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Nika immediately starts checking the corpses for the bodies of children.<br><br>
 
Nika immediately starts checking the corpses for the bodies of children.<br><br>
  
'''Joshua:''' He was trying….he was trying to hide his children… Like he knew.  When he saw the ship coming. Like he’d seen it before.<br>
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'''Joshua:'''' He was trying….he was trying to hide his children… Like he knew.  When he saw the ship coming. Like he’d seen it before.<br>
 
'''Nika:''' Where? Where would they have hidden the children?<br>
 
'''Nika:''' Where? Where would they have hidden the children?<br>
 
'''Joshua:''' I don’t know. <br>
 
'''Joshua:''' I don’t know. <br>
'''Nika:''' So you didn’t see anything?<br>
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''''Nika:''' So you didn’t see anything?<br>
'''Joshua:''' No…  The second thing is—catatonic man over there held a lot of interest for one of the Reavers.  There were a lot of Reavers and then there was one Reaver with only one arm.  And while he was ''talking'' to the catatonic guy … like he… Something about that guy is, is, of interest to that Reaver or, or the group of Reavers—I don’t know but it… He’s gonna be… If we bring him, he’ll be—I can’t say no, don’t bring him—but he’s going to be…  He’s Reaver bait.  He’s like, he’s like…drawing lightning.  Like…  I don’t know. I don’t know what he wanted with him. And…he might be back. I don’t know.  If we’re going to move people to the ship we should do it now.<br><br>
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''Joshua:''' No…  The second thing is—catatonic man over there held a lot of interest for one of the Reavers.  There were a lot of Reavers and then there was one Reaver with only one arm.  And while he was ''talking'' to the catatonic guy … like he… Something about that guy is, is, of interest to that Reaver or, or the group of Reavers—I don’t know but it… He’s gonna be… If we bring him, he’ll be—I can’t say no, don’t bring him—but he’s going to be…  He’s Reaver bait.  He’s like, he’s like…drawing lightning.  Like…  I don’t know. I don’t know what he wanted with him. And…he might be back. I don’t know.  If we’re going to move people to the ship we should do it now.<br><br>
  
 
We try to take that in.  It takes a minute.<br><br>
 
We try to take that in.  It takes a minute.<br><br>

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