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'''Tuesday, 22 Sep 2522'''<br><br>
 
'''Tuesday, 22 Sep 2522'''<br><br>
  
Kiera uses her underworld connections to find a sharper sensor package for our girl. She finds someone who might have what we need, a purveyor of used parts and ‘unclaimed stuff’. She arranges a meet with one [[Episode 601: Triumph, Special Features#GALLERY OF GUEST STARS|Mr. James Brion]]. Kiera also suspects that Brion is like-minded with our Captain and that could be an advantage to us. The time is set upon and Kiera announces she might have found our package.<br><br>
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Kiera uses her underworld connections to find a sharper sensor package for our girl. She finds someone who might have what we need, a purveyor of used parts and ‘unclaimed stuff’. She arranges a meet with one Mr. James Brion. Kiera also suspects that Brion is like-minded with our Captain and that could be an advantage to us. The time is set upon and Kiera announces she might have found our package.<br><br>
  
 
'''Rina:''' Do you want me to come with you? I can tell you if it’s worth it or not.<br>
 
'''Rina:''' Do you want me to come with you? I can tell you if it’s worth it or not.<br>
 
'''Kiera:''' Oh, yeah. Absolutely. Goody. Cuz I don’t know anything about pricing out this stuff.<br><br>
 
'''Kiera:''' Oh, yeah. Absolutely. Goody. Cuz I don’t know anything about pricing out this stuff.<br><br>
  
Rina steps off the ship wearing her usual suspects and Kiera brings along a pistol. They take the bus. It’s a gritty, grimy, smelly ride but the other options for transportation would be using either ''Lagniappe'' or the armored car we’d gotten from Saul Li, which would make us look more kinds of rich than Kiera wants to look. It would screw up the bargaining and she’s in the mood to bargain. So they get on the bus and endure the End-of-Days ramblings of a bum in a thong and a raincoat, then gratefully get off at the nearest stop to Brion’s and walk the rest of the way.<br><br>
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Rina steps off the ship wearing her usual suspects and Kiera brings along a pistol. They take the bus. It’s a gritty, grimy, smelly ride but the other options for transportation would be using either Lagniappe or the armored car we’d gotten from Saul Li, which would make us look more kinds of rich than Kiera wants to look. It would screw up the bargaining and she’s in the mood to bargain. So they get on the bus and endure the End-of-Days ramblings of a bum in a thong and a raincoat, then gratefully get off at the nearest stop to Brion’s and walk the rest of the way.<br><br>
  
 
It’s in a bad part of town. Tumbledown warehouses dominate the landscape, as do razor wire. The yards for them are at least a city block large. Byron’s announces it has spaceship parts and they can see that the garage is a rough sort of shop. They have to run the gauntlet of catcalls from the goon squad guarding the yard. The language is as rough as the neighborhood and multilingual. Rina draws breath to answer back in kind and Kiera elbows her to shut up. Rina manages to restrain herself and they make it through without bloodshed. <br><br>
 
It’s in a bad part of town. Tumbledown warehouses dominate the landscape, as do razor wire. The yards for them are at least a city block large. Byron’s announces it has spaceship parts and they can see that the garage is a rough sort of shop. They have to run the gauntlet of catcalls from the goon squad guarding the yard. The language is as rough as the neighborhood and multilingual. Rina draws breath to answer back in kind and Kiera elbows her to shut up. Rina manages to restrain herself and they make it through without bloodshed. <br><br>
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'''Kiera:''' Why don’t we see the boss and see if we’re interested? <br><br>
 
'''Kiera:''' Why don’t we see the boss and see if we’re interested? <br><br>
  
A couple of the other mechanics walk over in a menacing way. They’ve got wrenches and other hard-looking tools in hand. Rina gives Kiera an ''are-they-shittin’-me?'' look. Kiera eyerolls her silent affirmation before turning back to the mechanic.<br><br>
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A couple of the other mechanics walk over in a menacing way. They’ve got wrenches and other hard-looking tools in hand. Rina gives Kiera an are-they-shittin’-me? look. Kiera eyerolls her silent affirmation before turning back to the mechanic.<br><br>
  
'''Kiera:''' I turn up in this part of town to buy something and you’re gonna beat me senseless with a wrench. This is ''really'' sucky for business.<br>
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'''Kiera:''' I turn up in this part of town to buy something and you’re gonna beat me senseless with a wrench. This is really sucky for business.<br>
 
'''Mechanic:''' If you just give me the money, maybe you’ll get something nice in return.<br><br>
 
'''Mechanic:''' If you just give me the money, maybe you’ll get something nice in return.<br><br>
  
