Editing Last Voyage of Delilah, Episode 101: An Auspicious Start

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'''Valentine:''' (slowly) That's my name, yes.<br>
 
'''Valentine:''' (slowly) That's my name, yes.<br>
 
'''Han Chin:''' Do you know this man?<br>
 
'''Han Chin:''' Do you know this man?<br>
'''Rachel:''' Yeah, that's Laz's boy. (To Valentine) You've grown up a lot. You look like your picture, though.<br><br>
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'''Rachel:''' Yeah, that's Lilah's boy. (To Valentine) You've grown up a lot. You look like your picture, though.<br><br>
  
 
Valentine is a bit nonplussed. He hasn't any memory of meeting Rachel McAllister, so how does she seem to know him? He puts the mystery aside for now.<br><br>
 
Valentine is a bit nonplussed. He hasn't any memory of meeting Rachel McAllister, so how does she seem to know him? He puts the mystery aside for now.<br><br>

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