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Beauty.  Let’s book.<br><br>
 
Beauty.  Let’s book.<br><br>
  
We bid them well and make tracks for ''Lagniappe''. Nika takes the rear of our group, keeping an eye on what’s happening behind us with Schweiss and his contact.  Joshua flanks her and does the same.  The last thing he wants is for either of the two men down below to look up, spy us, and take exception to what we’re doing.  He preps a friendly farewell and is ready to wave: ''thanks for everything, no hard feelings, see you later.''<br><br>
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We bid them well and make tracks for Lagniappe. Nika takes the rear of our group, keeping an eye on what’s happening behind us with Schweiss and his contact.  Joshua flanks her and does the same.  The last thing he wants is for either of the two men down below to look up, spy us, and take exception to what we’re doing.  He preps a friendly farewell and is ready to wave: thanks for everything, no hard feelings, see you later.<br><br>
  
 
The stranger down below gestures for the rest of the men to move in closer.  When he does, we get a glimpse of Schweiss’s expression and we go on alert: it is ashen and nervous. It looks like there’s a double cross going down, just as we’d feared it would. Kiera holds off saying “I told you so”—but only just. Arden asks the rest of us if we’re going to help Schweiss and at first it’s nearly a unanimous ‘no’. Joshua determines the man below does not have blue gloves, but that doesn’t mean the man isn’t dangerous.  There’s also no telling how many people are waiting, possibly armed to the teeth, aboard that 300-tonner.  Joshua intones we should go, just go.  Now.  Rina seconds him.<br><br>
 
The stranger down below gestures for the rest of the men to move in closer.  When he does, we get a glimpse of Schweiss’s expression and we go on alert: it is ashen and nervous. It looks like there’s a double cross going down, just as we’d feared it would. Kiera holds off saying “I told you so”—but only just. Arden asks the rest of us if we’re going to help Schweiss and at first it’s nearly a unanimous ‘no’. Joshua determines the man below does not have blue gloves, but that doesn’t mean the man isn’t dangerous.  There’s also no telling how many people are waiting, possibly armed to the teeth, aboard that 300-tonner.  Joshua intones we should go, just go.  Now.  Rina seconds him.<br><br>
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Oh, shite!  Move.  MOVE!<br><br>
 
Oh, shite!  Move.  MOVE!<br><br>
  
Nika grabs Joshua by the shoulder and hauls the both of them for ''Lagniappe''. Kiera’s grabbing her gun. Nika gets our dropship warmed up for take-off and then dithers. Stay and help Schweiss? Because that’s the good guy thing to do. Or get the hell out?  Joshua’s been trying to avoid a firefight for the past 11 days. He’s urging Nika to go.  Kiera’s all for shooting something.  Rina’s not sure what we can shoot them with, suggesting we dust everyone down with our backwash. Arden points out we have two assault rifles and Kiera’s big-assed shotgun.  Right here in the gun lockers.  See?<br><br>
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Nika grabs Joshua by the shoulder and hauls the both of them for Lagniappe. Kiera’s grabbing her gun. Nika gets our dropship warmed up for take-off and then dithers. Stay and help Schweiss? Because that’s the good guy thing to do. Or get the hell out?  Joshua’s been trying to avoid a firefight for the past 11 days. He’s urging Nika to go.  Kiera’s all for shooting something.  Rina’s not sure what we can shoot them with, suggesting we dust everyone down with our backwash. Arden points out we have two assault rifles and Kiera’s big-assed shotgun.  Right here in the gun lockers.  See?<br><br>
  
 
And he breaks out the party favors.<br><br>
 
And he breaks out the party favors.<br><br>
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Nika: Yup.<br><br>
 
Nika: Yup.<br><br>
  
He parks his butt in the chair and readies ''Lagniappe'' to fly at a second’s notice.  Rina’s aft with the engines to keep everything running smoothly. The rest of us scramble out of the drop ship and advance on the shooters. The shooters aren’t having it easy—after the first shot, everyone else scrambled for cover.  By the time we get our feet on the ground, most have scattered into the cover of the buildings and bullets are flying. <br><br>  
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He parks his butt in the chair and readies Lagniappe to fly at a second’s notice.  Rina’s aft with the engines to keep everything running smoothly. The rest of us scramble out of the drop ship and advance on the shooters. The shooters aren’t having it easy—after the first shot, everyone else scrambled for cover.  By the time we get our feet on the ground, most have scattered into the cover of the buildings and bullets are flying. <br><br>  
  
 
On the bridge, Joshua hits a button and the message that was waiting for us plays, an announcer’s voice booming over the speakers.<br><br>
 
On the bridge, Joshua hits a button and the message that was waiting for us plays, an announcer’s voice booming over the speakers.<br><br>

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