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        A confused voice replied, “Our ground troops ''are there''. What the hell’s going on?”
 
        A confused voice replied, “Our ground troops ''are there''. What the hell’s going on?”
 
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&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;Cutting loose with a gutter curse, Mike didn’t waste any more time but grabbed Li and hauled ass for the ramp of the waiting ship.  They crossed fifty yards of open space riddled with flying lead as the ''Harbinger''’s crew lay down covering fire over their heads into the surrounding brush line, and by the grace of God Mike managed to make it to the ramp unscathed.  Li wasn’t as lucky, taking a graze on the arm.  Mike shoved the man past the first of the ''Harbinger'' crew and hit the controls for the ramp.<br>
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&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;Cutting loose with a gutter curse, Mike didn’t waste any more time but grabbed Li and hauled ass for the ramp of the waiting ship.  They crossed fifty yards of open space riddled with flying lead as the Harbinger’s crew lay down covering fire over their heads into the surrounding brush line, and by the grace of God Mike managed to make it to the ramp unscathed.  Li wasn’t as lucky, taking a graze on the arm.  Mike shoved the man past the first of the ''Harbinger'' crew and hit the controls for the ramp.<br>
 
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;“We’re on.  ''GO!''” he yelled into the comm.<br>
 
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;“We’re on.  ''GO!''” he yelled into the comm.<br>
 
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;The ramp rose and they dusted off, enemy fire whining in their wake.   
 
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;The ramp rose and they dusted off, enemy fire whining in their wake.   

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