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Kiera: That big [[Episode 605: Devil's Compromise, Special Features#HOW TO SPEAK CHINESE| fèifèi de pìgu's]] hit me in the head with a wrench and he’s gotten Beggar in the head with a wrench and stabbed him with a screwdriver. ''Bring a gun''. Make a big-assed hole in him!<br><br>
 
Kiera: That big [[Episode 605: Devil's Compromise, Special Features#HOW TO SPEAK CHINESE| fèifèi de pìgu's]] hit me in the head with a wrench and he’s gotten Beggar in the head with a wrench and stabbed him with a screwdriver. ''Bring a gun''. Make a big-assed hole in him!<br><br>
  
Nika switches channels.<br><br>
 
  
Nika: Joshua. Rina. Give me a sit-rep. Rina. Joshua. Give me a sit-rep.<br><br>
 
  
On the burning ship, Joshua’s made his peace with the fact he’s going to die. He’s ready to vent his helmet when he hears static spitting out his comms, along with some words.<br><br>
 
  
Comms: ## Bring # gun. Make a big # hole ##  Josh-# Rina. Give me a sit-# Rina. Joshua. Give me a sit-rep.<br><br>
 
  
Is he hallucinating or did he actually hear Kiera and Nika? He shoots a look at Rina and he can tell from her response she’s heard them too.<br><br>
 
  
Rina: Explosion. We’re pinned. Get us out. Can’t move.<br>
 
Nika: What?<br><br>
 
 
On Equinox, Nika thinks she hears Rina’s voice through the static. She makes an adjustment on the comms and cleans up the signal.<br><br>
 
 
Rina: Explosion. We’re pinned. Get us out. Can’t move.<br><br>
 
 
This time Rina’s voice comes in a little bit clearer. It’s the best Nika can do. She’s constantly tweaking the settings to get even this much. She responds, hoping to God her message gets through.<br><br>
 
 
Nika: Rina I need—(tweaks some more)—The engines of the ship are burning. The only thing I can think to do to get you out is to bring the engines online and blow out the—<br>
 
Rina: Do it.<br>
 
Nika: Can we?<br>
 
Rina: Turn her 90 degrees.<br><br>
 
 
Joshua hears this latest exchange and thinks: I love her. Nika recalls the position of the wreckage on our dorsal hull and tweaks the comms again, saying:<br>
 
 
Nika: The tower is sitting on top of the ship. Can she handle all the stresses that lifting off with that on top of her is gonna make? The tower has fallen and is pinning the engines in place.<br>
 
Rina: So the gimbals won’t work? <br><br>
 
 
Rina slams her fists against the deck and starts thinking of alternatives, tricks, fast-ones—anything—to get Equinox’s engines free. If she can talk Nika through the steps to accessing the gravitic envelope surrounding the outer hull of Equinox and then reversing the shielding …. Joshua speaks calmly into his comm.<br><br>
 
 
Joshua: Captain? <br>
 
Nika: Yeah, Joshua.<br>
 
Joshua: It’s been good. Just in case.<br>
 
Nika: Don’t you friggin’ dare. If you die on me, I swear to any Diety listening I will bring you back to life just to kill you myself!<br>
 
Joshua: That’ll be fine. I am out of air.<br><br>
 
 
It’s true. The air in his suit is hot, stifling, and thin. He doesn’t have long before he has to vent his helmet. Two ships over, Kiera’s up to her elbows in Beglan’s blood and listening to this conversation over her comms. And God help her, the situation is so freakin’ dire, it’s ridiculous. She can’t do anything but laugh. <br><br>
 
 
Kiera: Joshua, you’re a moron. You’ll be out in a bit.<br><br>
 
 
Back on the burning ship, Rina’s mentally zipping through Equinox’s systems in her head. All Nika has to do is alter the thrusting vectors that are part of the primary pulse coils and—really, this is something she could do herself in two shakes and in a pinch she could walk Beglan through it. Yeah! Beglan could do it.<br><br>
 
