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==='''15: Jurt and Treziz  in Castle Amber'''===
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==='''15: Jurt and Shava in Castle Amber'''===
  
 
Thin Whip wandered back into his cubby hole of a room in the Castle Amber. This one was his, no woman ever visited it. Even the maids knew not to clean it.
 
Thin Whip wandered back into his cubby hole of a room in the Castle Amber. This one was his, no woman ever visited it. Even the maids knew not to clean it.
  
It was not much more then closet. Ten feet by fifteen feet with a closet and one of the newly installed bathrooms. He had sold the second room long ago. He falls onto the mattress on the floor, in the corner. A shelf above his head belongs to his pangolin, Treziz. It peered over the edge as he shut the door behind himself.
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It was not much more then closet. Ten feet by fifteen feet with a closet and one of the newly installed bathrooms. He had sold the second room long ago. He falls onto the mattress on the floor, in the corner. A shelf above his head belongs to his Satelwin, which usually kept the form of a small yippy dog. It peered over the edge as he shut the door behind himself.
  
Dropping his head to the pile of clothes, he looks up at the tiny creature. "Treziz , I think we either need to flee to Chaos, or not leave the Castle for a time. Serves me right I suppose. "
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Dropping his head to the pile of clothes, he looks up at the tiny creature. "Shava, I think we either need to flee to Chaos, or not leave the Castle for a time. Serves me right I suppose. "
  
Treziz turns over on its side, ignoring him. He was going to stay here regardless. Food, playmates, doors that opened for him.  The occasional lap. What better place for a primal beast in hiding?
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Shava turns over on its side, ignoring him. He was going to stay here regardless. Food, playmates, doors that opened for him.  The occasional lap. What better place for a Satelwin?
  
  

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