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[[Episode 506: Mortal/Coils, Special Features| Special Features]]<br><br>
 
[[Episode 506: Mortal/Coils, Special Features| Special Features]]<br><br>
  
Not having any more intel to work on, the crew decide they may as well just send some people in. Joshua and Arden head to the Baron's House to scope it out. They get to the neighborhood, not a city street, more of a shady lane. There among the magnolias is a fading mansion. It is overgrown, and seen better days. It doesn't have any obvious signs if electronic security and the waist high stone wall surrounding the property is crumbling in many places. In front of the main entrance is a bouncer. The two approach cautiously. The bouncer assesses them professionally. <br><br>
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Not having any more intel to work on, the crew decide they may as well just send some people in. Joshua and Arden head to the Baron's House to scope it out. They get to the neighborhood, not a city street, more of a shady lane. There among the magnolias is a fading mansion. It is overgrown, and seen better days. It doesn't have any obvious signs if electronic security and the waist high stone wall surrounding the property is crumbling in many places. In front of the main entrance is a bouncer. The two approach cautiously. The bouncer assesses them professionally. <br>
 
 
 
'''Bouncer:''' “Strangers? Well not for long. I don't know who is available tonight, but your welcome to come in. Five credits to get in”<br>
 
'''Bouncer:''' “Strangers? Well not for long. I don't know who is available tonight, but your welcome to come in. Five credits to get in”<br>
 
'''Arden:''' “Many choices?”<br>
 
'''Arden:''' “Many choices?”<br>
'''Bouncer:''' “There are usually a few.”<br><br>
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'''Bouncer:''' “There are usually a few.”<br>
They pay the high cover charge and the bouncer let them pass into the main lobby, entrance hall. There is a fancy staircase winding around one side of the oval hall which opens to the second floor and the domed copula above. Clearly once a living space, the small manse has been converted to a more lucrative purpose. The room is decorated in heavy velvets, there is erotic artwork and fancy chaises. On the far side of the entrance is a replica of a Wurlitzer Jukebox from which emanates appropriate music. There are quite a few people in this room and milling about the lower levels. Some are clearly men negotiating with the ladies of the establishment. But there are others just enjoying a drink, playing pool, or otherwise socializing. They pear to be mostly mid-level managerial types, and a couple of young men, trying to look cleaned up, having saved up a month's pay to come in.<br><br>
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They pay the high cover charge and the bouncer let them pass into the main lobby, entrance hall. There is a fancy staircase winding around one side of the oval hall which opens to the second floor and the domed copula above. Clearly once a living space, the small manse has been converted to a more lucrative purpose. The room is decorated in heavy velvets, there is erotic artwork and fancy chaises. On the far side of the entrance is a replica of a Wurlitzer Jukebox from which emanates appropriate music. There are quite a few people in this room and milling about the lower levels. Some are clearly men negotiating with the ladies of the establishment. But there are others just enjoying a drink, playing pool, or otherwise socializing. They pear to be mostly mid-level managerial types, and a couple of young men, trying to look cleaned up, having saved up a month's pay to come in.<br>
 
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Arden looks about for someone with whom to do business and catches the eyes of somewhat older woman. She approaches.<br>
Arden looks about for someone with whom to do business and catches the eyes of somewhat older woman. She approaches.<br><br>
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'''Madtron:''' “Gentleman, welcome, it isn't often we have strangers. You are new to our establishment, the way we usually do this is that if you have particular interests we try to accommodate you. If not, you are free to spend some time down here, until one of the girls approaches you. You negotiate your desires with the girl. ”<br>  
 
 
'''Matron:''' “Gentleman, welcome, it isn't often we have strangers. You are new to our establishment, the way we usually do this is that if you have particular interests we try to accommodate you. If not, you are free to spend some time down here, until one of the girls approaches you. You negotiate your desires with the girl. ”<br>  
 
 
'''Arden:''' “If one strikes our fancy, can we come to you to express our interest?”<br>
 
'''Arden:''' “If one strikes our fancy, can we come to you to express our interest?”<br>
 
