Iskariot:''' Perhaps better than I….all right…<br>
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Iskariot: Perhaps better than I….all right…<br>
  
 
Joshua’s kept his eye on Iskariot, reading all the subtle (and not so subtle) tells of body language and tone.  He goes into total defensive mode, certain that Iskariot is going to try something against him. Joshua’s not entirely defenseless.  He’s trained in Aikido.  
 
Joshua’s kept his eye on Iskariot, reading all the subtle (and not so subtle) tells of body language and tone.  He goes into total defensive mode, certain that Iskariot is going to try something against him. Joshua’s not entirely defenseless.  He’s trained in Aikido.  
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Iskariot makes his move against Joshua.  Joshua dodges.  Iskariot misses.  Meanwhile, Arden is going through his medical bag, loading up a sedative for injection. Rina draws her gun and brings it up, sighting on Iskariot.
 
Iskariot makes his move against Joshua.  Joshua dodges.  Iskariot misses.  Meanwhile, Arden is going through his medical bag, loading up a sedative for injection. Rina draws her gun and brings it up, sighting on Iskariot.
  
'''Rina:''' (to Iskariot) ''Don’t move''.<br>
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Rina: (to Iskariot) ''Don’t move''.<br>
  
 
Standing behind Iskariot, Rick again tried to talk the man down out of combat, stating that the other Reader, River, managed to resist her conditioning and did not turn into the assassin he’s accused Joshua of being.  If she could do it, then the chance exists that so could Joshua.  Iskariot tilts an ear in Rick’s direction but keeps facing forward.  There’s no real telling if Rick is making any headway against violence and stupidity, here.
 
Standing behind Iskariot, Rick again tried to talk the man down out of combat, stating that the other Reader, River, managed to resist her conditioning and did not turn into the assassin he’s accused Joshua of being.  If she could do it, then the chance exists that so could Joshua.  Iskariot tilts an ear in Rick’s direction but keeps facing forward.  There’s no real telling if Rick is making any headway against violence and stupidity, here.
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Joshua moves backward and Iskariot’s mien changes.
 
Joshua moves backward and Iskariot’s mien changes.
  
'''Joshua:''' (to Iskariot) I don’t think you’re really interested in redemption at all.  Selfish bastard.<br>
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Joshua: (to Iskariot) I don’t think you’re really interested in redemption at all.  Selfish bastard.<br>
'''Iskariot:''' ''That''’s what I wanted—<br>
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Iskariot: ''That''’s what I wanted—<br>
  
 
And lightning fast, he grabs Rina’s gun.  Snatch! And now he’s got her gun trained on Joshua.
 
And lightning fast, he grabs Rina’s gun.  Snatch! And now he’s got her gun trained on Joshua.
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Rina steps in front of Joshua to give him cover. No, Joshua tells her and neatly dodges her, pulling her behind him and reversing their position.  He won’t hide behind his friends, however well-meaning they may be.  He maintains his defensive stance and addresses Iskariot.
 
Rina steps in front of Joshua to give him cover. No, Joshua tells her and neatly dodges her, pulling her behind him and reversing their position.  He won’t hide behind his friends, however well-meaning they may be.  He maintains his defensive stance and addresses Iskariot.
  
'''Joshua:''' Still committing the sin of hubris, aren’t you? You assume that you’re right about me. <br>
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Joshua: Still committing the sin of hubris, aren’t you? I assume that you’re right about me. <br>
  
 
It’s a standoff.  Iskariot has the gun but Joshua isn’t backing down.  Arden has his hands full, busy loading that sedative.  Rick is too far away still to tackle Iskariot and Rina cannot possibly shove Joshua out of range before the gun goes off.
 
It’s a standoff.  Iskariot has the gun but Joshua isn’t backing down.  Arden has his hands full, busy loading that sedative.  Rick is too far away still to tackle Iskariot and Rina cannot possibly shove Joshua out of range before the gun goes off.
  
