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'''The Jeweled Circle'''
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The Jeweled Circle
  
'''The Mark of Mandalay & the Green Man'''
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The Mark of Mandalay & the Green Man
  
 
Beneath a dark starless sky a man in green leather leans against a massive tree. Low hills richly scattered with fruit trees surround a wide vale that dips to a flat plain. A man could run for an hour from the hills and only reach the center where the man begins to pace.
 
Beneath a dark starless sky a man in green leather leans against a massive tree. Low hills richly scattered with fruit trees surround a wide vale that dips to a flat plain. A man could run for an hour from the hills and only reach the center where the man begins to pace.
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Two men ride over the hills astride what can be generally described as horses.
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Two men rode over the hills astride what can be generally described as horses.
  
The tall man is a few inches shy of 7 feet. He wears armor of a gothic sort, stained with rust, poorly painted black. His horse is tall for the race, a sleek coat of black with white markings about the hooves. Its eyes scan right and left for danger, betraying intelligence beyond the equine.
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The tall man is a few inches shy of 7 feet. He wears armor of a gothic sort, stained with rust, painted black. His horse is tall for the race, a sleek coat of black with white markings about the hooves. Its eyes scan right and left for danger, betraying intelligence beyond the equine.
  
 
The second man is short. Hunchbacked, balding, he holds reins with gnarled hands. His eyes seem the kind to laugh at jokes few understand. The thing he rides looks like a horse but it clearly has a larger sense of itself then mere fetlocks and mane.
 
The second man is short. Hunchbacked, balding, he holds reins with gnarled hands. His eyes seem the kind to laugh at jokes few understand. The thing he rides looks like a horse but it clearly has a larger sense of itself then mere fetlocks and mane.
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The man in green strides to stand beneath the last of the boughs of the tree. He crosses his arms, aware of what it suggests but not caring. When he speaks he does not try to be friendly.
 
The man in green strides to stand beneath the last of the boughs of the tree. He crosses his arms, aware of what it suggests but not caring. When he speaks he does not try to be friendly.
  
"You look more lively than the last time I saw you, Old Man. I stood on a balcony of the Tower of Grief as your coffin rolled by. Did you return with the secrets of Life and Death? Does Chaos have a ferryman?"
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"You look more lively than the last time I saw you, Old Man. I stood on a balcony of the Tower of Grief as your coffin rolled by. Did you return with the secrets of Life and Death? Did Chaos have a ferryman?"
  
 
The tall man dismounts and faces one he had cradled as a child.
 
The tall man dismounts and faces one he had cradled as a child.
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"Very well, grandfather. I accede to your wisdom."
 
"Very well, grandfather. I accede to your wisdom."
  
The armored man speaks, "If all debts are paid, will you take my hand before you proceed?"
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The armored man speaks, "If debts are paid, will you take my hand before you proceed?"
  
 
The man in green regards his father, remembering the many little crimes, the large betrayals, and the final death sentence. He remembers hanging on the dagger of the King of Amber who would trust no mere executioner to complete the final act. Yet, he recognizes the truth in the words.
 
The man in green regards his father, remembering the many little crimes, the large betrayals, and the final death sentence. He remembers hanging on the dagger of the King of Amber who would trust no mere executioner to complete the final act. Yet, he recognizes the truth in the words.
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"I was tempted to take Merovech but decided that was ill-omened. I'll take the name Adrian, but I suspect I shall become known as the Green Man regardless of the name I take."
 
"I was tempted to take Merovech but decided that was ill-omened. I'll take the name Adrian, but I suspect I shall become known as the Green Man regardless of the name I take."
  
