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Not ever, really.
 
Not ever, really.
  
Her father was a captain in the Browncoat Militia, and her mother was a lieutenant with Independence Intelligence, and though they both managed to get themselves killed, they made an impression on a lot of soldiers before they did.
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Her father was a captain in the browncoat militia, and her mother was independent intelligence, and though they both managed to get themselves killed, they made an impression on a lot of soldiers before they did.
  
 
Those soldiers have been dropping in on Kiko in groups and pairs and individually since the end of the war, making sure she has what she needs. Making sure she learns the important things. Like when to fold, when to double down, how to drink without puking, how to puke on cue, and how to shoot.  
 
Those soldiers have been dropping in on Kiko in groups and pairs and individually since the end of the war, making sure she has what she needs. Making sure she learns the important things. Like when to fold, when to double down, how to drink without puking, how to puke on cue, and how to shoot.  

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