'''Joshua:''' I thought you were worth saving but obviously you’re a selfish bastard. I’m kind of disappointed, honestly.<br>
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Joshua: I thought you were worth saving but obviously you’re a selfish bastard. I’m kind of disappointed, honestly.<br>
  
 
Iskariot twitches at this.  The hand holding the gun shakes slightly, but Iskariot maintains his aim. Arden moves in with the syringe but Iskariot dodges out of the way.  It breaks his aim on Joshua and Rick continues talking Iskariot down.
 
Iskariot twitches at this.  The hand holding the gun shakes slightly, but Iskariot maintains his aim. Arden moves in with the syringe but Iskariot dodges out of the way.  It breaks his aim on Joshua and Rick continues talking Iskariot down.
  
'''Rick:''' River ''changed''.  You can’t decide if people are good or bad without any interaction with them.  Us killing you—isn’t that the easy way out?<br>
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Rick: River ''changed''.  You can’t decide of people are good or bad without any interaction with them.  Us killing you—isn’t that the easy way out?<br>
  
 
Iskariot pauses as Rick’s words finally sink in.  The gun comes up.  The trigger is pulled and ''bang!'' Iskariot shoots himself through the head from below.  Blood and bone and brain matter spray up and out, spattering the vines and us.   
 
Iskariot pauses as Rick’s words finally sink in.  The gun comes up.  The trigger is pulled and ''bang!'' Iskariot shoots himself through the head from below.  Blood and bone and brain matter spray up and out, spattering the vines and us.   
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Thwarted, Arden curses Iskariot and calls him a coward.  Joshua eyes the body narrowly.
 
Thwarted, Arden curses Iskariot and calls him a coward.  Joshua eyes the body narrowly.
  
'''Joshua:''' You really were a selfish bastard.<br>
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Joshua: You really were a selfish bastard.<br>
  
 
Using her handkerchief as a makeshift glove against the gore, Rina spears her pen through her gun’s trigger guard to carry it.  No way is she touching it barehanded, nope.
 
Using her handkerchief as a makeshift glove against the gore, Rina spears her pen through her gun’s trigger guard to carry it.  No way is she touching it barehanded, nope.
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We clean up on the ''Gift'' and return to the Mission.
 
We clean up on the ''Gift'' and return to the Mission.
  
'''Arden:''' That was kind of….Yeah.<br>
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Arden: That was kind of….Yeah.<br>
'''Joshua:''' I’m pissed at him.<br>
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Joshua: I’m pissed at him.<br>
'''Rina:''' So am I. If anybody was gonna use ''my'' gun to put a bullet through ''his'' head, I wanted it to be ''my'' finger, not his, that pulled the trigger.  (grinds out a sigh)  But he’s still dead.  That’s good.  And let that be a lesson to me.<br>
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Rina: So am I. If anybody was gonna use ''my'' gun to put a bullet through ''his'' head, I wanted it to be ''my'' finger, not his, that pulled the trigger.  (grinds out a sigh)  But he’s still dead.  That’s good.  And let that be a lesson to me.<br>
  
 
Rick calls dibs on Iskariot’s sword and no one contests his claim.  We find it on the altar, actually, and Rick inspects it.  It’s a short sword, elegantly utilitarian and in good condition.
 
Rick calls dibs on Iskariot’s sword and no one contests his claim.  We find it on the altar, actually, and Rick inspects it.  It’s a short sword, elegantly utilitarian and in good condition.
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Faria is ready to go.  As for Escobar, he’s staying behind at the Mission.   
 
Faria is ready to go.  As for Escobar, he’s staying behind at the Mission.   
  
'''Rina:''' Who’s taking care of Escobar when we’re gone?<br>
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Rina: Who’s taking care of Escobar when we’re gone?<br>
 
