Editing Letter to Bleys from Alvah

Dear Uncle Bleys, 

As recent events has brought me back to the marvelous kingdom of Amber, a thought came to mind. 

As you might have heard or most likely not have heard, i have been trained in the arts of Ballet for a long while. 
And while i have not performed on stage in recent times, the stage can sometimes be very alluring. As it is at this time. 

Now as a member of the family i see it not as fitting to perform at one of the grand stages, those rights are reserved for those who have dedicated their lives to the arts. 

But could we perhaps over a drink or a meal, or both discuss possibilities of me dancing on a stage again. Just to feel that rush again without having to spill blood or kill people. 

With kind regards
Alvah. 

P.S. i promise not to beat people or destroy things.
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 As you might have heard or most likely not have heard, i have been trained in the arts of Ballet for a long while.
+And while i have not performed on stage in recent times, the stage can sometimes be very alluring. As it is at this time.
-And while i have not performed on stage in recent times, the stage can sometimes be very alluring. As it is at this time. And i have heard in passing that you are opening a big new part of the theatre district.
-Congratulations!
-Here comes my thought and the asking for a favor, i would like to perform in dance again.
 Now as a member of the family i see it not as fitting to perform at one of the grand stages, those rights are reserved for those who have dedicated their lives to the arts.