'''Matron:''' “Our girls are pretty perceptive, they will know. And if they are open to it, they will let you know. And of course, you are not to bother any girls who are talking to someone else.”<br>
 
'''Matron:''' “Our girls are pretty perceptive, they will know. And if they are open to it, they will let you know. And of course, you are not to bother any girls who are talking to someone else.”<br>
 
'''Arden:''' “Of course not.”<br>
 
'''Arden:''' “Of course not.”<br>
 
'''Matron:''' “Your entrance fee includes one drink.”<br>
 
'''Matron:''' “Your entrance fee includes one drink.”<br>
'''Joshua:''' “Thank you ma'am”<br><br>
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'''Joshua:''' “Thank you ma'am”<br>
 
 
 
Joshua and Arden split up and scope out the place. The notice the half dozen girls are all smiling and do not appeared abused. One interesting thing is that they each wear a silver collar around their necks, it is undecorated, but pretty. There is also one security man, walking around as well keeping an eye on things. Arden checks out the jukebox, hoping to maybe lure out Lanie with some music from Jiangyin, which he hopes is her home world. The songs listed don't have a genre listed with him, so he can't know where they are from.<br><br>
 
Joshua and Arden split up and scope out the place. The notice the half dozen girls are all smiling and do not appeared abused. One interesting thing is that they each wear a silver collar around their necks, it is undecorated, but pretty. There is also one security man, walking around as well keeping an eye on things. Arden checks out the jukebox, hoping to maybe lure out Lanie with some music from Jiangyin, which he hopes is her home world. The songs listed don't have a genre listed with him, so he can't know where they are from.<br><br>
 
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An attractive red head in her late twenties, early thirties approaches Joshua.<br>
An attractive red head in her late twenties, early thirties approaches Joshua.<br><br>
 
 
 
 
'''Wanda:''' “You don't look familiar”<br>
 
'''Wanda:''' “You don't look familiar”<br>
 
'''Joshua:''' “No ma'am, I'm from out of town”<br>
 
'''Joshua:''' “No ma'am, I'm from out of town”<br>
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'''Joshua:''' “I don't know exactly. Just looking I guess”<br>
 
'''Joshua:''' “I don't know exactly. Just looking I guess”<br>
 
'''Wanda:''' “My name is Wanda”<br>
 
'''Wanda:''' “My name is Wanda”<br>
'''Joshua:''' “It looks like there are a lot of girls here, can you tell me anything about the other girls?”<br><br>
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'''Joshua:''' “It looks like there are a lot of girls here, can you tell me anything about the other girls?”<br>
 
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Wanda frowns slightly, a bit put off by the rejection. <br>
Wanda frowns slightly, a bit put off by the rejection. <br><br>
 
 
 
 
'''Wanda:''' “Is there something you are looking for in particular, something I don't have?” (She straightened up and poses briefly) "Most of the girls here are pretty.. open… to most activities."<br>
 
'''Wanda:''' “Is there something you are looking for in particular, something I don't have?” (She straightened up and poses briefly) "Most of the girls here are pretty.. open… to most activities."<br>
 
'''Joshua:''' “No offense, but I tend to prefer brunettes, generally speaking.”<br>
 
'''Joshua:''' “No offense, but I tend to prefer brunettes, generally speaking.”<br>
'''Wanda:''' “Well there are other gals here. 'll see who I can send your way, Josie over there is very nice, you have a good time now.”<br><br>
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'''Wanda:''' “Well there are other gals here. 'll see who I can send your way, Josie over there is very nice, you have a good time now.”<br>
 
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Joshua thanks her and heads over to Josie, a younger girl dressed somewhat more modestly. She plays coy and pretends to be a shy, but it is clearly an act.  
Joshua thanks her and heads over to Josie, a younger girl dressed somewhat more modestly. She plays coy and pretends to be a shy, but it is clearly an act. <br><br>
 
 
 
 
'''Joshua:''' “Hi my name is Joshua.”<br>
 
'''Joshua:''' “Hi my name is Joshua.”<br>
 
'''Josie:''' “What are doing Joshua?”<br>
 
'''Josie:''' “What are doing Joshua?”<br>
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'''Josie:''' “Well that is why we are here, so let me see if I can help you”<br>
 