'''Faria and Arden simultaneously:''' The General.<br>
 
'''Faria and Arden simultaneously:''' The General.<br>
'''Rina:''' He’s here to stay? He and his men?<br>
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Rina: He’s here to stay? He and his men?<br>
'''Joshua:''' He owns the moon.<br>
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Joshua: He owns the moon.<br>
'''Hu:''' Until things can be set up and reestablished.<br>
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Hu: Until things can be set up and reestablished.<br>
'''Rina:''' For what?<br>
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Rina: For what?<br>
'''Hu:''' For its original purpose. Atonement.  Transformation.<br>
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Hu: For its original purpose. Atonement.  Transformation.<br>
'''Rina:''' Oh.  And by the way, before I go—I like your ship.<br>
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Rina: Oh.  And by the way, before I go—I like your ship.<br>
'''Hu:''' (puzzled) It’s one of the more common ships in the Verse.<br>
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Hu: (puzzled) It’s one of the more common ships in the Verse.<br>
'''Rina:''' It’s in better repair than mine, sir.<br>
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Rina: It’s in better repair than mine, sir.<br>
'''Hu:''' More than that.  So keep your grubby paws off it.<br>
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Hu: More than that.  So keep your grubby paws off it.<br>
  
 
And on that humorous note, we dock our shuttle back onto our ship, get Faria stowed comfortably aboard, and leave.  The ''Gift'' flies a little better with the shuttle on her, the weight adding a stabilizing element, and we fly on, grateful for whatever advantage we can muster.<br><br>
 
And on that humorous note, we dock our shuttle back onto our ship, get Faria stowed comfortably aboard, and leave.  The ''Gift'' flies a little better with the shuttle on her, the weight adding a stabilizing element, and we fly on, grateful for whatever advantage we can muster.<br><br>
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We speculate who could have done the subsequent damage and why.
 
We speculate who could have done the subsequent damage and why.
  
'''Rick:''' So….if Reavers wouldn’t act like this, how would ''Prion-infected'' Reavers act?<br>
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Rick: So….if Reavers wouldn’t act like this, how would ''Prion-infected'' Reavers act?<br>
'''Joshua:''' (fed up) Could we just search this ship and get what we need?  The sooner the better, I don’t like this place.  <br>
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Joshua: (fed up) Could we just search this ship and get what we need?  The sooner the better, I don’t like this place.  <br>
  
 
Joshua’s been stretching his meds for about a month now, and the vibe off ''Orcus'' is grating on his nerves. His agitation level has gone up.  Joshua can hear odd sounds and starts sensing things just hiding past the nearest corner—like someone or something is hiding and ready to jump out at him.  Basically, the psychic residues of ''Orcus'' are pretty much affecting Joshua’s senses. And that residue has spread to the ''Gift'', until there’s no place Joshua can go to escape the ghostly effects.
 
Joshua’s been stretching his meds for about a month now, and the vibe off ''Orcus'' is grating on his nerves. His agitation level has gone up.  Joshua can hear odd sounds and starts sensing things just hiding past the nearest corner—like someone or something is hiding and ready to jump out at him.  Basically, the psychic residues of ''Orcus'' are pretty much affecting Joshua’s senses. And that residue has spread to the ''Gift'', until there’s no place Joshua can go to escape the ghostly effects.
  
'''Joshua:''' Could we please get this done?  Now?<br>
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Joshua: Could we please get this done?  Now?<br>
  
 
It’s going to take us days, necessitating EVAs to get the deflector panels and airlock door installed at the very least, along with tearing away panels on the interior and exterior to get at the parts we need.   
 
It’s going to take us days, necessitating EVAs to get the deflector panels and airlock door installed at the very least, along with tearing away panels on the interior and exterior to get at the parts we need.   
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As for Arden and his cut finger, Arden determines the blood sample is very old and chances are pretty good there were no active Prions to infect him with.  If he actually is infected, he at least has the advantage of knowing how to cure the disease with a combination of surgery and pharmacology.  We’d just have to find someone who can do the surgical procedure as well as he.   
 
As for Arden and his cut finger, Arden determines the blood sample is very old and chances are pretty good there were no active Prions to infect him with.  If he actually is infected, he at least has the advantage of knowing how to cure the disease with a combination of surgery and pharmacology.  We’d just have to find someone who can do the surgical procedure as well as he.   
  