"Adrian? Interesting choice. The stones shall echo that name, my son. What we contemplate shall steal sovereignty from both poles. Swayvil and Random will both hate you the minute we begin. Random will be the angriest though, because the place we choose is closer to Amber than Chaos. The Great Abyss divides Chaos from the shadowlands. However Ygg marks the boundary where the forces of the Pattern and the Logrus trade dominance."
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"Adrian? Interesting choice. The stones shall echo that name, my son. What we contemplate shall steal sovereignty from both poles. Merlin and Random will both hate you the minute we begin. Random will be the angriest though, because the place we choose is closer to Amber than Chaos. The Great Abyss divides Chaos from the shadowlands. However Ygg marks the boundary where the forces of the Pattern and the Logrus trade dominance."
  
 
"I understand all of that, Oberon. What I want to know is how will my Sign compare to the Sign of the Logrus or the Sign of the Pattern?"
 
"I understand all of that, Oberon. What I want to know is how will my Sign compare to the Sign of the Logrus or the Sign of the Pattern?"
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Oberon and Adrian look to Dworkin.
 
Oberon and Adrian look to Dworkin.
  
"It will be weaker. That is unavoidable given your choice of location. Were I to do this act I would proceed thus. Rip Ygg from the ground, take this whole vale if you must, smuggle him into Chaos, and forge there. Chaos would be shaken asunder and the Sign you devise would be a true brother to the powers. Amber has her Unicorn, Chaos its Serpent and you will have Ygg, regardless of where you forge. But Chaos can accommodate the disruption of creation. Amber may not. The Pattern rules here. Yours will be powerful, only a sliver less than the Pattern, but still less. Such as Corwin's bastard pattern, powerful, but tainted by it's creation in shadow rather than in primordial chaos. His will be more powerful than yours though because it is more ancient, and it was created, in shadow, at a time of flux, when the stuff of chaos was bathing shadow in response to Oberon's repair of Amber. Chaos has had other bastions of Order that lived for a time and fell, as Amber may one day.  Calmir.  Paragon.  But If you seek Balance of the forces here, in the shadowlands, between Chaos and Amber, then here is should be done. "
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"It will be weaker. That is unavoidable given your choice of location. Were I to do this act I would proceed thus. Rip Ygg from the ground, take this whole vale if you must, smuggle him into Chaos, and forge there. Chaos would be shaken asunder and the Sign you devise would be a true brother to the powers. Amber has her Unicorn, Chaos its Serpent and you will have Ygg, regardless of where you forge. But Chaos can accommodate the disruption of creation. Amber may not. The Pattern rules here. Yours will be powerful, only a sliver less than the Pattern, but still less. Such as Corwin's bastard pattern, powerful, but tainted by it's creation in shadow rather than in primordial chaos. His will be more powerful than yours though because it is more ancient, and it was created, in shadow, at a time of flux, when the stuff of chaos was bathing shadow in response to Oberon's repair of Amber. "
  
 
A table appears with three comfortable chairs. Their arrival keeps Dworkin from falling to the ground. Tea steams from alabaster cups. Dworkin lifts one and moistens his throat.
 
A table appears with three comfortable chairs. Their arrival keeps Dworkin from falling to the ground. Tea steams from alabaster cups. Dworkin lifts one and moistens his throat.
  
"Random is your brother, Adrian, though he knows it not. He is of the generation that fought for the throne. They plotted to gain the power of Amber and even though he played a supporter's role in most of those battles he none the less won the game. He will resent the disruption and the smashing of so many of his realms. Do not underestimate the power of the King of Amber. In the end, the Jewel of Judgment is his, and his control over shadow is far superior to yours. You will have to raise defenses quickly and even the power of this new artifact may not protect you if he decides to ride here with bare blades."
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"Random is your brother, Adrian, though he knows it not. He is of the generation that fought for the throne. They plotted to gain the power of Amber and even though he played a supporter's role in most of those battles he none the less won the game. He will resent the disruption and the smashing of so many of his realms. Do not underestimate the power of the King of Amber. In the end, the Jewel of Judgment is his, and his control over shadow is far superior to yours. You will have to raise defenses quickly and even the power of this new artifact may not protect you."
  
