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One by one the others died until only he and Jak remained, and Jak had turned mean, developing a cruel cunning as the experiments went on.  
 
One by one the others died until only he and Jak remained, and Jak had turned mean, developing a cruel cunning as the experiments went on.  
  
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But it was Jak's cunning that freed them, that sabotaged the locks and disabled the watchers. Through air vents, ductwork, and drains, Jinx and Jak fled the lab and found the sewers.
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But it was Jak's cruel cunning that freed them, that sabotaged the locks and disabled the watchers. Through air vents, ductwork, and drains, Jinx and Jak fled the lab and found the sewers.
  
 
Jak left him there, but Jinx survived, and he continued to grow and change. He left the sewers and learned to live among the people of Mirage City. He learned their words and their ways and how to pass as one of them - at a distance, anyway.
 
Jak left him there, but Jinx survived, and he continued to grow and change. He left the sewers and learned to live among the people of Mirage City. He learned their words and their ways and how to pass as one of them - at a distance, anyway.

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