'''Rina:''' I know.  Perform the procedure on someone with him standing next to you for at least ten minutes. (points to Joshua)<br>
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Rina: I know.  Perform the procedure on someone with him standing next to you for at least ten minutes. (points to Joshua)<br>
'''Arden:''' Okay. Come here and lie on the table.<br>
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Arden: Okay. Come here and lie on the table.<br>
'''Rina:''' Not without dinner and flowers first.<br>
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Rina: Not without dinner and flowers first.<br>
'''Joshua:''' (pained) Stop.<br>
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Joshua: (pained) Stop.<br>
'''Rina:'''(Why?) What?<br>
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Rina:(Why?) What?<br>
  
 
After a much needed laugh we get back to work.  And the weird crap starts happening, above and beyond the jeebies the overall creepiness of the place engenders.
 
After a much needed laugh we get back to work.  And the weird crap starts happening, above and beyond the jeebies the overall creepiness of the place engenders.
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Rina’s in ''Orcus''’s engine room, cutting away a panel to get at some much needed parts when there’s a flicker of the lights…and they all go dead on both ships.  Growling at the inconvenience, Rina digs her flashlight out of her pocket, turns the thing on and threads it through the coverall strap on her shoulder and comms the crew.
 
Rina’s in ''Orcus''’s engine room, cutting away a panel to get at some much needed parts when there’s a flicker of the lights…and they all go dead on both ships.  Growling at the inconvenience, Rina digs her flashlight out of her pocket, turns the thing on and threads it through the coverall strap on her shoulder and comms the crew.
  
'''Rina:''' Everybody.  Check in.<br>
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Rina: Everybody.  Check in.<br>
 
   
 
   
 
Rick is in a vac suit dismantling the ruined outer airlock door off the ''Gift'' when this happens.  Joshua’s suited up and helping him.  Arden sees the lights go out and makes his way to the bridge, where Nika is sitting and thinking: this is strange. Arden checks engineering next.
 
Rick is in a vac suit dismantling the ruined outer airlock door off the ''Gift'' when this happens.  Joshua’s suited up and helping him.  Arden sees the lights go out and makes his way to the bridge, where Nika is sitting and thinking: this is strange. Arden checks engineering next.
  
'''Rina:''' ''Everybody check in.''  This is Rina.<br>
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Rina: ''Everybody check in.''  This is Rina.<br>
  
 
The others comply.
 
The others comply.
  
'''Joshua:''' What the fuck?<br>
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Joshua: What the fuck?<br>
'''Rina:''' (laughs) Nice call sign.<br>
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Rina: (laughs) Nice call sign.<br>
'''Rick:''' I second that.<br>
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Rick: I second that.<br>
'''Arden:''' I and Nika are okay.<br>
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Arden: I and Nika are okay.<br>
  
 
With a stuttering hum, the lights on both ships flicker back on.
 
With a stuttering hum, the lights on both ships flicker back on.
  
'''Arden:''' That’s odd.<br>
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Arden: That’s odd.<br>
'''Joshua:''' Okay…this ship….The ''Orcus'' is haunted.<br>
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Joshua: Okay…this ship….The ''Orcus'' is haunted.<br>
'''Arden:''' I don’t think it’s haunted.<br>
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Arden: I don’t think it’s haunted.<br>
'''Joshua:''' It’s haunted.<br>
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Joshua: It’s haunted.<br>
'''Rick:''' What if it’s not haunted?  Maybe there’s people living inside of it.<br>
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Rick: What if it’s not haunted?  Maybe there’s people living inside of it.<br>
'''Joshua:''' We searched the whole thing.<br>
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Joshua: We searched the whole thing.<br>
'''Rick:''' Mnnnn, but not the parts that are covered by the metal to prevent us from getting to the other parts.<br>
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Rick: Mnnnn, but not the parts that are covered by the metal to prevent us from getting to the other parts.<br>
'''Joshua:''' Can they do that?  Crap!  We got to get behind them. Gimme a blow torch.  Let’s go get behind the panels.<br>
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Joshua: Can they do that?  Crap!  We got to get behind them. Gimme a blow torch.  Let’s go get behind the panels.<br>
  
 
Easy mark much, Joshua?
 
Easy mark much, Joshua?
  
