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His father pats him and the message is loud and clear: ''Sh-hhh. It’s going to be okay''.<br><br>
 
His father pats him and the message is loud and clear: ''Sh-hhh. It’s going to be okay''.<br><br>
  
Father: I’m going to go talk to, ah, the Captain of the ship. And let him know that you’re okay.<br>
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Father: I’m going to go talk to, ah, the Captain of the ship. And let her know that you’re okay.<br>
 
Joshua: (lost) … Okay … (tries again) … Well, it’s … it’s good to see you. I … I missed you.<br><br>
 
Joshua: (lost) … Okay … (tries again) … Well, it’s … it’s good to see you. I … I missed you.<br><br>
  

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