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[[Episode 602: Quarry Special Features|Special Features]]<br><br>
 
[[Episode 602: Quarry Special Features|Special Features]]<br><br>
  
Joshua: Oh, ''hey!'' Hey. ''Man'' … okay. Like … Am I, like … I’m peaceful. I got no weapons on me at all.<br><br>
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Joshua: Oh, hey! Hey. Man … okay. Like … Am I, like … I’m peaceful. I got no weapons on me at all.<br><br>
  
 
From her vantage point, Kiera puts the Fed solidly in her sights and starts calculating the distance for her shot.<br><br>
 
From her vantage point, Kiera puts the Fed solidly in her sights and starts calculating the distance for her shot.<br><br>
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Fed: Go to the car.<br>
 
Fed: Go to the car.<br>
 
Joshua: All right. Um .. uh….<br>
 
Joshua: All right. Um .. uh….<br>
Fed: ''Move it''.<br>
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Fed: Move it.<br>
 
Joshua: All right, all right!<br><br>
 
Joshua: All right, all right!<br><br>
  
 
Joshua stumbles toward the car. Inside the car, Rina’s still yanking wires but she listens carefully to their approach. She’s still down out of sight but she’s got her feet ready to kick the door open if the Fed comes up on that side. Joshua plays up being the slightly-dazed druggie. He stumbles some more, slowing the Fed down and buying Rina more time.<br><br>
 
Joshua stumbles toward the car. Inside the car, Rina’s still yanking wires but she listens carefully to their approach. She’s still down out of sight but she’s got her feet ready to kick the door open if the Fed comes up on that side. Joshua plays up being the slightly-dazed druggie. He stumbles some more, slowing the Fed down and buying Rina more time.<br><br>
  
Joshua: It’s dark out here, ''man'', like … Like … ''dark''. It’s not like I got superhuman powers or anything. I’m makin’ my way to the car as fast as I can, like …<br><br>
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Joshua: It’s dark out here, man, like … Like … dark. It’s not like I got superhuman powers or anything. I’m makin’ my way to the car as fast as I can, like …<br><br>
  
 
He’s not, really. He’s going pretty slow.<br><br>
 
He’s not, really. He’s going pretty slow.<br><br>
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Joshua is closer to the car and has to choose which side to approach. He moves closer and then turns, walking sideways as he talks to the Fed.<br><br>
 
Joshua is closer to the car and has to choose which side to approach. He moves closer and then turns, walking sideways as he talks to the Fed.<br><br>
  
Joshua: Man, my girlfriend’s gonna ''kill'' me. Just … let me go. Like, she’s … she’s just, she’s, like, ''nice'' and all—and she ''puts out''—but she’s a real bitch when I do something stupid. And you may have gathered, I do stupid crap all the time. But look, I can get you some of the weed, like, if you want the weed. I mean, you can take it in, like, a big bust or something. I mean, that’s how they say it in all the cop shows, right? A big bust?<br><br>
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Joshua: Man, my girlfriend’s gonna kill me. Just … let me go. Like, she’s … she’s just, she’s, like, nice and all—and she puts out—but she’s a real bitch when I do something stupid. And you may have gathered, I do stupid crap all the time. But look, I can get you some of the weed, like, if you want the weed. I mean, you can take it in, like, a big bust or something. I mean, that’s how they say it in all the cop shows, right? A big bust?<br><br>
  
 
Joshua gestures as he walks and Kiera can see the pantomime through her scope.<br><br>
 
Joshua gestures as he walks and Kiera can see the pantomime through her scope.<br><br>
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Fed: Put your hands on the hood of the car.<br>
 
Fed: Put your hands on the hood of the car.<br>
Joshua: All right, all right … Like, um … okay … you want me over ''here''?<br><br>  
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Joshua: All right, all right … Like, um … okay … you want me over here?<br><br>  
  
 
Inside the car, Rina knows there’s no shooting the Fed through the bullet proof glass, even if stealth was not an overriding requirement. The ricochet would bounce around and quite possibly kill her.<br><br>  
 
Inside the car, Rina knows there’s no shooting the Fed through the bullet proof glass, even if stealth was not an overriding requirement. The ricochet would bounce around and quite possibly kill her.<br><br>  
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Rina turns that sucker on: '''FLASH!'''<br><br>
 
Rina turns that sucker on: '''FLASH!'''<br><br>
  
Fed: ''Aughhh!''<br><br>
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Fed: Aughhh!<br><br>
  
