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'''Guard:''' Put your gun on the floor where we can see it. Put your gun in the corridor and step out where we can see you.<br><br>
 
'''Guard:''' Put your gun on the floor where we can see it. Put your gun in the corridor and step out where we can see you.<br><br>
  
Arden complies and steps out where they can see him. One of the guards comes up behind Rina and pulls her wrists down and zip ties them.  She lets him, suppressing a flinch.  Having people at her back where she can’t see them really ''really'' hinks her, but she doesn’t resist. He hauls her by the elbow to her feet.  The angle and the pressure stresses her injuries and the pain is intense. She yells and staggers.<br><br>
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Arden complies and steps out where they can see him. One of the guards comes up behind Rina and pulls her wrists down and zip ties them.  She lets him, suppressing a flinch.  Having people at her back where she can’t see them really really hinks her, but she doesn’t resist. He hauls her by the elbow to her feet.  The angle and the pressure stresses her injuries and the pain is intense. She yells and staggers.<br><br>
  
 
'''Rina:''' ''Aughh!'' Ow, ow, ow—(coughs)—[[Episode 510: St. Albans Secrets, Special Features#HOW TO SPEAK RUSSIAN|''Bozhe moi!'']] Ow! Aughh …<br>  
 
'''Rina:''' ''Aughh!'' Ow, ow, ow—(coughs)—[[Episode 510: St. Albans Secrets, Special Features#HOW TO SPEAK RUSSIAN|''Bozhe moi!'']] Ow! Aughh …<br>  
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'''Guard:''' I can shoot you here or you can put your hands behind your back. I rarely miss at this range.<br><br>
 
'''Guard:''' I can shoot you here or you can put your hands behind your back. I rarely miss at this range.<br><br>
  
Sucking down air against the pain, the thought wanders through Rina’s head that ‘rarely miss’ implies the guard might actually miss.  She shoves the thought down.  With her injuries riled and pounded by pain, with her hands tied behind her and saddled with a partner who is clueless as to tactics, Rina knows the odds are stacked too high against her.  It’s no longer a matter of trying to fight her way free.  It’s all about buying her crew time to get away.<br><br>  
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Sucking down air against the pain, the thought wanders through Rina’s head that ‘rarely miss’ implies the guard might actually miss.  She shoves the thought down.  With her her injuries riled and pounded by pain, with her hands tied behind her and saddled with a partner who is clueless as to tactics, Rina knows the odds are stacked too high against her.  It’s no longer a matter of trying to fight her way free.  It’s all about buying her crew time to get away.<br><br>  
  
 
Arden puts his hands behind his back. The guard relieves him of his flashlight, clipped on his belt for hands-free use.<br><br>
 
Arden puts his hands behind his back. The guard relieves him of his flashlight, clipped on his belt for hands-free use.<br><br>

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