 
Dworkin takes a cookie from a tray and idly dips it in his tea.
 
Dworkin takes a cookie from a tray and idly dips it in his tea.
  
" Furthermore, your creation will be Wild for a time, as Amber once was, as Avalon is. Corwin attempts to calm it even now and it may take centuries. Your work will be unpredictable, wild, and perhaps even mad for a time. Those who assay it in the first years will bear a more powerful imprint than those who come after it's taming, even as those of us who remember the youth of Amber or the Logrus do. Beware who you let walk this Mark."
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" Furthermore, your creation will be Wild for a time, as Amber once was, as Avalon is. Corwin attempts to calm it even now and it may take centuries. Your work will be unpredictable, wild, and perhaps even mad for a time. Those who assay it in the first years will bear a more powerful imprint than those who come after it's taming will, even as those of us who remember the youth of Amber or the Logrus do. Beware who you let walk this Mark."
  
 
   
 
   
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They walk to the center side by side to regard the tree.
 
They walk to the center side by side to regard the tree.
  
"The Jewels, Adrian?" The hunched man asks.
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"The Jewels, Adrian?"
  
"Mounted already. Seven jewels. Each the first shadow of their kind, each one shadow away from the Jewel of Judgment. Each an artifact of great power, split in twain, half now ground into powder and meticulously mounted into the root ring."
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"Mounted already. Seven jewels. Each the first shadow of their kind, each one shadow away from the Jewel of Judgment. Each an artifact of great power now ground into powder and meticulously mounted into the root ring."
  
 
Dworkin nods." The root ring is ready of course?"
 
Dworkin nods." The root ring is ready of course?"
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"Title passes."
 
"Title passes."
  
"Ah, Adrian?" Oberon says with a chuckle under his breath," Title does not pass as far as Random is concerned, nor by the jewel's reckoning I would guess. Frankly by that comment he has been made aware of you. Begin now and he may not get here till it is too late."
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"Ah, Adrian?" Oberon says with a chuckle under his breath," Title does not pass as far as Random is concerned, nor by the jewel's reckoning I would guess. Frankly by that comment he has been made aware of you. Begin now and he may get here till it is too late."
  
 
Adrian looks worried suddenly and moves briskly to Ygg. "To the work, my Friend. Is the sap ready?"
 
Adrian looks worried suddenly and moves briskly to Ygg. "To the work, my Friend. Is the sap ready?"
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Oberon and Dworkin ride before the light, cresting the hills, avoiding the light that broke like waves upon the foothills. Down a far hill ride three horsemen, fast. Oberon draws a mighty sword, shimmering in a foul black light. He drops his visor over his face.
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Oberon and Dworkin ride before the light, cresting the hills, avoiding the light that broke like waves upon the foothills. Down a far hill rode three horsemen, fast. Oberon draws a mighty sword, shimmering in a foul black light. He drops his visor over his face.
  
 
Beyond the hill an echoed cry is heard and the sound of horses approach. The flap of wings is heard above.
 
Beyond the hill an echoed cry is heard and the sound of horses approach. The flap of wings is heard above.
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"Fair enough, Random"
 
"Fair enough, Random"
  
Oberon nods his head and grasps his son's hand to raise him. He looks deeply at his son, approvingly and surprised. He would not have guessed this one would be his heir. He looks to Julian, always so stiff, cold, determined. He remembers Julian's stand in Arden against so many foes. Caine, the dark one, he remembers his feet upon shipboards and in dark paths. He remembers having taught this one things the others would not have guessed. But did he use those secrets to unthrone the unicorn's choice? No. He realizes with shock, that he is a proud father and wonders if that would make them laugh.
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Oberon nods his head and grasps his son's hand to raise him. He looks deeply at his son, approvingly and surprised. He would not have guessed this one would be his heir. He looks to Jullian, always so stiff, cold, determined. He remembers Jullian's stand in Arden against so many foes. Caine, the dark one, he remembers his feet upon shipboards and in dark paths. He remembers having taught this one things the others would not have guessed. But did he use those secrets to unthrone the unicorn's choice? No. He realizes with shock, that he is a proud father and wonders if that would make them laugh.
  
