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'''Qualities:'''
 
'''Qualities:'''
  
1. I '''Am''' Captain Power!: Grant may have cobbled his "Captain Power" character out of clichés, but he's fully committed to it, whether it involves posing and speeches or risking his life to protect innocents. He’s a method actor, but also ultimately a good person.
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1. I’m Captain Power!: Grant is committed to his role as a superhero, whether it involves posing and speeches or genuinely risking his life to protect innocents. He’s a method actor, but also ultimately a good person who wants to help.
  
2. Mysterious Mentor: Some part of Grant knows he should probably have asked more questions about who his mentor is, what his motivations are and how he seems to have a skill or a bit of relevant experience for any situation. Still, as long as the com channel in his cowl stays open and the old man keeps talking he can come across like a genius.
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2. Helpful whispers: Grant's listed skills are, for the most part, the result of his patron prompting him over an earpiece in his cowl. He can offer other advise and help as well, as long as they can stay in communication.
  
3. I can resist anything but temptation: To be honest, fighting guys who can crush cars with their bare hands and shoot lightning from their eyeballs is safer for Grant than leaving him in a Hollywood club unsupervised. But whatever trouble he does get into, he'll look damn good doing it.
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3. I can resist anything but temptation: To be honest, fighting guys who can crush cars with their bare hands and shoot lightning from their eyeballs is safer for Grant than leaving him in a Hollywood club unsupervised.
  
 
'''Abilities:'''
 
'''Abilities:'''
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'''Backstory'''
 
'''Backstory'''
  
Grant Power’s never stellar Hollywood career was heading downward. He was a handsome enough hunk of beef with a natural knack for fight scenes and a better actor than the action movies he was in needed, but his offscreen antics were getting a bit much for his directors and producers to deal with. So when a crazy old man showed up to talk to him Grant heard him out. Apparently he was some kind of genius inventor and businessman with some carefully-unspecified sins in his past he was afraid a few dozen hospital wings couldn’t erase. So he had an offer- he would make Grant the kind of hero he had played on the screen. Grant didn’t have a high opinion of the man’s sanity, but he wasn’t getting any better offers. So he found himself with a teleportation belt, telescoping boots and gloves, an old man whispering advice into his ear about bomb disposal and supervillain psychology, and a chance to maybe actually do some good…
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Grant Power’s never stellar Hollywood career was heading downward. He was a handsome enough hunk of beef with a natural knack for fight scenes and a better actor than the action movies he was in needed, but his offscreen antics were getting a bit much for his directors and producers to deal with. So when a crazy old man showed up to talk to him Grant heard him out. Apparently he was some kind of genius inventor and businessman with some carefully-unspecified sins in his past he was afraid a few dozen hospital wings couldn’t erase. So he had an offer- he would make Grant the hero he had played on the screen. Grant didn’t have a high opinion of the man’s sanity, but he wasn’t getting any better offers. So he found himself with a teleportation belt, telescoping boots and gloves, an old man whispering advice into his ear about bomb disposal and supervillain psychology, and a chance to maybe actually do some good…

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