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&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;Connelly cut the comm, clapped the handset to his chest, and crowed, “Oh, ''Christ'', that’s priceless!” Composing himself, he turned it back on and calmly replied, “We copy, ''Harkin''. ETA one minute. We’ll contact you when we’ve acquired the target.”<br>
 
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;Connelly cut the comm, clapped the handset to his chest, and crowed, “Oh, ''Christ'', that’s priceless!” Composing himself, he turned it back on and calmly replied, “We copy, ''Harkin''. ETA one minute. We’ll contact you when we’ve acquired the target.”<br>
 
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;“Acknowledged. ''Harkin'' out.”<br>
 
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;“Acknowledged. ''Harkin'' out.”<br>
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;Connelly snickered and cut the channel off.<br>
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&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;Connolly snickered and cut the channel off.<br>
 
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;Kramer just shook her head at him and commed Harrington. “Load ’em up with whatever Fed rounds we’ve got, Harry. They think we’re one of them, helping apprehend a fugitive.”<br>
 
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;Kramer just shook her head at him and commed Harrington. “Load ’em up with whatever Fed rounds we’ve got, Harry. They think we’re one of them, helping apprehend a fugitive.”<br>
 
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;Nika had the ship in position as directed, and she glanced at Kramer. “We’re going to have to break radio silence with our contact.  Otherwise, ''he’s'' going to think we’re one of them, too.”<br>
 
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;Nika had the ship in position as directed, and she glanced at Kramer. “We’re going to have to break radio silence with our contact.  Otherwise, ''he’s'' going to think we’re one of them, too.”<br>
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&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;Kramer sent her prayer winging heavenward. God’s answer came through her pilot’s hands.  ''Harbinger'' swept upward and made a flat run at full speed. Full stop to top speed in one gut-wrenching second, she again flew barely at treetop level, beneath the Feds’ radar and making anyone on the ground scatter.<br>  
 
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;Kramer sent her prayer winging heavenward. God’s answer came through her pilot’s hands.  ''Harbinger'' swept upward and made a flat run at full speed. Full stop to top speed in one gut-wrenching second, she again flew barely at treetop level, beneath the Feds’ radar and making anyone on the ground scatter.<br>  
 
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;The comms squawked with confused requests for status reports from all quarters. The ground troops screamed about being fired on, the ''Harkin'' kept requesting the ''Lancet'' to verify acquisition of the target, and the skiff’s crew demanded to know why gunfire was being exchanged. It would clearly take a while for the Alliance troops to sort out what had happened right under their noses.<br>
 
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;The comms squawked with confused requests for status reports from all quarters. The ground troops screamed about being fired on, the ''Harkin'' kept requesting the ''Lancet'' to verify acquisition of the target, and the skiff’s crew demanded to know why gunfire was being exchanged. It would clearly take a while for the Alliance troops to sort out what had happened right under their noses.<br>
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;“Take her north, then jink east when we’re clear and make orbit on our alternate ID,” Kramer said after a full minute of pulling high Gs as they retraced their insane route up the river bed.  “Connelly, get us a heading to the rendezvous point. We’ll make the transfer there.”<br>
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&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;“Take her north, then jink east when we’re clear and make orbit on our alternate ID,” Kramer said after a full minute of pulling high Gs as they retraced their insane route up the river bed.  “Connolly, get us a heading to the rendezvous point. We’ll make the transfer there.”<br>
 
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;“On it,” Connelly acknowledged and got to work, fingers on the keyboard typing fast against the rearward pull.<br>
 
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;“On it,” Connelly acknowledged and got to work, fingers on the keyboard typing fast against the rearward pull.<br>
 
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;Only when the transponder code had been changed to their alternate call sign did Nika bring ''Harbinger'', now flying at a sedate and perfectly casual speed, back onto the radar grid.  For all intents and purposes, they were now an entirely different vessel with no connection to the action on the ground.<br>
 
&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;Only when the transponder code had been changed to their alternate call sign did Nika bring ''Harbinger'', now flying at a sedate and perfectly casual speed, back onto the radar grid.  For all intents and purposes, they were now an entirely different vessel with no connection to the action on the ground.<br>

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