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Nika’s eyes never leave her target.  Rina doesn’t question her Captain’s tone but obeys without delay. Nika steps between Rina and Joshua, her rifle up and aimed, covering her engineer and the girl.<br><br>   
 
Nika’s eyes never leave her target.  Rina doesn’t question her Captain’s tone but obeys without delay. Nika steps between Rina and Joshua, her rifle up and aimed, covering her engineer and the girl.<br><br>   
  
Back on the ''Gift'', the first patient is installed in medbay and Arden sends Kiera out for the second.  Kiera trots right back out for the second patient.  Kiera passes Rina on the way over and pulls up short when she sees the Nika-Joshua standoff. Joshua is frozen where he stands, confused, and Nika’s planted stock still with her rifle. <br><br>
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Back on the Gift, the first patient is installed in medbay and Arden sends Kiera out for the second.  Kiera trots right back out for the second patient.  Kiera passes Rina on the way over and pulls up short when she sees the Nika-Joshua standoff. Joshua is frozen where he stands, confused, and Nika’s planted stock still with her rifle. <br><br>
  
 
'''Kiera:''' (drawlin’) Did I miss somethin’?<br>
 
'''Kiera:''' (drawlin’) Did I miss somethin’?<br>

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