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What happened here?<br><br>
 
What happened here?<br><br>
  
He tries to get outside. The building is in security lockdown. Why? Going back deeper into the building he encounters the cafeteria and there he finds people who are awake. The ones nearest the door look up at his entrance and comment mildly oh look, he’s awake. They’re eating red meat, somewhat cooked. What is it, Arden asks? Meat, they answer. Arden looks closer. It’s not just meat. It’s a human limb. <br><br>
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He tries to get outside. The building is in security lockdown. Why? Going back deeper into the building he encounters the cafeteria and there he finds people who are awake. The ones nearest the door look up at his entrance and comment mildly oh look, he’s awake. They’re eating red meat, somewhat cooked. <br><br>  
  
Come again?!?<br><br>  
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What is it, Arden asks.<br><br>
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People, they answer. <br><br>
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Come again?!?<br><br>
  
 
He must be dreaming. Arden pinches himself. He’s not dreaming. He slowly gets the story—Sophie has been Paxed. No one here knows by whom. No one here can tell him when. No one can tell him how he got here. Some of the inhabitants are obviously immune. Some are unaffected. Some go catatonic. And some have died of it. <br><br>
 
He must be dreaming. Arden pinches himself. He’s not dreaming. He slowly gets the story—Sophie has been Paxed. No one here knows by whom. No one here can tell him when. No one can tell him how he got here. Some of the inhabitants are obviously immune. Some are unaffected. Some go catatonic. And some have died of it. <br><br>
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The man offering it to him shrugs: suit yourself. The alarm continues to sound and as he waits and watches, he sees other Erewhon colonists—now Reaverized—scrambling down from above over roofs and walkways, running for the prey they can see inside. Arden asks for the inhaler and takes a hit. He waits for the Chempliant to speed him up but instead he has a bad reaction. The entire world  goes bendy. Sight and sound attenuates and warps. He can’t speak at a proper speed, instead going extremely slow-mo. What the heck is happening to him?<br><br>
 
The man offering it to him shrugs: suit yourself. The alarm continues to sound and as he waits and watches, he sees other Erewhon colonists—now Reaverized—scrambling down from above over roofs and walkways, running for the prey they can see inside. Arden asks for the inhaler and takes a hit. He waits for the Chempliant to speed him up but instead he has a bad reaction. The entire world  goes bendy. Sight and sound attenuates and warps. He can’t speak at a proper speed, instead going extremely slow-mo. What the heck is happening to him?<br><br>
  
Outside, the Reavers are still advancing. Before they can actually touch the door or the window, a high-pitched whine pierces the air. The Reavers start to writhe and scream. The air around them bends and shimmers like a mirage. Arden realizes it’s a microwave weapon and it’s burning them alive. <br><br>
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Outside, the Reavers are still advancing. Before they can actually touch the door or the window, a high-pitched whine pierces the air. A spray hits the Reavers from above and they start to writhe and scream. It’s acid and it’s burning them alive. <br><br>
  
 
Which explains the dead bodies out there. <br><br>
 
Which explains the dead bodies out there. <br><br>
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Damn. Now what?<br><br>
 
Damn. Now what?<br><br>
  
Downstairs in the lobby, our crew quickly runs through their options. Surrender to Blue Sun? Hell no. Escape? How? And can it be done without bloodshed? Do we take a third as-yet-unformed option and run with it? Standing to one side, Dr. Joan Guan, née Drake, watches all of this unfold, her face inscrutable. Right now, absent the Director—Guan Zwang, her husband—Joan is our only chance at negotiating our freedom and right now, she’s a very hard sell. She’d given Rina a choice earlier: drop everything to save Joshua, or abandon Joshua to his fate and save her friends. Rina, being Rina, took a third unoffered option—rescue her friends so they can help her rescue Joshua—and failed the implicit loyalty test. Convinced that Joshua would be safer in her own hands than that of the crew, Joan Guan refuses to release him to us. She insists that we give ourselves up and leave Joshua with her. <br><br>
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Downstairs in the lobby, our crew quickly runs through their options. Surrender to Blue Sun? Hell no. Escape? How? And can it be done without bloodshed? Do we take a third as-yet-unformed option and run with it? Standing to one side, Dr. Joan Guan, née Drake, watches all of this unfold, her face inscrutable. Right now, absent the Director—also Dr. Jonathan Guan, her husband—Joan is our only chance at negotiating our freedom and right now, she’s a very hard sell. She’d given Rina a choice earlier: drop everything to save Joshua, or abandon Joshua to his fate and save her friends. Rina, being Rina, took a third unoffered option—rescue her friends so they can help her rescue Joshua—and failed the implicit loyalty test. Convinced that Joshua would be safer in her own hands than that of the crew, Joan Guan refuses to release him to us. She insists that we give ourselves up and leave Joshua with her. <br><br>
  
