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'''Kiera:''' It’ll come out easy.  The laser will flash it off really quick.<br><br>
 
'''Kiera:''' It’ll come out easy.  The laser will flash it off really quick.<br><br>
  
She does a more thorough physical examination of his face and skin and something else pings her radar. His skin doesn’t have the usual responsiveness of everyone else’s to being pinched and pressed and prodded. In fact, he is very similar to Joshua—not in appearance but in that his connective tissues and his skin appear to have the same elasticity as Joshua’s.  If she had Joshua’s sonic caelum, she could zip this client into a new face in half the time a normal procedure would require. <br><br>
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She does a more thorough physical examination of his face and skin and something else pings her radar. His skin doesn’t have the usual responsiveness of everyone else’s to being pinched and pressed and prodded. In fact, he is very similar to Joshua—not in appearance but in that his connective tissues and his skin appear to have the same elasticity as Joshua’s.  If she had Joshua’s sonic celum, she could zip this client into a new face in half the time a normal procedure would require. <br><br>
  
 
No blood. Quick-quick. Money-money.<br><br>
 
No blood. Quick-quick. Money-money.<br><br>
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Kiera examines his photos again, before and after the work he’d had done.  Normally when someone comes to a plastic surgeon to have work done, they want to end up prettier or handsomer than when they started.  This guy did it backward. His old face was an appealing trifecta of high cheekbones, straight nose and strong chin.  His current face is … unprepossessing and rounder in structure than the one he wears now.  The only really similar thing across both faces is the fact he’s Asian. no wonder he decided to change back, the real question is why change in the first place?<br><br>  
 
Kiera examines his photos again, before and after the work he’d had done.  Normally when someone comes to a plastic surgeon to have work done, they want to end up prettier or handsomer than when they started.  This guy did it backward. His old face was an appealing trifecta of high cheekbones, straight nose and strong chin.  His current face is … unprepossessing and rounder in structure than the one he wears now.  The only really similar thing across both faces is the fact he’s Asian. no wonder he decided to change back, the real question is why change in the first place?<br><br>  
  
It’s decidedly odd but Kiera has a rule—once you pay her cash, she has no questions.  She also has no qualms about putting her client under and sneaking into Joshua’s quarters to filch the sonic caelum to do the work.  True to his habits, Joshua’s door is unlocked and she ducks in and out without anyone noticing. She has her client looking like his old self in no time.  It’s almost a shame to take his money for so little effort. <br><br>  
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It’s decidedly odd but Kiera has a rule—once you pay her cash, she has no questions.  She also has no qualms about putting her client under and sneaking into Joshua’s quarters to filch the sonic celum to do the work.  True to his habits, Joshua’s door is unlocked and she ducks in and out without anyone noticing. She has her client looking like his old self in no time.  It’s almost a shame to take his money for so little effort. <br><br>  
  
 
Almost. <br><br>  
 
Almost. <br><br>  
  
She hides the sonic caelum in her lab coat pocket as he comes out of the general anesthesia.  He stirs, blinks awake, and tentatively feels his face.<br><br>
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She hides the sonic celum in her lab coat pocket as he comes out of the general anesthesia.  He stirs, blinks awake, and tentatively feels his face.<br><br>
  
 
'''Client:''' No sutures? No … ?<br>
 
'''Client:''' No sutures? No … ?<br>

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