 
Rina: Tell Beglan to—<br><br>
 
 
And she starts rapping out the instructions, typewriter fast.<br><br>
 
 
Nika: No, STOP! Stop. It’s ME. That’s IT. That’s ALL you got.<br><br>
 
 
Biting back an expletive, Rina rethinks her strategy. Joshua distracts her with a question.<br><br>
 
 
Joshua: How much air do I have left?<br>
 
Rina: (does the math) Three minutes.<br>
 
Joshua: Three minutes? Awesome.<br><br>
 
 
Rina considers another option, a dangerous one. Of course, if Equinox hadn’t had any modifications, it would be a smidge safer to bypass all the safety parameters against doing something you should never do: activating the pulse engines while in atmo.  Not that we haven’t done it twice already—once to shake Reavers off our tail when we escaped from Miranda and once to outrun Juanita Vasquez’s ship La Tormenta on Jiang Yin. Of course, doing while we’re on land would increase the risk of tearing our ship apart. We’d have to adjust all the baffles on the grav shields to make the pulse omnidirectional—pointing them at the wreckage to anti-grav them off our hull. Adjusting the baffles is not a matter of pushing a few buttons. There is a lot of stuff that needs jiggering. Nika’s going to need someone who knows the ins-and-outs of engineering. Someone like Rina herself. Who’s pinned at the moment. She explains the idea to her Captain anyway, on the off-chance it will do some good.<br><br>
 
 
Nika: Joshua. Are you pinned?<br>
 
Joshua: Oh yeah. And I’ve got about two minutes of air now.<br>
 
Nika: Mr. Boston. Are you listening to the comms?<br><br>
 
 
Everyone hears Boston’s reply. He grunts, as if he’s shifting something heavy, but he replies nonetheless.<br><br>
 
 
Boston: Yes.<br>
 
Nika: I cannot get your family off this rock unless you come over here and help us get this ship free. We are all going to die here. <br>
 
Boston: Get my family on your ship.<br>
 
Nika: I will happily get your family on this ship—<br>
 
Boston: First.<br>
 
Nika: There won’t be a ship if we wait that long. Please.<br>
 
Boston: All right. I’m okay with dying here.<br>
 
Nika: I know you are.<br><br>
 
 
Listening to this exchange, Rina thinks: I’m not! Kiera’s listening in and she’s thinking she doesn’t feel bad one bit that Boston’s going to die.<br><br>
 
 
Boston: So you’ll move my family and—<br>
 
Nika: Mr. Boston, I don’t have a way to move your family at this point. You have reduced me to simply a pilot and that’s it.<br>
 
Boston: I have a way of saving your lives.<br><br>
 
 
The bastard is actually extorting us. Rina mentally consigns him to hell. Nika tries to mollify him.<br><br>
 
 
Nika: My doctor’s headed that way.<br>
 
Boston: My family’s already dead.<br>
 
Nika: I understand that. But both of my doctors are spare hands to be able to get your family off that ship as soon as they stabilize the man that you have injured.<br>
 
Boston: Well, they better hurry.<br>
 
Nika: Arden, go. We don’t have much time.<br>
 
Arden: (over the comms) I’ve already gone.<br><br>
 
 
In fact he has. He’s already left Equinox and is making his way over.<br><br>
 
 
Nika: Go faster.<br>
 
Arden: (breaks into run) I can’t hear you.<br><br>
 
 
He’s got too much to pay attention to—he’s running over land to save time and he has to devote all his concentration to dodging the dangers it holds. And on the burning ship, Joshua starts toggling the catches on his helmet. His lungs are burning from the effort to extract the last remaining molecules of oxy from his suit. He’s gasping for air that is really no longer there. His fingers fumble on the seals, clumsy from the gloves and lack of oxy. Rina sees what he’s doing and it tears her heart out, because she knows there is no way she can reach him and hook up her supply to his suit to buddy-breathe it. And even in his extremity, Joshua manages to crack a joke.<br><br>
 
