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True believer?  More than Mike?  Rina knows she isn’t but what did she do to convince him that she was?  Where did everything get so wrong?<br><br>
 
True believer?  More than Mike?  Rina knows she isn’t but what did she do to convince him that she was?  Where did everything get so wrong?<br><br>
  
'''Mike:''' This isn’t your fault. Don’t think I’m bluffing, but … this is what I am. (a long beat) That said, if this—all that you see—doesn’t go to hell, and things don’t end up in the worst possible situation … it may be that there is time for redemption.<br>
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'''Mike:''' This isn’t your fault. Don’t think I’m bluffing, but … this is what I am. (a long beat) That said, if this—all that you see—doesn’t go to hell, and things don’t end up in the worst possible situation … it may be that there is time for redemption.<br><br>
'''Rina:''' Seems to me that … dying at this juncture … might actually be shortchanging the redemption you could be doing. But I’m not … the right person to judge that sort of thing.<br>  
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'''Rina:''' Seems to me that … dying at this juncture … might actually be shortchanging the redemption you could be doing. But I’m not … the right person to judge that sort of thing.<br><br>  
'''Mike:''' Well, you’re going to have to make that judgment.  If it comes to that.  Perhaps the good people of Highgate will take that decision out of our hands.  (another shrug) Or perhaps they won’t.<br>
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'''Mike:''' Well, you’re going to have to make that judgment.  If it comes to that.  Perhaps the good people of Highgate will take that decision out of our hands.  (another shrug) Or perhaps they won’t.<br><br>
'''Rina:''' So. You are going through this to atone.  Is that right?<br>
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'''Rina:''' So. You are going through this to atone.  Is that right?<br><br>
 
'''Mike:''' I ''went'' through this to atone. Not to God. ''That'' I still have some atoning to do. (a beat) I was a marked man. In theory, this should remove that mark.  I may have a new mark … But I couldn’t head off somewhere, with a side arm and with you by my side thinking that the next assassin or bounty hunter is not going to work.  Or the one after that.  It had to end.<br>   
 
'''Mike:''' I ''went'' through this to atone. Not to God. ''That'' I still have some atoning to do. (a beat) I was a marked man. In theory, this should remove that mark.  I may have a new mark … But I couldn’t head off somewhere, with a side arm and with you by my side thinking that the next assassin or bounty hunter is not going to work.  Or the one after that.  It had to end.<br>   
 
'''Rina:''' I thought the plan was to go somewhere where they wouldn’t come after you.<br>
 
'''Rina:''' I thought the plan was to go somewhere where they wouldn’t come after you.<br>

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