Editing Episode 313: Trade Off

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Scratch one Blue Hands agent.  
 
Scratch one Blue Hands agent.  
  
Rick quickly frisks the man for weapons—or anything interesting—finds and pockets the sonic device. Then Rick stows his pistol, tucks his shotgun under one arm and starts dragging Joshua and Arden toward our shuttle.
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Rick quickly frisks the man for weapons—or anything interesting—then stows his pistol, tucks his shotgun under one arm and starts dragging Joshua and Arden toward our shuttle.
  
 
Nika is busy keeping Rina from dying on the platform and the hiss of a launched grenade grabs her attention for a second.  She looks, she sees, and goes back to tending Rina.  Satisfied her crewmate isn’t going to die, she hauls Rina up in her arms and starts dragging her for the lift.
 
Nika is busy keeping Rina from dying on the platform and the hiss of a launched grenade grabs her attention for a second.  She looks, she sees, and goes back to tending Rina.  Satisfied her crewmate isn’t going to die, she hauls Rina up in her arms and starts dragging her for the lift.

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