 
Joshua: You got any shrimp?<br>
 
Rina: (playing along) Only if you’ve got horseradish sauce to go with. Because it’s just not hot enough in here for me.<br>
 
Joshua: Fair enough. Cuz really, I’ve have this craving for some shrimp. The heat is just like—<br>
 
Nika: (breaking in) Shh! Stop it, you two.<br><br>
 
 
While Arden is running outside and Rina and Joshua are trading their last words, Kiera is busily doing everything she can to keep Beglan alive. She’s running out of material for pressure bandages and whenever she’s stopped the bleeding from the entry wound, the exit wound underneath him starts up again. Beglan’s alternately running out of blood at either end and he doesn’t have much left to spare. And Kiera is running out of ideas to deal with this.<br><br>
 
 
Arden makes it to the ship and sees Boston laying the body of his ten-year-old to rest on the ground beside his mother. Boston’s removed his helmet and the wind kicked up from the fires makes his white hair whip about his face. <br><br>
 
 
Arden: Beggar and Kiera. Where are they?<br>
 
Boston: (points) On the ship.<br><br>
 
 
Arden moves past him and Boston lets go of his son and follows. Nika’s following the conversation as best she can over the comms and thinks: ''Right about now, if Mr. Boston puts the wrench to yet another one of my crew, I’m gonna put a bullet in his brainpan.''<br>
 
 
Rina’s thinking of Equinox and trying to invent a shortcut for the plan they’ve devised to get the ship free. Joshua’s thinking about Rina. He’s tried his best to distract her from doing anything stupid and futile, like tearing herself to pieces trying to win free of the wreckage and using up all her air before she can be rescued. There’s one more ploy he knows will work, a supreme distraction bound to hold her attention.<br><br>
 
 
He takes his helmet off.<br><br>
 
 
Rina: No, no, no, Joshua, don’t—!<br><br>
 
 
She redoubles her efforts to get free. He shakes his head at her and takes a deep breath. The air is hot but it’s not blistering. Not yet. The room is on fire, yes, and it’s not advancing that fast. It’s hellish but it’s survivable lower down, against the deck where it’s cooler. Still, it’s no picnic and he gazes at Rina, wanting her to be the last thing he sees before he dies. He thinks back to how they met, how they fell in love … in short, his life for the last three years really does go past his mind’s eye. He looks over at Rina and thinks she really does look beautiful, all sweaty and hot, frustrated and trying to push that ceiling beam off them one moment and her gloved fingers tracing vector equations for the engines on the deck the next…<br><br>
 
 
Joshua: … Aww… that’s so cute …<br><br>
 
 
He’s losing his grip on reality now, the poison in the atmo and the smoke are starting to get to him. At least his head is free of that stifling claustrophobic helmet. And then out of the corner of his eye, Joshua sees something. Up the bulkhead, near the ceiling, where the far end of the beam pinning Rina to the deck rests, the flames have partially melted through the bracket holding the beam in place overhead. With some force, she may be able to jiggle it free. He couldn’t see it before because his helmet blocked his view. Rina still can’t see it because the debris is in the way.<br><br>
 
 
Joshua: Rina, I hate to contradict every piece of advice I’ve given you so far, but I think that beam on you, you might be able to move it. If you push right about …<br><br>
 
 
That brings her head around to face him and he gestures in the empty air with his hands.<br><br>
 
 
Joshua: Just about … put your hand right about there … and push it really hard.<br>
 
Rina: (pushing, straining) Could you be a little more specific?<br>
 
Joshua: I can’t point!<br><br>
 
 
He can’t, not really. He doesn’t quite have a line-of-sight on that sweet spot on the beam … but he knows it’s there, extrapolating on the two ends that he can see. He gestures again.<br><br>
 