 
The Fed throws an arm over his eyes, but it’s too late. The searchlight stabs his dark-adapted eyes and the man is dazzled.  He staggers back. Unfortunately, Joshua looks at the cab of the car, checking for Rina inside, and gets hit obliquely in the eyes by the spotlight as well. He blinks and then goes hand-to-hand with the Fed so Rina can slip away.<br><br>  
 
The Fed throws an arm over his eyes, but it’s too late. The searchlight stabs his dark-adapted eyes and the man is dazzled.  He staggers back. Unfortunately, Joshua looks at the cab of the car, checking for Rina inside, and gets hit obliquely in the eyes by the spotlight as well. He blinks and then goes hand-to-hand with the Fed so Rina can slip away.<br><br>  
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Kiera: Dammit, Nika, they’re on the move and I can’t get ahold of them. They’ve disabled one and the car, and the two are heading for them. Maybe. I’m still watching. Hold target until it looks like they actually see our guys?<br>
 
Kiera: Dammit, Nika, they’re on the move and I can’t get ahold of them. They’ve disabled one and the car, and the two are heading for them. Maybe. I’m still watching. Hold target until it looks like they actually see our guys?<br>
Nika: Do ''not'' fire on the Feds unless it is ''absolutely'' required for Rina’s or Joshua’s physical safety.<br>  
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Nika: Do not fire on the Feds unless it is absolutely required for Rina’s or Joshua’s physical safety.<br>  
 
Kiera: Standing by. Out.<br>
 
Kiera: Standing by. Out.<br>
 
Nika: Keep me apprised of what’s going on up there. We’re loading up the last two trucks going out.<br>
 
Nika: Keep me apprised of what’s going on up there. We’re loading up the last two trucks going out.<br>
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Hogan: I thought you said that you were going to save them.<br>
 
Hogan: I thought you said that you were going to save them.<br>
Nika: (on her comms) ''Kiera''.<br>
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Nika: (on her comms) Kiera.<br>
 
Kiera: Yeah.<br>
 
Kiera: Yeah.<br>
 
Nika: Have Rina and Joshua—<br>
 
Nika: Have Rina and Joshua—<br>
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Joshua, meanwhile, is leading the Fed on a merry chase. The Fed is shooting now and Joshua is dodging for all he’s worth. And staying in character as the flunkie pothead.<br><br>
 
Joshua, meanwhile, is leading the Fed on a merry chase. The Fed is shooting now and Joshua is dodging for all he’s worth. And staying in character as the flunkie pothead.<br><br>
  
Joshua: Why do you have to always make this ''violent'', man?<br><br>
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Joshua: Why do you have to always make this violent, man?<br><br>
  
 
Joshua turns and tries to get the Fed in a grapple. He misses in the dark and the Fed lands a blow on him. Joshua takes some stun but stays on his feet and tries for another grappling pass. This time, he does exceptionally well, grappling and getting a punch in on top.<br><br>
 
Joshua turns and tries to get the Fed in a grapple. He misses in the dark and the Fed lands a blow on him. Joshua takes some stun but stays on his feet and tries for another grappling pass. This time, he does exceptionally well, grappling and getting a punch in on top.<br><br>
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Kiera joins Nika and Sims for the climb up. When they crest the lip of the quarry, Nika gets the word in her ear from Hogan—We’re all safe—and when she joins Rina and Joshua waiting next to the unconscious Fed, she issues new orders.<br><br>
 
Kiera joins Nika and Sims for the climb up. When they crest the lip of the quarry, Nika gets the word in her ear from Hogan—We’re all safe—and when she joins Rina and Joshua waiting next to the unconscious Fed, she issues new orders.<br><br>
  
Nika: ''Search him''. Search them. Where’s the other one?<br>
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Nika: Search him. Search them. Where’s the other one?<br>
 
Rina: (pointing one way) Back that way.<br>
 
Rina: (pointing one way) Back that way.<br>
 
Joshua: (pointing the other way) Back in the car.<br>
 
Joshua: (pointing the other way) Back in the car.<br>
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Joshua: I get it. (He does, really) I get it. I’ll talk to him.<br><br>
 
Joshua: I get it. (He does, really) I get it. I’ll talk to him.<br><br>
  
We break up the impromptu meeting and settle to life in transit. Next stop, Persephone. '''ETA: 25 Oct 2522''', 8 days from now.<br><br>
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We break up the impromptu meeting and settle to life in transit. Next stop, Persephone. ETA: 25 Oct 2522, 8 days from now.<br><br>
  
  

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