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She admires the quaesitors -- one helped her, after all! -- and daydreams sometimes of knightly hoplites vanquishing evil.
 
She admires the quaesitors -- one helped her, after all! -- and daydreams sometimes of knightly hoplites vanquishing evil.
  
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Of course, she has a young cousin to look after now. She'll want to see Caro safe, happy, and educated, and protecting Caro is one of the things that will get Faith to show some spine.  (Disciplining Caro, not so much.)
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Of course, she has a young cousin to look after now. She'll want to see Caro safe, happy, and educated, and protecting Caro is one of the things that will get Faith to show some spine.  (Disciplining her, not so much.)
  
 
Special flaw note:  Story flaw: 0 points, Tormenting Master variant. Precia certainly agrees that Faith has ''earned'' her sigil, she just thinks Faith still owes her... everything. 0 points because you can have only one Story flaw for points and I figure a local kid is more story-genic (and fun!) than a distant abusive asshole.
 
Special flaw note:  Story flaw: 0 points, Tormenting Master variant. Precia certainly agrees that Faith has ''earned'' her sigil, she just thinks Faith still owes her... everything. 0 points because you can have only one Story flaw for points and I figure a local kid is more story-genic (and fun!) than a distant abusive asshole.

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