 
"You are served well, my son. Jullian, Caine, I am proud to see you grown to honorable manhood, standing at the side of your king. No longer at each other's throats. I shall rest better for the knowledge." He turns his eyes to Random and knows that that statement will not be enough for this one, the one he neglected the most of the ones he chose to bring to Amber.
 
"You are served well, my son. Jullian, Caine, I am proud to see you grown to honorable manhood, standing at the side of your king. No longer at each other's throats. I shall rest better for the knowledge." He turns his eyes to Random and knows that that statement will not be enough for this one, the one he neglected the most of the ones he chose to bring to Amber.
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He kneels. He places his sword on his fingertips.
 
He kneels. He places his sword on his fingertips.
  
" I hereby render my sword and fealty to the King of Amber."
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" I hear by render my sword and fealty to the King of Amber."
  
 
Julian stands stoically, but Caine's face can not take the strain, eyes wide, tears thick. Oberon would be surprised to know that the same thought screams loudly in each of his son's mind, from the place where every son doubts his father's love. Only Random voices it, weakly. "Father"
 
Julian stands stoically, but Caine's face can not take the strain, eyes wide, tears thick. Oberon would be surprised to know that the same thought screams loudly in each of his son's mind, from the place where every son doubts his father's love. Only Random voices it, weakly. "Father"
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As the approach Adrian they see a sight to give them pause. Curled with the man at the base of Ygg is the white tufted Unicorn of Amber, a red jewel on a gold chain hanging from its horn. It rises and comes before Random. He removes the jewel and places it upon his breast. The Unicorn lets him scratch her and lets the others touch her as well. Reverently each does.
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As the approach Adrian they see a site to give them pause. Curled with the man at the base of Ygg is the white tufted Unicorn of Amber, a red jewel on a gold chain hanging from its horn. It rises and comes before Random. He removes the jewel and places it upon his breast. The Unicorn lets him scratch her and lets the others touch her as well. Reverently each does.
  
Julian, fulfilling a life long dream, places his hand upon the beast, begins to cry. Suddenly the unicorn wedges its horn in amongst his armor, Sticking the tip an inch beyond the armor, into his warm flesh.  Giving a quick flick, it snaps off the last inch of its horn, then flees into shadow, lost again. Julian grasps the bit of horn as a relic, his eyes bright, his face joyful as none have ever seen it, his face glows white, something deep is born within him. He smiles beatifically at his brothers and his ancestors; he shows them the precious horn, red staining the whit curled tip. None, not even Dworkin or Random dare ask to hold it.
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Julian, fulfilling a life long dream, places his hand upon the beast, begins to cry. The unicorn wedges its horn in amongst his armor, giving a quick flick, it snaps off the last inch of its horn, then flees into shadow, lost again. Jullian grasps the bit of horn as a relic, his eyes bright, his face joyful as none have ever seen it, his face glows white, something deep is born within him. He smiles beatifically at his brothers and his ancestors; he shows them the precious horn. None, not even Dworkin or Random dare ask to hold it.
  
 
   
 
   
  
 
A voice speaks behind them. Adrian, clean, bold, revived, clad in green, a sparrow on his shoulder, a mouse peeking from a pocket, " The unicorn has blessed my work. Let there be peace between us, Brother."
 
A voice speaks behind them. Adrian, clean, bold, revived, clad in green, a sparrow on his shoulder, a mouse peeking from a pocket, " The unicorn has blessed my work. Let there be peace between us, Brother."
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"Brother? I take it Rilga was your mother?" Oberon chuckles.
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"Random, Caine, Julian, this is your brother, Adrian."
  
 
Random looks to Oberon, than Adrian.
 
Random looks to Oberon, than Adrian.

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