Editing Episode 313: Trade Off

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She turns back to the camera feeds and rewinds the footage, hits play.  We hear her voice in a fake Rim twang delivering her statement.
 
She turns back to the camera feeds and rewinds the footage, hits play.  We hear her voice in a fake Rim twang delivering her statement.
  
'''''Rim Blondie:''''' ''Ahm terra’bly sorry, but Ah’ve seem t’ have mistaken the identity of person Ah was accusin’. Ah want that poor boy not to have t’ suffah that.  You get that down that Ah’ve recanted?''<br>
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'''''Rim Blondie: Ahm terra’bly sorry, but Ah’ve seem t’ have mistaken the identity of person Ah was accusin’. Ah want that poor boy not to have t’ suffah that.  You get that down that Ah’ve recanted?'''''<br>
'''''Policeman:''''' ''Well, Ma’am.  A lot of people change their minds after they—.''<br>
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'''''Policeman: Well, Ma’am.  A lot of people change their minds after they—.'''''<br>
'''''Rim Blondie:''''' ''No, no.  It wasn’t him at all. Ah just didn’t want people t’ know mah husband was beatin’ me.''<br>
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'''''Rim Blondie: No, no.  It wasn’t him at all. Ah just didn’t want people t’ know mah husband was beatin’ me.'''''<br>
'''''Policeman:''''' ''Oh, well that….well.''  <br>
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'''''Policeman: Oh, well that….well.'''''  <br>
  
 
And he seems to understand.  He types in her recantation.  And she pulls out a small USB-type device, plugs it into his computer console and FZZZT! everything goes on the fritz.
 
And he seems to understand.  He types in her recantation.  And she pulls out a small USB-type device, plugs it into his computer console and FZZZT! everything goes on the fritz.

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