'''Arden:''' No. Finish what we’re doing and let’s get out of here.  Quickly.  There’s nothing behind the panels.  It’s just sealed up over the controls.<br>
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Arden: No. Finish what we’re doing and let’s get out of here.  Quickly.  There’s nothing behind the panels.  It’s just sealed up over the controls.<br>
  
 
Rina’s still working on getting the ITC valve free, hears the chatter over her comm and sighs.
 
Rina’s still working on getting the ITC valve free, hears the chatter over her comm and sighs.
  
'''Rina:''' ''Ebani v’rot.''  I’ll get to them as soon as I can.  What’s next on my fuckin’ list?<br>
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Rina: ''Ebani v’rot.''  I’ll get to them as soon as I can.  What’s next on my fuckin’ list?<br>
'''Arden:''' You have a fuckin’ list? Who’s at the top of the fuckin’ list?<br>
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Arden: You have a fuckin’ list? Who’s at the top of the fuckin’ list?<br>
'''Rina:''' (warning) It’s not you.<br>
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Rina: (warning) It’s not you.<br>
'''Arden:''' I didn’t think it would be.<br>
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Arden: I didn’t think it would be.<br>
'''Rick:''' Faria.<br>
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Rick: Faria.<br>
'''Rina:''' Oh, hell no.<br>
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Rina: Oh, hell no.<br>
  
 
As for Faria, he’s not of much use to us in salvage work, but he does what he can.  At the moment, he’s making coffee.  The comm chatter continues between us as we work to get what we need and get the hell out.
 
As for Faria, he’s not of much use to us in salvage work, but he does what he can.  At the moment, he’s making coffee.  The comm chatter continues between us as we work to get what we need and get the hell out.
  
'''Arden:''' Is there any sort of electrical map of the Gift that would show where disruptions happened in the electrical system?<br>
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Arden: Is there any sort of electrical map of the Gift that would show where disruptions happened in the electrical system?<br>
'''Rina:''' Oh, you mean like the wiring schematic for the entire ship? Of course!  Let me pull it ''out of my ass.''<br>
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Rina: Oh, you mean like the wiring schematic for the entire ship? Of course!  Let me pull it ''out of my ass.''<br>
  
 
There is a wiring schematic Rina can spin up via diagnostics but it doesn’t maintain a history of all damage. We’re not going to be able to see where the flare-up started and trace its path from beginning to end.  We can only see the aftermath.  Arden suggests checking the power coupling between our ships.  Joshua mutters to himself about another possibility.
 
There is a wiring schematic Rina can spin up via diagnostics but it doesn’t maintain a history of all damage. We’re not going to be able to see where the flare-up started and trace its path from beginning to end.  We can only see the aftermath.  Arden suggests checking the power coupling between our ships.  Joshua mutters to himself about another possibility.
  
'''Joshua:''' Haunted….people in the walls….haunted….people in the walls….<br>
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Joshua: Haunted….people in the walls….haunted….people in the walls….<br>
'''Rina:''' (cutting in over the comm) And the third option: Joshua needs drugs.<br>
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Rina: (cutting in over the comm) And the third option: Joshua needs drugs.<br>
'''Joshua:''' Haunted AND people in the walls. <br>
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Joshua: Haunted AND people in the walls. <br>
'''Rick:''' (agreeing) People in the walls, man.<br>
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Rick: (agreeing) People in the walls, man.<br>
'''Joshua:''' It could be both.  Maybe the people in the walls ''are'' haunting us.  Maybe they’re like ghosts in the walls.<br>
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Joshua: It could be both.  Maybe the people in the walls ''are'' haunting us.  Maybe they’re like ghosts in the walls.<br>
'''Rick:''' What if the Prion disease makes the Reavers more lucid?  And then they’re planted to take ''our'' ship so they can then go to a major population center.<br>
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Rick: What if the Prion disease makes the Reavers more lucid?  And then they’re planted to take ''our'' ship so they can then go to a major population center.<br>
'''Joshua:''' That doesn’t make sense. I’m going with haunted.<br>
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Joshua: That doesn’t make sense. I’m going with haunted.<br>
'''Rick:''' I’m going with people in the walls.<br>
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Rick: I’m going with people in the walls.<br>
'''Joshua:''' We’ll see.<br>
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Joshua: We’ll see.<br>
'''Rick:''' Shoot first.<br>
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Rick: Shoot first.<br>
'''Joshua:''' I won’t shoot anything.<br>
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Joshua: I won’t shoot anything.<br>
  
