Editing Episode 511: A Matter of Leverage, Part Five

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Outside, Arden sees his two crewmates go down and his finger tightens on his pistol’s trigger. Arden slams the butt of his pistol on Straitjacket’s head going for a knock-out. He deals a glancing blow.<br><br>
 
Outside, Arden sees his two crewmates go down and his finger tightens on his pistol’s trigger. Arden slams the butt of his pistol on Straitjacket’s head going for a knock-out. He deals a glancing blow.<br><br>
  
'''Straitjacket:''' ''Ow!''<br>
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'''Straitjacket:''' Ow!<br>
'''Nika:''' (best Captain’s voice) ''Everybody '''stop!'''''<br><br>
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'''Nika:''' (best Captain’s voice) Everybody stop!<br><br>
  
 
Nika steps in and hauls the man off Rina by his jacket straps and puts him on the floor.  The man in the straitjacket is in his mid-thirties, brown on blue, and under other circumstances might be considered ruggedly handsome.  Right now, though, his hair is hanging in his eyes and his expression has a decidedly belligerent cast to it. His tone matches it as he snarls up at Nika.<br><br>
 
Nika steps in and hauls the man off Rina by his jacket straps and puts him on the floor.  The man in the straitjacket is in his mid-thirties, brown on blue, and under other circumstances might be considered ruggedly handsome.  Right now, though, his hair is hanging in his eyes and his expression has a decidedly belligerent cast to it. His tone matches it as he snarls up at Nika.<br><br>
  
'''Straitjacket:''' ''Who are you?''<br>
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'''Straitjacket:''' Who are you?<br>
 
'''Nika:''' The person who was plannin’ on takin’ you out of here unless you keep beating up my crew.<br><br>
 
'''Nika:''' The person who was plannin’ on takin’ you out of here unless you keep beating up my crew.<br><br>
  
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'''Nika:''' Anybody fighters?<br>
 
'''Nika:''' Anybody fighters?<br>
 
'''Straitjacket:''' Uh. Yeah.<br>
 
'''Straitjacket:''' Uh. Yeah.<br>
'''Nika:''' (to Bad Ass) ''Besides'' you. We know ''you’re'' a fighter.<br>
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'''Nika:''' (to Bad Ass) Besides you. We know you’re a fighter.<br>
 
'''Arden:''' Wake up, Joshua. (slaps him gently)<br>
 
'''Arden:''' Wake up, Joshua. (slaps him gently)<br>
 
'''Bad Ass:''' Well, ma’am … despite our delicate appearance some of us have tussled about.<br>
 
'''Bad Ass:''' Well, ma’am … despite our delicate appearance some of us have tussled about.<br>
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'''Reynolds:''' Jayne. See if you can pull Simon up.<br>
 
'''Reynolds:''' Jayne. See if you can pull Simon up.<br>
 
'''Jayne:''' I can’t believe you’re gonna be trustin’ these gorram fools.<br>
 
'''Jayne:''' I can’t believe you’re gonna be trustin’ these gorram fools.<br>
'''Rina:''' (eyes Jayne) Nice to meet you, ''sir''.<br>
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'''Rina:''' (eyes Jayne) Nice to meet you, sir.<br>
 
'''Reynolds:''' They’re here to rescue us. C’mon.<br>
 
'''Reynolds:''' They’re here to rescue us. C’mon.<br>
 
'''Jayne:''' (sneers) Big damn heroes.<br>
 
'''Jayne:''' (sneers) Big damn heroes.<br>
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Everyone’s on their feet and brushing off.  We fetch the rest of Reynolds’s crew from the other room. Jayne reappears with a dark-haired man who’s clearly been ridden hard and put up wet. He’s in pretty bad shape. Joshua recognizes him with a start—this is the man he’d seen tied up and tortured on the machine. Introductions are made all around and at the mention of the man’s name, Nika’s head whips around.<br><br>
 
Everyone’s on their feet and brushing off.  We fetch the rest of Reynolds’s crew from the other room. Jayne reappears with a dark-haired man who’s clearly been ridden hard and put up wet. He’s in pretty bad shape. Joshua recognizes him with a start—this is the man he’d seen tied up and tortured on the machine. Introductions are made all around and at the mention of the man’s name, Nika’s head whips around.<br><br>
  
'''Nika:''' ''What?''<br>
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'''Nika:''' What?<br>
 
'''Rina:''' Simon Tam—Oh my God. ''Brian''.<br>
 
'''Rina:''' Simon Tam—Oh my God. ''Brian''.<br>
 
'''Nika:''' Uhn, we don’t have time for this. Go. Go-go-go. <br>
 
'''Nika:''' Uhn, we don’t have time for this. Go. Go-go-go. <br>
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'''Zoe:''' If you aren’t professional soldiers …. I was a corporal.<br>
 
