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Hsi: Sullivan. So. This is a surprise that we meet again.<br>
 
Hsi: Sullivan. So. This is a surprise that we meet again.<br>
 
Kiera: Yeah.  Tellin’ ya.  What moniker are you goin’ by? Instead’a Hsi-iii-it.<br>
 
Kiera: Yeah.  Tellin’ ya.  What moniker are you goin’ by? Instead’a Hsi-iii-it.<br>
Hsi: Kuro<br><br>
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Hsi: Courio<br><br>
  
 
It comes out soundling like Cool-lio.<br><br>
 
It comes out soundling like Cool-lio.<br><br>
  
Kiera: Ah.  Kuro.<br>
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Kiera: Ah.  Courio.<br>
 
Hsi: (hooks thumb) This is your ship?<br>
 
Hsi: (hooks thumb) This is your ship?<br>
 
Kiera:  Yeah. I’m part of the crew, yeah.<br>
 
Kiera:  Yeah. I’m part of the crew, yeah.<br>
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And he walks off, taking his party with him. Rina watches him go and when they’re out of earshot she to Kiera.<br><br>
 
And he walks off, taking his party with him. Rina watches him go and when they’re out of earshot she to Kiera.<br><br>
  
Rina: Is there anyone in this ''guo cao de'' Verse you don’t know? Well, whatever you can, milk it.  He seems to be on our side.  We’ve got five people going up our umbilical—<br>
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Rina: Is there anyone in this fuckin’ Verse you don’t know? Well, whatever you can, milk it.  He seems to be on our side.  We’ve got five people going up our umbilical—<br>
 
Kiera: I know and we need to get on outa here. He’s gonna try and hold’em off, so what you got, let’s get.<br>
 
Kiera: I know and we need to get on outa here. He’s gonna try and hold’em off, so what you got, let’s get.<br>
 
Rina: All right. How are you at piloting dropship?<br>
 
Rina: All right. How are you at piloting dropship?<br>
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Kiera calls after Hsi, hooks her thumb at the dropship.<br><br>
 
Kiera calls after Hsi, hooks her thumb at the dropship.<br><br>
  
Kiera: Mr. Kuro, I’m gonna haul this piece’a junk on outa your way, all right? Cuz it was our piece’a crap we brought on board.<br><br>
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Kiera: Mr. Courio, I’m gonna haul this piece’a junk on outa your way, all right? Cuz it was our piece’a crap we brought on board.<br><br>
  
 
She gets a sketchy affirmative wave over his shoulder.  Fine.  She gets going.  Kiera boards the dropship and settling in the cockpit, starts flipping switches.  The onboard computer asks for a password. Kiera keys her comm.<br><br>
 
She gets a sketchy affirmative wave over his shoulder.  Fine.  She gets going.  Kiera boards the dropship and settling in the cockpit, starts flipping switches.  The onboard computer asks for a password. Kiera keys her comm.<br><br>
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And Byshek is one aspect of the brave new Verse.  Because we’ve disappointed him with the drug shipment, we will have to sweeten the deal with him by giving him extra when we see him.  Kiera’s already anticipated that and made more than the amount she strictly needed to fulfill that shipment order.  Even so, we may still expect to bring him what amounts to monetary tribute when next we’re on Newhope.<br><br>
 
And Byshek is one aspect of the brave new Verse.  Because we’ve disappointed him with the drug shipment, we will have to sweeten the deal with him by giving him extra when we see him.  Kiera’s already anticipated that and made more than the amount she strictly needed to fulfill that shipment order.  Even so, we may still expect to bring him what amounts to monetary tribute when next we’re on Newhope.<br><br>
  
And then there’s Kiera’s client base.  As our encounter with Kuro amply demonstrated, Kiera’s clients cannot afford to let it be known they didn’t always look the way they  now do or answer to the name they now do. In terms of a who’s who list in her head, Kiera’s list would be very interesting indeed and the need for anonymity isn’t strictly for Kiera’s clients, but for Kiera’s safety, too.  If someone of nefarious intent ever decided they wanted Kiera’s client list, the only way to get it is to get it out of Kiera herself … and their methods might not be too kind or picky as to how.<br><br>
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And then there’s Kiera’s client base.  As our encounter with Courio amply demonstrated, Kiera’s clients cannot afford to let it be known they didn’t always look the way they  now do or answer to the name they now do. In terms of a who’s who list in her head, Kiera’s list would be very interesting indeed and the need for anonymity isn’t strictly for Kiera’s clients, but for Kiera’s safety, too.  If someone of nefarious intent ever decided they wanted Kiera’s client list, the only way to get it is to get it out of Kiera herself … and their methods might not be too kind or picky as to how.<br><br>
  
 
It’s a good reason to keep on the move and as we pull stakes and leave L2 and DePollo, we’re moving again.  We’ve cargo, we’ve salvage, we’ve got working sensors.  Plus a sweet dropship for a shuttle.  And for once, we didn’t have to spill any blood to get any of it.<br><br>   
 
It’s a good reason to keep on the move and as we pull stakes and leave L2 and DePollo, we’re moving again.  We’ve cargo, we’ve salvage, we’ve got working sensors.  Plus a sweet dropship for a shuttle.  And for once, we didn’t have to spill any blood to get any of it.<br><br>   

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