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'''Kiera:''' Good boys. ''She’s'' trigger-happy. And ''I'' wanna spend some money. So ... it would work out much better if you would let me spend money by telling your boss I would like to spend money.<br><br>
 
'''Kiera:''' Good boys. ''She’s'' trigger-happy. And ''I'' wanna spend some money. So ... it would work out much better if you would let me spend money by telling your boss I would like to spend money.<br><br>
  
The men steer Kiera and Rina toward the boss. Taking a look around and searching her memory, Kiera’s fairly certain that the boss was an Independence officer during the war. Now he’s a medium-time thug—bigger than small-time, not as successful as big-time. He’s not handsome, either, as we see for ourselves when he walks up. The war and the years since have not been kind to Mr. James Brion. Still, he’s the man with what we need—or he might have what we need—and he’s in front of us now. Best we get to business.<br><br>
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The men steer Kiera and Rina toward the boss. Taking a look around and searching her memory, Kiera’s fairly certain that the boss was an Independence officer during the war. Now he’s a medium-time thug—bigger than small-time, not as successful as big-time. He’s not handsome, either, as we see for ourselves when he walks up. The war and the years since have not been kind to [[Episode 601: Triumph, Special Features#Gallery Of Guest Stars|Mr. James Brion]]. Still, he’s the man with what we need—or he might have what we need—and he’s in front of us now. Best we get to business.<br><br>
  
 
'''Kiera:''' Nice to meet you, Mr. Brion.<br>
 
'''Kiera:''' Nice to meet you, Mr. Brion.<br>
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'''Brion:''' Where’s your ship fly?<br>
 
'''Brion:''' Where’s your ship fly?<br>
 
'''Kiera:''' Everywhere.<br>
 
'''Kiera:''' Everywhere.<br>
'''Brion:''' ''Every''where?<br>
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'''Brion:''' Everywhere?<br>
 
'''Kiera:''' Everywhere. (thinks) So far, everywhere.<br>
 
'''Kiera:''' Everywhere. (thinks) So far, everywhere.<br>
 
'''Brion:''' Are you, ah, Union flagged?<br>
 
'''Brion:''' Are you, ah, Union flagged?<br>
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'''Kiera:''' Fair enough.<br><br>
 
'''Kiera:''' Fair enough.<br><br>
  
And their ride home, courtesy of Brion, is a semi-truck. Kiera and Rina arrive at ''Equinox'' with a chatter of air brakes and a cough of black exhaust and jump off. Joshua stands on the cargo ramp and stares. Rina pauses to talk to the driver.<br><br>
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And their ride home, courtesy of Brion, is a semi-truck. Kiera and Rina arrive at Equinox with a chatter of air brakes and a cough of black exhaust and jump off. Joshua stands on the cargo ramp and stares. Rina pauses to talk to the driver.<br><br>
  
 
'''Rina:''' How’s the engine run?<br>
 
'''Rina:''' How’s the engine run?<br>
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We’re going to have to figure out how to install it ourselves. It’s also too big to carry. It’s about the size of an old 16-cylinder engine. Rina gets a hand truck to cart the shiny new(ish) toy away before Nika totally blows a gasket.<br><br>
 
We’re going to have to figure out how to install it ourselves. It’s also too big to carry. It’s about the size of an old 16-cylinder engine. Rina gets a hand truck to cart the shiny new(ish) toy away before Nika totally blows a gasket.<br><br>
  
'''Nika:''' What the bloody hell? ''Kiera!''<br>
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'''Nika:''' What the bloody hell? Kiera!<br>
 
'''Kiera:''' Captain? Oh, I got a job for us. Red Sun. Triumph.<br>
 
'''Kiera:''' Captain? Oh, I got a job for us. Red Sun. Triumph.<br>
 
'''Nika:''' What gives?<br>
 
'''Nika:''' What gives?<br>
 
'''Kiera:''' He’s a Browncoat. Got a job for us. We got the sensor package for two thousand credits. For three thousan—<br>
 
'''Kiera:''' He’s a Browncoat. Got a job for us. We got the sensor package for two thousand credits. For three thousan—<br>
'''Nika:''' For ''how much?!''<br>
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'''Nika:''' For how much?!<br>
 
'''Kiera:''' Two thousand.<br>
 
'''Kiera:''' Two thousand.<br>
'''Nika:''' ''And?''<br>
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'''Nika:''' And?<br>
 
'''Joshua:''' (Joining in) Actually, that’s not a bad price, Captain. It’s not hideous.<br>
 
'''Joshua:''' (Joining in) Actually, that’s not a bad price, Captain. It’s not hideous.<br>
 