'''Josie:''' “Well that is why we are here, so let me see if I can help you”<br>
 
'''Joshua:''' “That would be nice”<br>
 
'''Joshua:''' “That would be nice”<br>
'''Josie:''' “We could go upstairs.” Joshua nods meekly. "That's ten credits."<br><br>
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'''Josie:''' “We could go upstairs.” Joshua nods meekly. "That's ten credits."<br>
 
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Meanwhile Arden is browsing the rooms, not making eye contact with any of the girls, but trying to eavesdrop on conversations going on. After not hearing anything unusual or of interest, he heads back to the matron<br>
Meanwhile Arden is browsing the rooms, not making eye contact with any of the girls, but trying to eavesdrop on conversations going on. After not hearing anything unusual or of interest, he heads back to the matron<br><br>
 
 
 
 
'''Arden:''' “This might seem a little funny, but is it possible to have two women?”<br>
 
'''Arden:''' “This might seem a little funny, but is it possible to have two women?”<br>
 
'''Matron:''' “Oh that is possible, but you'll have to negotiate that with the ladies.”<br>
 
'''Matron:''' “Oh that is possible, but you'll have to negotiate that with the ladies.”<br>
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'''Joshua:''' Anything do to while I wait? Poker, anything?”<br>
 
'''Joshua:''' Anything do to while I wait? Poker, anything?”<br>
 
'''Matron:''' “There is a billiards table in the parlor”<br><br>
 
'''Matron:''' “There is a billiards table in the parlor”<br><br>
 
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Joshua pays Josie, who then hands the money to a bouncer, and heads upstairs with Joshua in tow. once they get to the room. She quickly and matter-of-factly begins to undress.<br>
Joshua pays Josie, who then hands the money to a bouncer, and heads upstairs with Joshua in tow. once they get to the room. She quickly and matter-of-factly begins to undress.<br><br>
 
 
 
 
'''Joshua:''' “So, about the price? Is there a range?”<br>
 
'''Joshua:''' “So, about the price? Is there a range?”<br>
 
'''Josie:''' “You paid the ten, hon, that covers it, unless you want something… unusual.” Joshua shuffles awkwardly. "There is something odd about you Joshua. Is there something special you want? Because, I'll do things, but I don't want to get hurt."<br>
 
'''Josie:''' “You paid the ten, hon, that covers it, unless you want something… unusual.” Joshua shuffles awkwardly. "There is something odd about you Joshua. Is there something special you want? Because, I'll do things, but I don't want to get hurt."<br>
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'''Josie:''' “I understand. I don't know whether to be offended exactly. But..”<br>
 
'''Josie:''' “I understand. I don't know whether to be offended exactly. But..”<br>
 
'''Joshua:''' “No no. it's not that.”<br>
 
'''Joshua:''' “No no. it's not that.”<br>
'''Josie:''' (Somewhat motherly) “It's okay, some men like that, still I'm not sure that I can. Wait we have some things… Look here, why don't you sit down here ” (Patted the big bed.) "Make yourself comfortable."<br><br>
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'''Josie:''' (Somewhat motherly) “It's okay, some men like that, still I'm not sure that I can. Wait we have some things… Look here, why don't you sit down here ” (Patted the big bed.) "Make yourself comfortable."<br>
 
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She goes to an armoire, opens it and reveals a bunch of ''equipment''. She pulls out a strap on. <br>
She goes to an armoire, opens it and reveals a bunch of ''equipment''. She pulls out a strap on. <br><br>
 
 
 
 
'''Josie:''' “Do you want me to use this?”<br>
 
'''Josie:''' “Do you want me to use this?”<br>
 
'''Joshua:''' “No. I ain't looking for Lanie for sex.”<br>
 
'''Joshua:''' “No. I ain't looking for Lanie for sex.”<br>
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'''Josie:''' “Well she's  exotic, I'll say she has that going for her.”<br>
 
