Editing Lighting the Fire Part 1

Jump to: navigation, search

Warning: You are not logged in. Your IP address will be publicly visible if you make any edits. If you log in or create an account, your edits will be attributed to your username, along with other benefits.

The edit can be undone. Please check the comparison below to verify that this is what you want to do, and then save the changes below to finish undoing the edit.
Latest revision Your text
Line 56: Line 56:
 
        Connelly shook his head. “We’ve still got eight minutes before we should expect contact, ma’am,” he replied tightly. “Sensors are showing that squad has changed course, too, though they’re not coming as fast as we did. They’re going to be here in ... about ten minutes, it looks like.”
 
        Connelly shook his head. “We’ve still got eight minutes before we should expect contact, ma’am,” he replied tightly. “Sensors are showing that squad has changed course, too, though they’re not coming as fast as we did. They’re going to be here in ... about ten minutes, it looks like.”
 
<br><br>
 
<br><br>
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;Mike was down to the last sniper rifle, the other two already emptied and discarded as they’d made their best speed to the alt-LZ.  The skiff was still overhead, no doubt directing the Feds on the ground to their position and so far, it had been content to merely dog their footsteps and strafe them.  After the initial run, Mike realized the skiff wasn’t tasked to kill them but to herd them to a predetermined location, an ambush.  That told him the Feds wanted Li back alive.  Although it boded well for the information Li claimed he carried with him, it didn’t give Mike any hope as to his own fate should the Feds prove successful.  If he was going down, he might as well make the enemy work for it.  Time to get under cover and sweep their back trail once more.<br>
+
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;Mike was down to the last sniper rifle, the other two already emptied and discarded as they’d made their best speed to the alt-LZ.  The skiff was still overhead, no doubt directing the Feds on the ground to their position.  So far, the skiff had been content to merely dog their footsteps and strafe them.  After the initial run, Mike realized the skiff wasn’t tasked to kill them but to herd them to a predetermined location, an ambush.  That told him the Feds wanted Li back alive.  Although it boded well for the information Li claimed he carried with him, it didn’t give Mike any hope as to his own fate should the Feds prove successful.  If he was going down, he might as well make the enemy work for it.  Time to get under cover and sweep their back trail once more.<br>
 
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;Mike spied moonlight gleaming on a rocky outcropping and gauged the shadow beneath.  A shallow cave or a deep overhang.  A tight fit, but good enough for their purposes.<br>
 
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;Mike spied moonlight gleaming on a rocky outcropping and gauged the shadow beneath.  A shallow cave or a deep overhang.  A tight fit, but good enough for their purposes.<br>
 
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;“This way,” Mike hissed, yanking Li off stride as he changed their direction upslope.  Once they were under cover, Li collapsed against the rock, nearly sobbing as he sucked air.  Mike wasn’t unaffected, either—it had been a while since he’d had to push himself to this extreme, and his hands shook from fatigue as he shouldered the rifle and scanned the area below through its scope.<br>   
 
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;“This way,” Mike hissed, yanking Li off stride as he changed their direction upslope.  Once they were under cover, Li collapsed against the rock, nearly sobbing as he sucked air.  Mike wasn’t unaffected, either—it had been a while since he’d had to push himself to this extreme, and his hands shook from fatigue as he shouldered the rifle and scanned the area below through its scope.<br>   

Please note that all contributions to RPGnet may be edited, altered, or removed by other contributors. If you do not want your writing to be edited mercilessly, then do not submit it here.
You are also promising us that you wrote this yourself, or copied it from a public domain or similar free resource (see RPGnet:Copyrights for details). Do not submit copyrighted work without permission!

Cancel Editing help (opens in new window)