 
Meanwhile, Arden and Rina are checking the power coupling and power path between the two ships.  They rule out a brownout.  They’re able to see the fuse and tracing the power lines running between the two ships we think we can trace the anomaly to a point roughly where the two ships are connected.  And it looks like a weird energy burst.  We don’t have any sensors up and running but based on the pattern of the damage ….
 
Meanwhile, Arden and Rina are checking the power coupling and power path between the two ships.  They rule out a brownout.  They’re able to see the fuse and tracing the power lines running between the two ships we think we can trace the anomaly to a point roughly where the two ships are connected.  And it looks like a weird energy burst.  We don’t have any sensors up and running but based on the pattern of the damage ….
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She must have hit her head during the grav flux.  She’s got a small head wound and is bleeding buckets, as even small head wounds are wont to do.  Arden informs the crew via our comms what’s happened.
 
She must have hit her head during the grav flux.  She’s got a small head wound and is bleeding buckets, as even small head wounds are wont to do.  Arden informs the crew via our comms what’s happened.
  
'''Arden:''' I’m taking her to med bay.<br>
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Arden: I’m taking her to med bay.<br>
'''Rina:''' What did she hit and do I have to fix it?<br>
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Rina: What did she hit and do I have to fix it?<br>
'''Arden:''' She hit her head.  I don’t know what else she hit. I’m a little more concerned with her and not the ship.<br>
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Arden: She hit her head.  I don’t know what else she hit. I’m a little more concerned with her and not the ship.<br>
'''Rina:''' Then take care of her and then….never mind….<br>
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Rina: Then take care of her and then….never mind….<br>
  
 
She might sound callous, but if Arden is a people-doctor, then Rina is a ship-doctor.  And right now she’s got the ''Gift''’s liver transplant in her hands—the ITCV—and the ship’s putative breastbone cracked wide open: our faulty airlock door has been removed and the airlock stands exposed to the vacuum of space.  The eyes and ears of the ''Gift'' are getting replaced next—the sensor array is next on her list of operations.  And the deflector vanes?  God, don’t talk her about the deflector vanes.  Even working in the weightless environment of space, it will take three people working on it to get those transferred and installed on the ''Gift''.
 
She might sound callous, but if Arden is a people-doctor, then Rina is a ship-doctor.  And right now she’s got the ''Gift''’s liver transplant in her hands—the ITCV—and the ship’s putative breastbone cracked wide open: our faulty airlock door has been removed and the airlock stands exposed to the vacuum of space.  The eyes and ears of the ''Gift'' are getting replaced next—the sensor array is next on her list of operations.  And the deflector vanes?  God, don’t talk her about the deflector vanes.  Even working in the weightless environment of space, it will take three people working on it to get those transferred and installed on the ''Gift''.
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Rick pulls Joshua aside to yank his chain even more with old war stories.  In fact, there was this one time when…..
 
Rick pulls Joshua aside to yank his chain even more with old war stories.  In fact, there was this one time when…..
  
'''Rick:''' I was sent to infiltrate a group of Browncoats that had stolen Alliance military equipment that included a personal cloaking field item.  And what if someone were to have that and couple it with small EM devices.<br>
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Rick: I was sent to infiltrate a group of Browncoats that had stolen Alliance military equipment that included a personal cloaking field item.  And what if someone were to have that and couple it with small EM devices.<br>
  
Does he think that would disrupt our ship’s systems?  It’s interesting to note that Rick is careful to make sure Rina isn’t present to dispute him.
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Does he think that would disrupt our ship’s systems?  It’s interesting to note that Rick is careful to make sure Rina isn’t present to dispute him
  