'''Josie:''' “Well she's  exotic, I'll say she has that going for her.”<br>
 
'''Joshua:''' “What does she look like?”<br>
 
'''Joshua:''' “What does she look like?”<br>
'''Josie:''' “She's beautiful I guess, different that's for sure.”<br><br>
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'''Josie:''' “She's beautiful I guess, different that's for sure.”<br>
 
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Joshua looking into her mind to get an image of her. He gets an image of striking light skinned African woman, with a long neck and unusual features.  
Joshua looking into her mind to get an image of her. He gets an image of striking light skinned African woman, with a long neck and unusual features. <br><br>
 
 
 
 
'''Joshua:''' “Thank you.”<br>
 
'''Joshua:''' “Thank you.”<br>
 
'''Josie:''' “So, you don't want to.. do anything?”<br>
 
'''Josie:''' “So, you don't want to.. do anything?”<br>
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'''Josie:''' “Great.” She immediately begins to button up, looking a little relieved. <br>
 
'''Josie:''' “Great.” She immediately begins to button up, looking a little relieved. <br>
 
'''Joshua:''' “Will you get in trouble if we leave too soon?”<br>
 
'''Joshua:''' “Will you get in trouble if we leave too soon?”<br>
'''Josie:''' “No, hell, some boys don't last this long.”<br><br>
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'''Josie:''' “No, hell, some boys don't last this long.”<br>
 
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As they finishing dressing, she leads him to the door.<br>
As they finishing dressing, she leads him to the door.<br><br>
 
 
 
 
'''Josie:''' “Now don't get her killed.”<br>
 
'''Josie:''' “Now don't get her killed.”<br>
 
'''Joshua:''' “That's the last thing I want to happen.”<br>
 
'''Joshua:''' “That's the last thing I want to happen.”<br>
 
'''Josie:''' “And don't you fall in love with her.”<br>
 
'''Josie:''' “And don't you fall in love with her.”<br>
 
'''Joshua:''' “You don't have to worry about that either. I've got my own.”<br><br>
 
'''Joshua:''' “You don't have to worry about that either. I've got my own.”<br><br>
 
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Meanwhile downstairs. Arden heads into the Billiards room. As he watches a game, he notices that the level of activity among the servers and security increases slightly. It appears that they are preparing for something.He overhears one say "Go see if Lanie's ready." Arden approaches a guard.<br>
Meanwhile downstairs. Arden heads into the Billiards room. As he watches a game, he notices that the level of activity among the servers and security increases slightly. It appears that they are preparing for something.He overhears one say "Go see if Lanie's ready." Arden approaches a guard.<br><br>
 
 
 
 
'''Arden:''' “Is something going on, is there something I need to be aware of?”<br>
 
'''Arden:''' “Is something going on, is there something I need to be aware of?”<br>
 
'''Server:''' “Oh nothing to worry about.”<br>
 
'''Server:''' “Oh nothing to worry about.”<br>
 
'''Arden:''' “You all look like you are getting ready for something.”<br>
 
'''Arden:''' “You all look like you are getting ready for something.”<br>
 
'''Server:''' “We're just doing our jobs, do you need a drink or something?”<br>
 
'''Server:''' “We're just doing our jobs, do you need a drink or something?”<br>
'''Arden:''' “Yes please”<br><br>
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'''Arden:''' “Yes please”<br>
 
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Arden wanders back to the billiard room, and looks for someone friendly looking with whom he can speak. Most people appear to be enjoying themselves, it is more than a brothel, it is also a social club of sorts, so spirits are high. He inquires casually about what might be the more exotic of fare at the establishment. They are somewhat hesitant to talk about it, but they eventually admit that the girl Lanie is something different and unusual. But, the caution, not on a Thursday night. She always has a date on Thursday nights with the Boss.<br>
Arden wanders back to the billiard room, and looks for someone friendly looking with whom he can speak. Most people appear to be enjoying themselves, it is more than a brothel, it is also a social club of sorts, so spirits are high. He inquires casually about what might be the more exotic of fare at the establishment. They are somewhat hesitant to talk about it, but they eventually admit that the girl Lanie is something different and unusual. But, the caution, not on a Thursday night. She always has a date on Thursday nights with the Boss.<br><br>
 
