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&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;“What did you do, where are we—?<br>
 
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;“What did you do, where are we—?<br>
 
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;“Shut up and keep up, or I’m throwin’ you back.” Mike hauled their asses out of there and cut cross-country for the next ridge over. The terrain was a jumbled mess of rock outcroppings and overhanging trees, a thermographic patchwork Mike hoped would be a nightmare to read on the scopes. He kept under the trees as much as possible, reckoning it might help mask their passage to the alternate LZ.  Or it might not.<br>
 
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;“Shut up and keep up, or I’m throwin’ you back.” Mike hauled their asses out of there and cut cross-country for the next ridge over. The terrain was a jumbled mess of rock outcroppings and overhanging trees, a thermographic patchwork Mike hoped would be a nightmare to read on the scopes. He kept under the trees as much as possible, reckoning it might help mask their passage to the alternate LZ.  Or it might not.<br>
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;The whine of the skiff followed on their heels.<br>
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&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;The whine of the skiff followed on their heels.<br>
 
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;''Looks like ‘not.’''<br>
 
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;''Looks like ‘not.’''<br>
 
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;Mike broke comm silence and hailed his ride.<br>
 
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;Mike broke comm silence and hailed his ride.<br>

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