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If you require my submission i do not know if i can give it.  Taking it by force of arms would be pointless.  I rarely leave this realm.  If you have no vile intentions, then consider us introduced, well met.
 
If you require my submission i do not know if i can give it.  Taking it by force of arms would be pointless.  I rarely leave this realm.  If you have no vile intentions, then consider us introduced, well met.
  
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In the dawn of the world there was only the lost woman Evelyn, discarded by her mother, forgotten by her father, and roaming the streets of village after village of a world that had nothing but hovels. I do not know how long she wandered, nor when she first began to have her visions. I know that what mind she may have had was burned irrevocably from her in those early years by the force of augury and the hands of cruel men. There are legends that many sought her out in those days to gain clarity. They joined in the madness that I know so well. Some gained enlightenment, others gained nothing but anger, and a few returned howling mad. She received a thousand hurts and sights that were not always real and scarred her world.
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In the dawn of the world there was only the lost woman Evelyn, discarded by her mother, forgotten by her father, and roaming the streets of village after village of a world that had nothing but hovels. I do not know how long she wandered, nor when she first began to have her visions. I know that what mind she may have had was burned irrevocably from her in those early years by the force of augury and the hands of cruel men. There are legends that many sought her out in those days to gain clarity. They joined in the madness that I know so well. Some gained enlightenment, others gained nothing but anger, and a few returned howling mad. She received a thousand hurts and sights that were not always real scarred her world.
  
 
Not everyone was cruel. I do not know who first gave her the mandolin. It became an extension of her bliss. It was crude at first, but over the centuries, as if gaining allure by proximity, it has become a thing of resplendent beauty. In the uncounted years that the world changed from a squalor of hovels to a land of majesty, she strode the land mandolin in hand.
 
Not everyone was cruel. I do not know who first gave her the mandolin. It became an extension of her bliss. It was crude at first, but over the centuries, as if gaining allure by proximity, it has become a thing of resplendent beauty. In the uncounted years that the world changed from a squalor of hovels to a land of majesty, she strode the land mandolin in hand.

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