 
Joshua: … There.<br>
 
Rina: Okay. (shifting her weight) Left or right?<br>
 
Joshua: Left. <br>
 
Rina: Mine or yours?<br>
 
Joshua: Yours. Okay, Push. Breathe. Breathe … Push …<br><br>
 
 
Rina throws her back into it and by God, the damned shit actually moves. She’s gained that measly goddamned inch she’s been praying for. She lunges for the bar she’d been trying to grab all this time and this time, THIS TIME, her fingers wrap around it and she pulls it to her. She jams that sucker into the wreckage and she throws her weight against it. The debris moves a fraction of an inch. She throws herself on the lever again, using her free leg to brace against it. Another fraction of an inch.  Again she brings that lever to bear against the wreckage and again she gains a fraction of an inch. Straining and pulling and swearing, she works to get her pinned leg free.<br><br>
 
 
Joshua: Those flames are getting awfully close.<br><br>
 
 
Outside and elsewhere, Arden boards the ship and finds Kiera desperately keeping Beglan alive. Her hands are red, swimming in blood. Beglan’s helmet is off, the Irishman’s face is clearly visible and his color is definitely not good. Arden gets to work beside Kiera. Kiera asks through gritted teeth:<br><br>
 
 
Kiera: Did you bring a gun?<br>
 
Arden: (working) Yeah. It’s in my bag.<br>
 
Kiera: Thank you.<br><br>
 
 
Arden starts surgery on the spot. It’s field surgery, meatball tactics all the way, but it’s the best he can do with the limited equipment in his bag. Kiera rises from the deck, pulling Arden’s gun from his bag and taking careful aim at the door. She followed every word of his conversation with Nika and knows the price of getting Equinox free. She doesn’t trust Boston to betray them at the last minute. She hasn’t forgotten he was the one that hit her from behind with a wrench or that he stabbed an unconscious man who posed no threat to him. She knows Boston’s willing to consign them all to hell, because with his family dead, he’s got little to live for and nothing to lose. So she’s guarding the door and having Arden and Beglan’s backs.<br><br>
 
 
Kiera: If he comes back and looks vaguely threatening, I am putting a bullet right between that [[Episode 605: Devil's Compromise, Special Features#HOW TO SPEAK CHINESE| gāisǐ de tā mā de húndàn]]’s eyes. <br>
 
Arden: (still working) “Oh, look! He winked at me.”<br>
 
Kiera: That still counts in my book at this point. He did not have to take the screwdriver and plant it into Beggar’s leg.<br>
 
Arden: Is that what happened?<br>
 
Kiera: Really. Seriously.<br>
 
Arden: (still still working) Did the stabbing with the screwdriver happen before or after you arrived?<br>
 
Kiera: Actually, after. He hit me in the back of the head with his wrench. And when I turned around and tried to wrestle him to keep him from hitting me again, I went down and he basically walked over and stabbed Beggar with the screwdriver.<br>
 
Arden: (growls) If he’s facing toward you, shoot him. If he’s not facing toward you, shoot him.<br>
 
Kiera: I know. That’s what I’m saying. I’m sitting here with the gun. You’re on your own. Tell me if you need help with “Put your finger here! Put your finger there!”<br><br>
 
 
Arden’s got limited supplies to work with and he’s stretching them out as best he can. Time is slipping away from Beggar, however, and Arden picks up the pace, racing the clock against death. Arden’s not the only one aware that time is of the essence. Nika is still waiting for instructions on Equinox.<br><br>
 
 
Nika: Rina? Rina!<br><br>
 
 
On the burning ship, Joshua’s encouraging Rina as best he can and they both hear Nika’s call.<br><br>
 
 
Joshua: Keep pushing it. You got it. You got it. I know you can.<br>
 
Rina: It’s … (to Nika) … whatever you’re going to do, do it fast …<br>
 
Joshua: She’s gonna get out, Captain.<br><br>
 
 
Nika hears this last and makes a command decision, going against everything common sense is telling her to do.<br><br>
 
 
Nika: I’m gonna move the ship.<br><br>
 
  
  

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