 
 
 
'''Arden:''' “Judging by the activity, I am guessing he'll be here soon.”<br>
 
'''Arden:''' “Judging by the activity, I am guessing he'll be here soon.”<br>
 
'''Man:''' “Yeah he usually comes in, buys a few drinks, chats with the rank and file, throws some money around and then either goes upstairs, or more likely picks her up.”<br>
 
'''Man:''' “Yeah he usually comes in, buys a few drinks, chats with the rank and file, throws some money around and then either goes upstairs, or more likely picks her up.”<br>
'''Arden:''' “Okay”<br><br>
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'''Arden:''' “Okay”<br>
 
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Arden scans the room searching for a chatty but not necessarily very bright girl to go with upstairs. When he offers one ten credits, she seems very pleased at the unusually large sum. The two ''conduct the transaction'' and afterwards he tries to find out more about the collars.
Arden scans the room searching for a chatty but not necessarily very bright girl to go with upstairs. When he offers one ten credits, she seems very pleased at the unusually large sum. The two ''conduct the transaction'' and afterwards he tries to find out more about the collars.<br><br>
 
 
 
 
'''Girl:''' “We're not supposed to talk about that. It is just what they wear to identify them as employees.”<br>
 
'''Girl:''' “We're not supposed to talk about that. It is just what they wear to identify them as employees.”<br>
 
'''Arden:''' “So you have to wear it when you go into town?”<br>
 
'''Arden:''' “So you have to wear it when you go into town?”<br>
 
'''Girl:''' “We don't go into town”<br>
 
'''Girl:''' “We don't go into town”<br>
 
'''Arden:''' “Sound like you are always here. It must be boring.”<br>
 
'''Arden:''' “Sound like you are always here. It must be boring.”<br>
'''Girl:''' “Not always, every now and then, handsome strangers from outer space come in.<br><br>
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'''Girl:''' “Not always, every now and then, handsome strangers from outer space come in.<br>
 
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Arden attempts to get close to her again, kissing and caressing her in an attempt to get a better look at the collar. She is resistant to his getting at it. He does his best to check it out while positioning her so she can't tell what he is doing back there. Looking carefully, he suspects it is either finely made jewelry without mark or decoration, or some kind of newtech device. It might have electronic components, but there isn't any obvious buttons, clasps or the like. It definitely looks out of place in this Antebellum style mansion. It has a little bit of heft to it, as though it might have internal components. But as soon as it he touches it, she tenses up. He tries to make it seem like his touches are part of the normal activity, but she gets very nervous.<br>
Arden attempts to get close to her again, kissing and caressing her in an attempt to get a better look at the collar. She is resistant to his getting at it. He does his best to check it out while positioning her so she can't tell what he is doing back there. Looking carefully, he suspects it is either finely made jewelry without mark or decoration, or some kind of newtech device. It might have electronic components, but there isn't any obvious buttons, clasps or the like. It definitely looks out of place in this Antebellum style mansion. It has a little bit of heft to it, as though it might have internal components. But as soon as it he touches it, she tenses up. He tries to make it seem like his touches are part of the normal activity, but she gets very nervous.<br><br>
 
 
 
 
'''Girl:''' “If it breaks I'll get into a lot of trouble.”<br>
 
'''Girl:''' “If it breaks I'll get into a lot of trouble.”<br>
After they finish up, Arden sheepishly negotiates a lower price for round two. <br><br>
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After they finish up, Arden sheepishly negotiates a lower price for round two. <br>
 