'''Kiera:''' It’s normally five.<br>
 
'''Kiera:''' It’s normally five.<br>
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'''Kiera:''' Two thousand and the job.<br>
 
'''Kiera:''' Two thousand and the job.<br>
 
'''Nika:''' (Groaning) Oh, Mother of God.<br>
 
'''Nika:''' (Groaning) Oh, Mother of God.<br>
'''Kiera:''' He’s a ''Browncoat''. Come on. Don’cha—<br>
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'''Kiera:''' He’s a Browncoat. Come on. Don’cha—<br>
'''Nika:''' I don’t have an issue with the ''job''. I have an issue with how much you paid for the sensors.<br><br>  
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'''Nika:''' I don’t have an issue with the job. I have an issue with how much you paid for the sensors.<br><br>  
  
 
Nika nails Kiera with a gimlet stare.<br><br>
 
Nika nails Kiera with a gimlet stare.<br><br>
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'''Arden:''' (joining in) Containers of what?<br>
 
'''Arden:''' (joining in) Containers of what?<br>
 
'''Kiera:''' Let me repeat again—why would I ask?<br>
 
'''Kiera:''' Let me repeat again—why would I ask?<br>
'''Arden:''' Why ''wouldn’t'' you ask?<br>
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'''Arden:''' Why wouldn’t you ask?<br>
'''Kiera:''' Okay, do you ''not'' understand how I work?<br>
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'''Kiera:''' Okay, do you not understand how I work?<br>
 
'''Rina:''' (pushing the package) Because it would make us look suspicious and untrustworthy if we asked.<br>
 
'''Rina:''' (pushing the package) Because it would make us look suspicious and untrustworthy if we asked.<br>
 
'''Arden:''' Oh, as opposed to looking stupid and unprepared if we don’t ask?<br>
 
'''Arden:''' Oh, as opposed to looking stupid and unprepared if we don’t ask?<br>
 
'''Joshua:''' I would like to repeat that we really are suspicious.<br>
 
'''Joshua:''' I would like to repeat that we really are suspicious.<br>
'''Nika:''' Let me rephrase it this way—you got a job from a guy who ''admitted'' to being Browncoat. How’d you ''get'' the job?<br>
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'''Nika:''' Let me rephrase it this way—you got a job from a guy who admitted to being Browncoat. How’d you get the job?<br>
 
'''Kiera:''' In exchange for the three thousand.<br>
 
'''Kiera:''' In exchange for the three thousand.<br>
'''Arden:''' No, no. What she’s asking is ''why'' is he going to give ''us'' the job?<br>
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'''Arden:''' No, no. What she’s asking is why is he going to give us the job?<br>
 
'''Nika:''' Yeah.<br>
 
'''Nika:''' Yeah.<br>
 
'''Kiera:''' Because he made reference to ‘Hmm. Is your Captain a crazy Browncoat traitor?’ And I said, ‘No, she ain’t crazy.’<br><br>
 
'''Kiera:''' Because he made reference to ‘Hmm. Is your Captain a crazy Browncoat traitor?’ And I said, ‘No, she ain’t crazy.’<br><br>
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'''Nika:''' Because we ain’t got it!<br>
 
'''Nika:''' Because we ain’t got it!<br>
 
'''Joshua:''' Actually, what are you talkin’ about? Oh. Right. I forgot. I haven’t been telling you anything about our money. (a beat) We have the money.<br>
 
'''Joshua:''' Actually, what are you talkin’ about? Oh. Right. I forgot. I haven’t been telling you anything about our money. (a beat) We have the money.<br>
'''Nika:''' ''What?''<br>
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'''Nika:''' What?<br>
 
'''Joshua:''' You don’t ask. So I don’t tell. You trust me to keep the finances and I figured this was a good way to expend the money.<br><br>
 
'''Joshua:''' You don’t ask. So I don’t tell. You trust me to keep the finances and I figured this was a good way to expend the money.<br><br>
  
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'''Rina:''' (walking in) And now we’ll run half a ton lighter. Because gold is heavy.<br>
 
'''Rina:''' (walking in) And now we’ll run half a ton lighter. Because gold is heavy.<br>
'''Nika:''' So we’re runnin’ ten ton of crates to ''where'' in Red Sun?<br>
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'''Nika:''' So we’re runnin’ ten ton of crates to where in Red Sun?<br>
 
'''Rina:''' Triumph.<br>
 
'''Rina:''' Triumph.<br>
 
'''Nika:''' All right. (to Kiera) And he’ll let me know the time table.<br>
 
'''Nika:''' All right. (to Kiera) And he’ll let me know the time table.<br>

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