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Keggers, as he became known because the gangers could never pronounce his name correctly, is still much larger than most humans, even if his time on the streets has made him extremely thin for a Filvian. He has tannish yellow fur that is white around the neck and chest. He has tufted ears that perk up and turn when he’s actively listening. His large green eyes reveal his youthful naivety and enthusiasm.
 
Keggers, as he became known because the gangers could never pronounce his name correctly, is still much larger than most humans, even if his time on the streets has made him extremely thin for a Filvian. He has tannish yellow fur that is white around the neck and chest. He has tufted ears that perk up and turn when he’s actively listening. His large green eyes reveal his youthful naivety and enthusiasm.
  
He wears cargo pants that might have once been green, gray, or tan, but can now only be referred to as 'grungy'. He wears battered brown boots and fingerless gloves, which come in handy because he’s naturally quadrupedal and is much quicker when he uses the knuckles of his hands to help him get around.
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He wears cargo pants that might have once been green, gray, or tan, but can now only be referred to as grungy. He wears battered brown boots and fingerless gloves, which come in handy because he’s naturally quadrupedal and is much quicker when walking the knuckles of his hands.
  
 
Keggers can always be seen wearing a black tool belt and a bright orange tool vest that are chocked full of every tool he can fit in them, most of them scavenged.
 
Keggers can always be seen wearing a black tool belt and a bright orange tool vest that are chocked full of every tool he can fit in them, most of them scavenged.
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It wasn’t a bad life, but the criminals were mean and Keag had to learn how to stay out of their way when they were angry. One day the older sibling ‘disappeared’ and the criminals wouldn’t tell Keag what happened.
 
It wasn’t a bad life, but the criminals were mean and Keag had to learn how to stay out of their way when they were angry. One day the older sibling ‘disappeared’ and the criminals wouldn’t tell Keag what happened.
  
The young Filvian fled the criminal organization and started living on the street. He scavenged, repaired, and sold what he could to survive.
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The young Filvian fled the criminal organization and started living on the street. He scavenged, repaired and sold what he could to survive.
  
 
His only companion was an old Tour Guide droid, the head of one at least, named Tiggy. Keag found the head, connected it to an external battery, and kept it around so he’d have somebody to talk to.
 
His only companion was an old Tour Guide droid, the head of one at least, named Tiggy. Keag found the head, connected it to an external battery, and kept it around so he’d have somebody to talk to.

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