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While Arden was upstairs. Joshua comes down, and sees some uniformed security people enter the building. Checking the security level, and putting on a bit of a show of their presence. After a moments, they give an okay signal, and in walks an singularly unimpressive man. He looks like a middle-aged low ranking bureaucrat. Although unimpressive personally, he seems fairly self confident. A drink is brought to him, and it is clear, he is a person of importance. A few moments later, a beautiful woman, strolls down the stairs. Joshua pulls his eyes from her to carefully watch the man, memorizing his mannerisms, his face, his gestures, for future use. He has a recognizable look on his face, hopeful, and nervous, excited and enamored. He looks like he might be in love. After they stare into each other's eyes for a moment, another figure enters the scene. A bearded man, casually, but impeccably dressed, probably in his sixties appears. This is clearly the Baron Duerte. He greets the bureaucrat warmly, and they chat for a bit. The bureaucrat, Bannon, takes Lanie's hand, and she seems pleasantly engaged. She doesn't have the skills of a companion to match her looks, but she seems able to look  genuinely happy to see him. During their paling around the Baron slips a small object to Bannon, something about the size of cigarette lighter or case. This complete, they take a short tour of the establishment. Bannon jokes around briefly and awkwardly with his subordinates, and buys a round of drinks. It is clear, that he isn't' there to socialize though. His employees are all attentive to his words, but show visible relief when he moves on and away from them. Meeting the boss at a brothel is a little uncomfortable. Eventually, he and Lanie exit the building. As things settle down, Joshua notes the Baron looking at him with curiosity. He approaches Joshua. <br>
While Arden was upstairs. Joshua comes down, and sees some uniformed security people enter the building. Checking the security level, and putting on a bit of a show of their presence. After a moments, they give an okay signal, and in walks an singularly unimpressive man. He looks like a middle-aged low ranking bureaucrat. Although unimpressive personally, he seems fairly self confident. A drink is brought to him, and it is clear, he is a person of importance. A few moments later, a beautiful woman, strolls down the stairs. Joshua pulls his eyes from her to carefully watch the man, memorizing his mannerisms, his face, his gestures, for future use. He has a recognizable look on his face, hopeful, and nervous, excited and enamored. He looks like he might be in love. After they stare into each other's eyes for a moment, another figure enters the scene. A bearded man, casually, but impeccably dressed, probably in his sixties appears. This is clearly the Baron Duerte. He greets the bureaucrat warmly, and they chat for a bit. The bureaucrat, Bannon, takes Lanie's hand, and she seems pleasantly engaged. She doesn't have the skills of a companion to match her looks, but she seems able to look  genuinely happy to see him. During their paling around the Baron slips a small object to Bannon, something about the size of cigarette lighter or case. This complete, they take a short tour of the establishment. Bannon jokes around briefly and awkwardly with his subordinates, and buys a round of drinks. It is clear, that he isn't' there to socialize though. His employees are all attentive to his words, but show visible relief when he moves on and away from them. Meeting the boss at a brothel is a little uncomfortable. Eventually, he and Lanie exit the building. As things settle down, Joshua notes the Baron looking at him with curiosity. He approaches Joshua. <br><br>
 
 
 
 
'''Duerte:''' “I don't think I've seen you here before.”<br>
 
'''Duerte:''' “I don't think I've seen you here before.”<br>
 
'''Joshua:''' “No. My name is Joshua, we just got into town.”<br>
 
'''Joshua:''' “No. My name is Joshua, we just got into town.”<br>
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'''Joshua:''' “As soon as he is done, I am definitely going to leave.”<br>
 
'''Joshua:''' “As soon as he is done, I am definitely going to leave.”<br>
 
'''Duerte:''' “Don't feel rushed.” (His eyes tell a different message) "Enjoy your drink."<br>
 
'''Duerte:''' “Don't feel rushed.” (His eyes tell a different message) "Enjoy your drink."<br>
'''Joshua:''' “Thank you”<br><br>
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'''Joshua:''' “Thank you”<br>
 
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Duerte takes his leave, then he goes and speaks to the bouncer, directing his attention to Joshua, who stays seated quietly like a good little boy. Arden comes down eventually. <br>
Duerte takes his leave, then he goes and speaks to the bouncer, directing his attention to Joshua, who stays seated quietly like a good little boy. Arden comes down eventually. <br><br>
 
 
 
 
'''Joshua:''' “So Arden, you ready to go? Like Now?”<br>
 
'''Joshua:''' “So Arden, you ready to go? Like Now?”<br>
 
'''Arden:''' “I could be.”<br>
 
'''Arden:''' “I could be.”<br>
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'''Arden:''' “Why?”<br>
 