 
Joshua argues against it. Arden tries, but fails. Rina demands to know why Joan gave her son up to Blue Sun’s experiments. Joan strikes back by demanding how Rina—herself a professed parent—could abandon her child on a Rim world with no guarantee for his safety. That shuts Rina up and Joshua tries again to get free. Or barring that, more information from Joan while we can still talk to her. <br><br>
 
Joshua argues against it. Arden tries, but fails. Rina demands to know why Joan gave her son up to Blue Sun’s experiments. Joan strikes back by demanding how Rina—herself a professed parent—could abandon her child on a Rim world with no guarantee for his safety. That shuts Rina up and Joshua tries again to get free. Or barring that, more information from Joan while we can still talk to her. <br><br>
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BRRRRZZZZZZAP!!<br><br>
 
BRRRRZZZZZZAP!!<br><br>
  
Once, twice, thrice ... and the ninja finally falls.  We quickly search the ninjas for weapons, find stun and smoke grenades. Raven, for reasons known only to him, picks up one of the ninjas and sets off on his own. Rina crumples. Joshua curses. He picks her up and gets her around the corner out of the blast zone. Kiera and Arden grab Nika and follow. Once everyone’s out of the way, Raven goes back and pulls the pins, runs back under cover before everything explodes. <br><br>
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Once, twice, thrice ... and the ninja finally falls.  We quickly search the ninjas for weapons, find stun and smoke grenades. Rina is rocky but insists we can use the grenades to set off the sand and bring the tunnel down, cutting off further pursuit. We set the grenades. Rina crumples. Joshua curses. He picks her up and gets her around the corner out of the blast zone. Kiera and Arden grab Nika and follow. Once everyone’s out of the way, Raven goes back and pulls the pins, runs back under cover before everything explodes. <br><br>
  
 
BOOOOOOM!!<br><br>
 
BOOOOOOM!!<br><br>
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We don’t linger to watch but haul ass for the nearest surface access and crawling out into the open air again, we hail Beglan on our comms to pick us up. Raven’s limo arrives minutes later and we run, stagger, and drag ourselves over to it. Piling in we drive straight for Equinox only to find it surrounded on the pad by fifty burly men with nasty looking wrenches and pipes. They see us coming, smile, and part to let us in. At the closed ramp of our ship, James Brion is waiting for us.  Apparently he somehow got word of our predicament and set himself and his men to guard our ride out. <br><br>
 
We don’t linger to watch but haul ass for the nearest surface access and crawling out into the open air again, we hail Beglan on our comms to pick us up. Raven’s limo arrives minutes later and we run, stagger, and drag ourselves over to it. Piling in we drive straight for Equinox only to find it surrounded on the pad by fifty burly men with nasty looking wrenches and pipes. They see us coming, smile, and part to let us in. At the closed ramp of our ship, James Brion is waiting for us.  Apparently he somehow got word of our predicament and set himself and his men to guard our ride out. <br><br>
  
We exit the limo. Raven shows up unexpectedly and takes possession, thanks us for the databook, and peels out. We thank Brion as his men depart, and we get our injured aboard to med bay. Which would be Arden, Kiera, and Rina. The engineer is bad off, but thanks to Arden’s quick thinking in the tunnels, she’s not dead.  Working in turns, the two docs keep Rina from dying and once she’s out of the woods, turn their medical attention on themselves. The balance of the night is spent patching up our hurts and getting rest as we can.<br><br>
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We exit the limo. Raven takes possession, thanks us for the databook, and peels out. We thank Brion as we board and his men depart, and get our injured to med bay. Which would be Arden, Kiera, and Rina. The engineer is bad off, but thanks to Arden’s quick thinking in the tunnels, she’s not dead.  Working in turns, the two docs keep Rina from dying and once she’s out of the woods, turn their medical attention on themselves. The balance of the night is spent patching up our hurts and getting rest as we can.<br><br>
  
  

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