Editing Episode 319: Colchester Endgame, Part Two

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On the top catwalk outside, Arden shoots the Blue Hand agent again and this time, finally, the agent goes down on his knees.  The sonic weapon falls from his hand and it goes silent.   
 
On the top catwalk outside, Arden shoots the Blue Hand agent again and this time, finally, the agent goes down on his knees.  The sonic weapon falls from his hand and it goes silent.   
  
'''Blue Sun Agent:''' (rasping) You’re not going to make it. There’s no way out of here… the exits are covered.  We know how you got in here.  It’s hopeless.<br>
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Blue Sun Agent: (rasping) You’re not going to make it. There’s no way out of here… the exits are covered.  We know how you got in here.  It’s hopeless.<br>
  
 
Arden stalks right over to the man and shoots him point blank—no pause, no mercy.  
 
Arden stalks right over to the man and shoots him point blank—no pause, no mercy.  

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