Editing Episode 416: Miranda Calling, Part Four

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'''Kiera:''' Here. Take a drink. C’mon, y’all. This is a celebration. Come on up.<br><br>
 
'''Kiera:''' Here. Take a drink. C’mon, y’all. This is a celebration. Come on up.<br><br>
  
She passes the bottle over. The bottle makes a round and Nika notices someone’s missing.  Nika cranes her head aft, fills her lungs, and calls out.<br><br>
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She passes the bottle over. The bottle makes a round and Nika notices someone’s missing.  Nika cranes her head aft, fills her lungs, and cuts loose a holler.<br><br>
  
 
'''Nika:''' Rina!<br>
 
'''Nika:''' Rina!<br>

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