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She was then told that she was to be dispatched to be a Queen in a distant kingdom, and that she would need to be contained in a solid form to do so. Her elders crafted her a body out of crystal, eight legged and strangely graceful. She shuddered at the thought of being trapped inside such a thing, but knew that she must do so.
 
She was then told that she was to be dispatched to be a Queen in a distant kingdom, and that she would need to be contained in a solid form to do so. Her elders crafted her a body out of crystal, eight legged and strangely graceful. She shuddered at the thought of being trapped inside such a thing, but knew that she must do so.
  
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Since arriving at the ''Web of Harmonies'' she has found it both strange and alluring. Strange, because of the aspects of solidity, of flesh and blood and of the visceral causing her to feel revulsion. Alluring, because of the beauty of the harmonies themselves, and the way that the interacting sounds move through her new body, and make her feel happy and complete in a way that she never even new existed. Though still an alien in an alien land, she has grown to love the Web of Harmonies, and is beginning to know it as ''home''. Also, while both her King and her new subjects find her silent movement and shining form unnatural and odd, they too are growing to accept her as ''Queen'', as instinct and fate play their part to entrench her in their psyches.
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Since arriving at the ''Web of Harmonies'' she has found it both strange and alluring. Strange, because of the aspects of solidity, of flesh and blood and of the visceral causing her to feel revulsion. Alluring, because of the beauty of the harmonies themselves, and the way that the interacting sounds move through her new body, and make her feel happy and complete in a way that she never even new existed. Though still an alien in an alien land, she has grown to love the Web of Harmonies, and is beginning to know it as ''home''.
  
 
Ellyria still retains some of her old nature - she is able to manipulate light (what little of it there is in this realm, compared to her home) and can craft illusory images or beams of burning power. She is often surprised when others refer to this as sorcery - it is a natural ability for her people.
 
Ellyria still retains some of her old nature - she is able to manipulate light (what little of it there is in this realm, compared to her home) and can craft illusory images or beams of burning power. She is often surprised when others refer to this as sorcery - it is a natural ability for her people.

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