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Of course, Rachel has to turn on the comms to give Traffic Control the good news. She gets a lot of screaming in return. The panicked OHMYGODWHATAREYOUDOING??‼ kind. At least it's not the STANDBYTOBEBOARDED kind. We're getting kind of tired of that.<br><br>
 
Of course, Rachel has to turn on the comms to give Traffic Control the good news. She gets a lot of screaming in return. The panicked OHMYGODWHATAREYOUDOING??‼ kind. At least it's not the STANDBYTOBEBOARDED kind. We're getting kind of tired of that.<br><br>
  
Traffic Control gets a grip. We get a landing pad. We land easy as you please. <br><br>  
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Traffic Control gets a grip. We get a landing pad.<br><br>  
  
 
Aft of the bridge, Valentine is completely calm and Tian is moaning her relief at landing in one piece. He makes sure she's all right before helping Poco pull Vikki out of the maintenance tube. She emerges covered head to toe in nasty stuff that might be oil, might be toxic waste. The young woman wrinkles her nose as she tries to wring out her shirt. Poco watches and pulls a deep drag on his ever-present cigarette. <br><br>
 
Aft of the bridge, Valentine is completely calm and Tian is moaning her relief at landing in one piece. He makes sure she's all right before helping Poco pull Vikki out of the maintenance tube. She emerges covered head to toe in nasty stuff that might be oil, might be toxic waste. The young woman wrinkles her nose as she tries to wring out her shirt. Poco watches and pulls a deep drag on his ever-present cigarette. <br><br>
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'''Vikki:''' Ohhhhh… That feels so good….<br><br>
 
'''Vikki:''' Ohhhhh… That feels so good….<br><br>
  
Through the bridge windows, Rachel sees the crash trucks out with their lights flashing—just in case. She also sees some money change hands with the ground crew, too. The ship settles. The hull cools. The ground crew works. <br><br>
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We land easy as you please. Through the bridge windows, Rachel sees the crash trucks out with their lights flashing—just in case. She also sees some money change hands with the ground crew, too. The ship settles. The hull cools. The ground crew works. <br><br>
  
 
Business as usual. One more landing accomplished. Rachel pats her ship.<br><br>  
 
Business as usual. One more landing accomplished. Rachel pats her ship.<br><br>  

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