'''Arden:''' “Why?”<br>
 
'''Joshua:''' “Cause, he knows we were asking around the town.”<br><br>
 
'''Joshua:''' “Cause, he knows we were asking around the town.”<br><br>
 
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They return to the shuttle. The gals are a little stir crazy being couped up in the shuttle.<br>
They return to the shuttle. The gals are a little stir crazy being couped up in the shuttle.<br><br>
 
 
 
 
'''Joshua:''' “Do you want to know what we found out?”<br>
 
'''Joshua:''' “Do you want to know what we found out?”<br>
 
'''Arden:''' “Or do you want to go back to hoarding chocolate?”<br>
 
'''Arden:''' “Or do you want to go back to hoarding chocolate?”<br>
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'''NIka:''' “Who many guards did they have with them when they left?”<br>
 
'''NIka:''' “Who many guards did they have with them when they left?”<br>
 
'''Joshua:''' “Two”<br>
 
'''Joshua:''' “Two”<br>
'''Kiera:''' “So either they went to his place, or one of these town places.”<br><br>
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'''Kiera:''' “So either they went to his place, or one of these town places.”<br>
 
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Based on what the crew has seen, it seems unlikely he took her to one of the fine establishments in town.<br>
Based on what the crew has seen, it seems unlikely he took her to one of the fine establishments in town.<br><br>
 
 
 
 
'''Kiera:''' “So probably to his place.”<br>
 
'''Kiera:''' “So probably to his place.”<br>
 
'''Nika:''' “I'm saying, that if they go out everything Thursday night, and have only two guards. Next Thursday we can drive up and pluck's off the street. ”<br>
 
'''Nika:''' “I'm saying, that if they go out everything Thursday night, and have only two guards. Next Thursday we can drive up and pluck's off the street. ”<br>
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'''Joshua:''' “Good point”<br>
 
'''Joshua:''' “Good point”<br>
 
'''Nika:''' “That would make hitting him today a problem or an opportunity, since the man we'd be fighting has the controller.”<br>
 
'''Nika:''' “That would make hitting him today a problem or an opportunity, since the man we'd be fighting has the controller.”<br>
'''Kiera:''' “Any chance the Brothel might need a doctor?”<br><br>
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'''Kiera:''' “Any chance the Brothel might need a doctor?”<br>
 
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Of course, Arden has already been there. Kiera hasn't, but it might seem suspicious. Having two doctors show up overing their services. <br>
Of course, Arden has already been there. Kiera hasn't, but it might seem suspicious. Having two doctors show up overing their services. <br><br>
 
 
 
 
'''Rina:''' “I say we go in tonight, smash and grab?”<br>
 
'''Rina:''' “I say we go in tonight, smash and grab?”<br>
 
'''Kiera:''' “Smash and grab eight girls”<br>
 
'''Kiera:''' “Smash and grab eight girls”<br>
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'''Kiera:''' “Captain?”<br>
 
'''Kiera:''' “Captain?”<br>
 
'''Arden:''' “Captain?”<br>
 
'''Arden:''' “Captain?”<br>
'''Nika:''' “I'll leave that up to the four of you.”<br><br>
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'''Nika:''' “I'll leave that up to the four of you.”<br>
 
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The assembled crew grumbles and rejects her rejection of command.  
The assembled crew grumbles and rejects her rejection of command.<br><br>
 
 
 
'''Nika:''' “Well I don't think it's right to leave. If it were another planet with some guy running a whore house where the girls had to work, but weren't trapped there, that would be one thing. But its another thing, with them unable to leave like slaves. It ain't right.”<br>
 
'''Nika:''' “Well I don't think it's right to leave. If it were another planet with some guy running a whore house where the girls had to work, but weren't trapped there, that would be one thing. But its another thing, with them unable to leave like slaves. It ain't right.”<br>
 
'''Arden:''' “None of this is right!”<br>
 
'''Arden:''' “None of this is right!”<br>

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