Editing Episode 319: Colchester Endgame, Part Two

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Hustling aboard, we see it’s like the usual military ASREV ship.  Instead of cargo space, however, it’s got what look like holding cells and it has higher tech computer systems.  There is no luggage that we can see, no personal items left behind. The Blue Sun insignia is prominent throughout.   
 
Hustling aboard, we see it’s like the usual military ASREV ship.  Instead of cargo space, however, it’s got what look like holding cells and it has higher tech computer systems.  There is no luggage that we can see, no personal items left behind. The Blue Sun insignia is prominent throughout.   
  
'''Joshua:''' (evenly) Get us ready to go.<br>   
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'''Joshua:'''(quietly) Get us ready to go.<br>   
'''Rina:''' (sighs) All right.<br>  
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'''Rina:'''(sighs) All right.<br>  
  
 
Nika’s injuries and fatigue are momentarily forgotten when she sees how sweet the cockpit is.  There is no engine room but there is an engine console aft and Rina’s croon when she sees it is downright reverent.
 
Nika’s injuries and fatigue are momentarily forgotten when she sees how sweet the cockpit is.  There is no engine room but there is an engine console aft and Rina’s croon when she sees it is downright reverent.

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