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The cargo ramp slams down and squashes Kappa to a red smear. Joshua rolls and it misses him by mere inches.<br><br> | The cargo ramp slams down and squashes Kappa to a red smear. Joshua rolls and it misses him by mere inches.<br><br> | ||
− | '''Score:''' Kappa’s dead, River’s stiff, Joshua’s alive.<br><br> | + | '''Score:''' Kappa’s dead as a doornail, River’s stiff as a board, Joshua’s alive by a cat’s whisker.<br><br> |
Joshua picks himself up and goes over to River. She’s stiff and still and Joshua picks her up in his arms and carries her aboard ''Serenity''. If he’s lucky, there’s an infirmary aboard.<br><br> | Joshua picks himself up and goes over to River. She’s stiff and still and Joshua picks her up in his arms and carries her aboard ''Serenity''. If he’s lucky, there’s an infirmary aboard.<br><br> |