'''Joshua:''' Why would he do that? I don’t know….ghosts are much more, like…. <br>
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Joshua: Why would he do that? I don’t know….ghosts are much more, like…. <br>
'''Rick:''' Because that seems much more logical than ghosts.<br>
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Rick: Because that seems much more logical than ghosts.<br>
  
 
Oh boy. Joshua’s already nervous but now he remembers a warning from his trainers about psychic residues.  There’s not necessarily a spatial limit to the residues, but there is a flow to psychic energy and they taught him how to focus on the atmosphere around him, the better to sense those with hostile intent coming toward him.  Or stepping onto ground where there’s been massive death.  Or sensing things as they actually happen.
 
Oh boy. Joshua’s already nervous but now he remembers a warning from his trainers about psychic residues.  There’s not necessarily a spatial limit to the residues, but there is a flow to psychic energy and they taught him how to focus on the atmosphere around him, the better to sense those with hostile intent coming toward him.  Or stepping onto ground where there’s been massive death.  Or sensing things as they actually happen.
  
'''Rick:''' (relenting) Nah, I’m just messing with you. But I think that it seems more plausible than ghosts.<br>
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Rick: (relenting) Nah, I’m just messing with you. But I think that it seems more plausible than ghosts.<br>
'''Joshua:''' Everything has psychic energy, man.<br>
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Joshua: Everything has psychic energy, man.<br>
'''Rick:''' Yeah, but have you ever heard of anything that has psychic energy that has a physical manifestation from that energy?<br>
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Rick: Yeah, but have you ever heard of anything that has psychic energy that has a physical manifestation from that energy?<br>
  
 
Like anything that could be attracted to or affect our power and our grav and cause trouble for us there?
 
Like anything that could be attracted to or affect our power and our grav and cause trouble for us there?
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As he turns to leave, the comm crackles to life and a voice stutters through the static.
 
As he turns to leave, the comm crackles to life and a voice stutters through the static.
  
'''Voice:''' ''*fsssssshhht*''  Is someone out there?<br>
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Voice: ''*fsssssshhht*''  Is someone out there?<br>
  
 
Arden grabs the mike and thumbs it live.
 
Arden grabs the mike and thumbs it live.
  
'''Arden:''' Um…<br>
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Arden: Um…<br>
'''Voice:''' Respond. Is someone out there? ''*fsssssshht*''<br>
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Voice: Respond. Is someone out there? ''*fsssssshht*''<br>
'''Arden:''' This is ''Summer’s Gift''.<br>
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Arden: This is ''Summer’s Gift''.<br>
'''Voice:''' Is someone out there? ''*fsssssshht*'' Can you hear me? ''*fsssssshht*''<br>
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Voice: Is someone out there? ''*fsssssshht*'' Can you hear me? ''*fsssssshht*''<br>
'''Arden:''' Yes. This is ''Summer’s Gift''. Can you identify yourself—<br>
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Arden: Yes. This is ''Summer’s Gift''. Can you identify yourself—<br>
'''Voice:''' Is there anyone there?<br>
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Voice: Is there anyone there?<br>
  
 
They can’t hear Arden. Arden switches to all-ship and tells everyone he’s receiving some radio chatter.
 
They can’t hear Arden. Arden switches to all-ship and tells everyone he’s receiving some radio chatter.
  
'''Rina:''' Check for weird tachyon emissions.<br>
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Rina: Check for weird tachyon emissions.<br>
'''Arden:''' Uh…(looks)  We left that dial on the other ship.<br>
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Arden: Uh…(looks)  We left that dial on the other ship.<br>
'''Rick:''' Can they respond to..?<br>
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Rick: Can they respond to..?<br>
'''Arden:''' Yeah.  They can’t hear me.<br>
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Arden: Yeah.  They can’t hear me.<br>
'''Rick:''' Um  You ''are'' aware that Reavers will send out false calls to—<br>
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Rick: Um  You ''are'' aware that Reavers will send out false calls to—<br>
'''Arden:''' No.<br>
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Arden: No.<br>
'''Joshua:''' He does now.<br>
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Joshua: He does now.<br>
  
  

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