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Other attendees of the salon are a Selene Dashwood, a cat person and fiancée of Mortimer.  Ezekiel (middle name not yet known) Drake, a moneyed eccentric; Flora Spenser, a kept woman and amnesiac, Mrs. Helena Gordon and her son Lt. Henry Gordon; BertramWorchester Maxfield-Fleming, a dilettante and cousin to Katherine. Also attending are Countess Ezrabet Rembecki and her associate, Nicolai.<br><br>
 
Other attendees of the salon are a Selene Dashwood, a cat person and fiancée of Mortimer.  Ezekiel (middle name not yet known) Drake, a moneyed eccentric; Flora Spenser, a kept woman and amnesiac, Mrs. Helena Gordon and her son Lt. Henry Gordon; BertramWorchester Maxfield-Fleming, a dilettante and cousin to Katherine. Also attending are Countess Ezrabet Rembecki and her associate, Nicolai.<br><br>
  
During the demonstration of the Mortimer’s boiler innovation, the room blacks out and the inventor is snatched.  Arceneaux quicly realizes a kidnapping is in progress and leaps forward through the dark to retrieve and protect Mortimer.  She is hampered in her endeavor by her attire and manages to grab the ankle of a male person she hopes is her target.  It is not.  The man kicks her about the head and shoulders, his language revealing him to be Nicolai. Further noise in the dark reveals it is Countess Rembecki who has snatched the inventor.  Arceneaux hangs on to her foe, realizing she dares not let go if she is to learn the whereabouts of the inventor and that Nicolai might be a valuable hostage in exchange for Mortimer.<br><br>
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During the demonstration of the Mortimer’s boiler innovation, the room blacks out and the inventor is snatched.  Arceneaux quicly realizes a kidnapping is in progress and leaps forward through the dark to retrieve and protect Mortimer.  She is hampered in her endeavor by her attire and manages to grab the ankle of a male person she hopes is her target.  It is not.  The man kicks her about the head and shoulders, his language revealing him to be Nicolai. Further noise in the dark reveals it is Countess Rembecki who has snatched the inventor.  Arceneaux hangs on to him, realizing she dares not let go if she is to learn the whereabouts of the inventor and that Nicolai might be a valuable hostage in exchange for Mortimer.<br><br>
  
 
The invention is knocked over in the scuffle, steam and hot water and live coals are spilled across the room and some of the curtains are set afire.  For some reason, the fire does not make the room brighter. It remains unnaturally dark.  A window is broken and soon thereafter, the darkness winks out and normal light is restored.  Arceneaux verifies she does indeed have Nicolai by the leg and puts him into an elbow lock submission hold and looks out the broken window.  Countess Rembecki is FLYING with the unconscious bodies of both the Mortimer and Selene Dashwood, flying with some difficulty over the rooftops of Dorset Square toward the Thames.<br><br><br><br>
 
The invention is knocked over in the scuffle, steam and hot water and live coals are spilled across the room and some of the curtains are set afire.  For some reason, the fire does not make the room brighter. It remains unnaturally dark.  A window is broken and soon thereafter, the darkness winks out and normal light is restored.  Arceneaux verifies she does indeed have Nicolai by the leg and puts him into an elbow lock submission hold and looks out the broken window.  Countess Rembecki is FLYING with the unconscious bodies of both the Mortimer and Selene Dashwood, flying with some difficulty over the rooftops of Dorset Square toward the Thames.<br><br><br><br>

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