'''Zoe:''' If you aren’t professional soldiers …. I was a corporal.<br>
 
'''Joshua:''' I don’t have any gun.  Someone give her a gun.<br>
 
'''Joshua:''' I don’t have any gun.  Someone give her a gun.<br>
'''Nika:''' We don’t have time for this. (fed up) ''Go''. <br><br>
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'''Nika:''' We don’t have time for this. (fed up) Go. <br><br>
  
 
We hustle for the next level up, a party of eleven, a whole damn squad. We hit the elevator shaft and the ladder again. Nika remarks that we need someone to reassure the little girl that everything’s okay and Joshua opines she’s a cutie.  Hopefully, one of LaSalle’s party is doing just that—reassuring the little girl that everything’s okay.  We climb on, eager to put mother and daughter back together again.  Nika calls down to Reynolds as we climb.<br><br>
 
We hustle for the next level up, a party of eleven, a whole damn squad. We hit the elevator shaft and the ladder again. Nika remarks that we need someone to reassure the little girl that everything’s okay and Joshua opines she’s a cutie.  Hopefully, one of LaSalle’s party is doing just that—reassuring the little girl that everything’s okay.  We climb on, eager to put mother and daughter back together again.  Nika calls down to Reynolds as we climb.<br><br>
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'''Reynolds:''' Her name’s River.<br>
 
'''Reynolds:''' Her name’s River.<br>
 
'''Joshua:''' I know her.<br>
 
'''Joshua:''' I know her.<br>
'''Rina:''' Okay, can we do the Old Home Week thing ''after'' we escape from here?<br><br>
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'''Rina:''' Okay, can we do the Old Home Week thing after we escape from here?<br><br>
  
 
We gain the third level elevator doors and pry them open.  Climbing out we find our allies have secured the level.  There were only two guards to secure because everyone else had left the level, pulling up to the upper levels. The elevator was called down below, so they weren’t able to go up through the levels to the surface and the way out. <br><br>
 
We gain the third level elevator doors and pry them open.  Climbing out we find our allies have secured the level.  There were only two guards to secure because everyone else had left the level, pulling up to the upper levels. The elevator was called down below, so they weren’t able to go up through the levels to the surface and the way out. <br><br>
  
We take stock of the weapons they managed to cadge—the two guards only had pistols and the kitchen gave up knives. Otherwise, what weapons we’ve got are what the ''Equinox'' crew managed to capture.<br><br>
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We take stock of the weapons they managed to cadge—the two guards only had pistols and the kitchen gave up knives. Otherwise, what weapons we’ve got are what the Equinox crew managed to capture.<br><br>
  
 
'''Nika:''' (sour) Fabulous.  Here …<br><br>
 
'''Nika:''' (sour) Fabulous.  Here …<br><br>
  
She passes Zoe her assault rifle and takes up the pistol from the guards.  A gun isn’t all Zoe gets—there’s a squeal and a blond tornado barrels into Zoe and the woman sweeps her daughter up in her arms. She rocks her child in that swaying motion parents instinctively engage when holding their young and Zoe runs her hands over her daughter, soothing her down and surreptitiously checking for injuries. Zoe murmurs endearments, oblivious to the rest of us, and we catch the little girl’s name: Ning Jing.  ''Serenity'', in Chinese.  N.J. for short.<br><br>  
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She passes Zoe her assault rifle and takes up the pistol from the guards.  A gun isn’t all Zoe gets—there’s a squeal and a blond tornado barrels into Zoe and the woman sweeps her daughter up in her arms. She rocks her child in that swaying motion parents instinctively engage when holding their young and Zoe runs her hands over her daughter, soothing her down and surreptitiously checking for injuries. Zoe murmurs endearments, oblivious to the rest of us, and we catch the little girl’s name: Ning Jing.  Serenity, in Chinese.  N.J. for short.<br><br>  
  
 
It’s an intense moment and we’re all a little misty when it’s over.  We shake ourselves and get back to business.<br><br>
 
It’s an intense moment and we’re all a little misty when it’s over.  We shake ourselves and get back to business.<br><br>
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'''Nika:''' Back up the ladder, everybody.  Move.<br><br>
 
'''Nika:''' Back up the ladder, everybody.  Move.<br><br>
  
Before we can troop down the corridor to the elevator, a flash and a bang comes from the far end.  We spin toward the light and the noise, all our weapons up.  Smoke curls out of the doorway as two figures emerge from it. It is the woman without a name from ''IAV Aceso'', who we’ve pegged as The Psychiatrist. And … beside her is her assistant from Kiera’s interview. <br><br>  
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Before we can troop down the corridor to the elevator, a flash and a bang comes from the far end.  We spin toward the light and the noise, all our weapons up.  Smoke curls out of the doorway as two figures emerge from it. It is the woman without a name from IAV Aceso, who we’ve pegged as The Psychiatrist. And … beside her is her assistant from Kiera’s interview. <br><br>  
  
 
It’s River Tam. And she doesn’t look happy. Not one bit.<br><br>
 
It’s River Tam. And she doesn’t look happy. Not one bit.<br><br>

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