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'''Rina:''' (eaxperated) Okay, and if you see a six-foot high invisible white rabbit named Harvey, give him my regards.<br>
 
'''Rina:''' (eaxperated) Okay, and if you see a six-foot high invisible white rabbit named Harvey, give him my regards.<br>
 
'''Joshua:''' She was a Reader, like …she….if-if-if if he said that…I mean didn’t he say…didn’t he say something to the fact that…that somebody could break, like, the…some person broke away?  And that it was the person responsible for naming this Mission? Which was named ‘Saint River’?  Like then…then I have to guess she’s the person that they’re referring to.  Not that they have any direct relevance to any—there are probably a handful of Rivers across the universe but how many of them are Readers from White Sun? What are the odds?  Probably slim, I’m guessing.  My point is that—<br>
 
'''Joshua:''' She was a Reader, like …she….if-if-if if he said that…I mean didn’t he say…didn’t he say something to the fact that…that somebody could break, like, the…some person broke away?  And that it was the person responsible for naming this Mission? Which was named ‘Saint River’?  Like then…then I have to guess she’s the person that they’re referring to.  Not that they have any direct relevance to any—there are probably a handful of Rivers across the universe but how many of them are Readers from White Sun? What are the odds?  Probably slim, I’m guessing.  My point is that—<br>
'''Arden:''' I don’t know.  There are 689 Ardens, at least.<br>
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'''Arden: I don’t know.  There are 689 Ardens, at least.<br>
'''Joshua:''' (weakly) Ah ha, ha-ha.<br>
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'''Joshua: (weakly) Ah ha, ha-ha.<br>
  
 
Joshua tries again.
 
Joshua tries again.
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'''Rick:''' So…you don’t want to have anything to do with him and you just want to leave him here? Or…?<br>
 
'''Rick:''' So…you don’t want to have anything to do with him and you just want to leave him here? Or…?<br>
 
'''Rina:''' (fed up) Okay, here’s what I want. He wants to atone for his sins and he wants to die here. I say that’s fine by me. I don’t think it would be a good idea to take him aboard our ship or he might harm us in an unlucid moment.<br>
 
'''Rina:''' (fed up) Okay, here’s what I want. He wants to atone for his sins and he wants to die here. I say that’s fine by me. I don’t think it would be a good idea to take him aboard our ship or he might harm us in an unlucid moment.<br>
'''Arden:''' Or our ship.<br>
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Arden: Or our ship.<br>
'''Rina:''' Or our ship.  I don’t think it is wise to try to cure him in case he has conditioning that will override the cure and make him dangerous again.  Any more than you would take a rabid dog with you and turn him loose in a crowd to have one last happy little run before you euthanize him. (a beat) ''Or'', if you think it’s cruel to leave him here on his own, after General Hu packs up his men and flies off of here—after we fly off of here—and he’s completely alone and unsupervised with no food and no water, then I say ''we shoot him before we leave.''<br>
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Rina: Or our ship.  I don’t think it is wise to try to cure him in case he has conditioning that will override the cure and make him dangerous again.  Any more than you would take a rabid dog with you and turn him loose in a crowd to have one last happy little run before you euthanize him. (a beat) ''Or'', if you think it’s cruel to leave him here on his own, after General Hu packs up his men and flies off of here—after we fly off of here—and he’s completely alone and unsupervised with no food and no water, then I say ''we shoot him before we leave.''<br>
  
 
Silence.  Then:
 
Silence.  Then:
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'''Joshua:''' I have no wish to Read him.<br>
 
'''Joshua:''' I have no wish to Read him.<br>
 
'''Faria:''' You might not like what you see.<br>
 
'''Faria:''' You might not like what you see.<br>
'''Arden:'''I still want to know how he recognized your abilities when you walked into the room.<br>
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'''rden:'''I still want to know how he recognized your abilities when you walked into the room.<br>
 
'''Rina:''' Joshua.  Do you want to talk to this man?  See if you can get some answers?<br>
 
'''Rina:''' Joshua.  Do you want to talk to this man?  See if you can get some answers?<br>
'''Joshua:''' I’m pretty sure he’s not going to give answers to me, but more importantly at this point is the question we’re asking: is he worth saving?  Isn’t that the real question?  If we thought he was worth saving, then we wouldn’t be listening to whatever his mentally deluded self is saying. Like the need to kill himself.  But because we’re not sure he’s worth saving we’re vacillating.<br>
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'''Joshua: I’m pretty sure he’s not going to give answers to me, but more importantly at this point is the question we’re asking: is he worth saving?  Isn’t that the real question?  If we thought he was worth saving, then we wouldn’t be listening to whatever his mentally deluded self is saying. Like the need to kill himself.  But because we’re not sure he’s worth saving we’re vacillating.<br>
 
   
 
   
 
Faria admits that while he thinks that Iskariot has done some truly atrocious things, that perhaps curing him would be the first step in getting Iskariot to face up to what he’d done.  There can be no true punishment or atonement if one is unaware of what is happening.  And there being nothing more to say, really, we all go see Iskariot while it’s still light outside to put the question to him: come with us or stay?
 
Faria admits that while he thinks that Iskariot has done some truly atrocious things, that perhaps curing him would be the first step in getting Iskariot to face up to what he’d done.  There can be no true punishment or atonement if one is unaware of what is happening.  And there being nothing more to say, really, we all go see Iskariot while it’s still light outside to put the question to him: come with us or stay?

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