Editing Episode 402: Shepherd's Hope, Part Three

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'''Girl:''' (thinly) There’re other kids.<br>
 
'''Girl:''' (thinly) There’re other kids.<br>
'''Nika:''' ''Where?''<br><br>
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'''Nika:''' ''Where?''<br>
  
 
The girl starts to pant, struggling to speak but unwilling to give the secret away.<br><br>
 
The girl starts to pant, struggling to speak but unwilling to give the secret away.<br><br>
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The ship hovers over us a second and then our comm spits static.  We’re being hailed.  A deep male voice issues from the speakers. It sounds blessedly sane.<br><br>   
 
The ship hovers over us a second and then our comm spits static.  We’re being hailed.  A deep male voice issues from the speakers. It sounds blessedly sane.<br><br>   
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'''Man:''' (drawling) You don’t look like Reavers.<br>
 
'''Man:''' (drawling) You don’t look like Reavers.<br>
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'''Nika:''' (thumbs comm) Who’m I talkin’ to?<br>
 
'''Nika:''' (thumbs comm) Who’m I talkin’ to?<br>
 
'''Man:''' Who’m I? Who’m I talkin’ to?<br>
 
'''Man:''' Who’m I? Who’m I talkin’ to?<br>
'''Nika:''' This is the ''Summer’s Gift''. We landed here with a cargo for the town. We found the carnage you’re lookin’ at.<br>
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'''Nika:''' This is the Summer’s Gift. We landed here with a cargo for the town. We found the carnage you’re lookin’ at.<br>
 
'''Man:''' ''Power down''.<br>
 
'''Man:''' ''Power down''.<br>
 
'''Nika:''' (switches channel) Rina. Power it down.<br>
 
'''Nika:''' (switches channel) Rina. Power it down.<br>

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