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'''In the depths of Valkshawsen...'''
 
  
 
Seven Times Blessed by the Sun sits behind Mari, milling through a variety of books. Mari had found Seven Times Blessed By The Sun (or Seven, as she called him) in the helot district, after a quick visit to check on Ash, the deathknight in the creepy abandoned house with the corpses. Seven had been running an impromptu backstreet clinic, and she'd observed him for some time before he realized that he was being watched. Needless to say, it soon resulted in her sitting on his shoulders, as though he were giving his little sister a ride. Now she's in here, ensconced in his lap, while he makes himself comfortable in a pile of already-perused books.
 
Seven Times Blessed by the Sun sits behind Mari, milling through a variety of books. Mari had found Seven Times Blessed By The Sun (or Seven, as she called him) in the helot district, after a quick visit to check on Ash, the deathknight in the creepy abandoned house with the corpses. Seven had been running an impromptu backstreet clinic, and she'd observed him for some time before he realized that he was being watched. Needless to say, it soon resulted in her sitting on his shoulders, as though he were giving his little sister a ride. Now she's in here, ensconced in his lap, while he makes himself comfortable in a pile of already-perused books.
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'''At Coral's Lodge...'''
 
  
 
The three make it to the cabin. Coral is still alone other than the demon, Shimazu, Keeper of the Five Score Lores. When Mari enters the cabin the demon almost comes out of his dematerialized hiding place, but then spots Kraik and Seven.  
 
The three make it to the cabin. Coral is still alone other than the demon, Shimazu, Keeper of the Five Score Lores. When Mari enters the cabin the demon almost comes out of his dematerialized hiding place, but then spots Kraik and Seven.  
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'''The next day...'''
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Seven and Kraik are waiting outside when Mari leaves the inn. "Morning, Mari. Ready for the trip?" By her bounciness and big grin the question was obviously rhetorical. Kraik is wearing his signature cloak with hood up. Seven is wearing a sturdy set of traveling clothes that reveal nothing about his body. They are far too baggy to show any musculature or fat.  
  
Seven and Kraik are waiting outside when Mari leaves the inn.  
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Getting out of the city is far easier than getting in. The guards are stopping every traveller and merchant as they enter the city gates. Those leaving can go unmolested by the guards.  
  
"Morning, Mari. Ready for the trip?"
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The journey south is hot as the days wear on and the hottest day of the year approaches. The plains of the Marukan Alliance reflect the warm sun and cause the ground to shimmer. It's nothing like the heat of the true South but it's much warmer than the forests of the East.
  
Judging by her bounciness and the big grin on her face, the question was obviously rhetorical. Kraik is wearing his signature cloak with hood up. Seven is wearing a sturdy set of traveling clothes that reveal nothing about his body. They are far too baggy to show any musculature or fat.  
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On their fourth day and second within Marukan territory, the mountain in sight, a dust cloud approaches and not longer after the sound of thundering hooves on the ground.  
  
Getting out of the city is far easier than getting in. The guards are stopping every traveller and merchant as they enter the city gates. However, those leaving can go unmolested by the guards.  
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"Should we wait for the approaching tribe or try to skirt around them," says Seven.
  
The journey south is hot as the days wear on and the hottest day of the year approaches. The plains of the Marukan Alliance reflect the warm sun and cause the ground to shimmer. It's nothing like the heat of the true South, but it's much warmer than the forests of the East.
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On their fourth day and second within Marukan territory, the mountain in sight, a dust cloud approaches and not longer after, the sound of thundering hooves on the ground.
 
  
 
"Mari, don't do that," Seven scolds gently as the girl tries, for the umpteenth time, to take her clothes off.
 
"Mari, don't do that," Seven scolds gently as the girl tries, for the umpteenth time, to take her clothes off.
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Kraik stifles a cough, while the cloaked demon sniggers. "Ah, Miss Mari's body, I see it has not deteriorated much since I last saw it... ah, I'll behave," he nods to Seven.
 
Kraik stifles a cough, while the cloaked demon sniggers. "Ah, Miss Mari's body, I see it has not deteriorated much since I last saw it... ah, I'll behave," he nods to Seven.
  
Then, they notice the approaching riders.
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Then, they spot the oncoming horsemen.
 
 
"Should we meet up with them, or try to skirt around them?" asks Seven.
 
  
 
"Hmm," Mari thinks. "Well, it depends. I figure we should at least introduce ourselves. Otherwise they'll chase us, and we'll have to beat them up, and that wouldn't get us anywhere, would it?" she says.
 
"Hmm," Mari thinks. "Well, it depends. I figure we should at least introduce ourselves. Otherwise they'll chase us, and we'll have to beat them up, and that wouldn't get us anywhere, would it?" she says.
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"Oiiiiii!" she calls out. "How are ya!"
 
"Oiiiiii!" she calls out. "How are ya!"
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The horsemen pull up short of the odd display. A naked girl sitting on a man's shoulders waving to them. "Who is it that treads on these lands? Friend or foe of the Marukani?"
 
The horsemen pull up short of the odd display. A naked girl sitting on a man's shoulders waving to them. "Who is it that treads on these lands? Friend or foe of the Marukani?"
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"We're friends!" she shouts back. "My name's Mari! Who are you?"
 
"We're friends!" she shouts back. "My name's Mari! Who are you?"
  
Seven sighs, and pushes the dress offered to him by Shy into Mari's side.
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Seven sighs, and gratefully accepts the dress offered to him by Shy.
  
 
"Get dressed, Mari. They must surely think you're strange now."
 
"Get dressed, Mari. They must surely think you're strange now."
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"We're looking for a temple on top of a mountain!" she continues. "It holds a magic egg! And stuff!"
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"We're looking for a temple on top of a mountain! It holds a magic egg! And stuff!"
  
 
"Mari, you don't have to shout, he's right there," Seven says.
 
"Mari, you don't have to shout, he's right there," Seven says.
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"Um. Yeah. Well. We were hoping to pass through your lands," she says in accordance to the script prepared for her by Kraik. "To. Uh, recover a great treasure. And save Lookshy."
 
"Um. Yeah. Well. We were hoping to pass through your lands," she says in accordance to the script prepared for her by Kraik. "To. Uh, recover a great treasure. And save Lookshy."
  
Her voice trails off as she notices their leader's horse.
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Her voice trails off as she notices Kordeth's horse.
  
 
"Ooooh, a horsie! He's like those horsies the Delzahn riders ride..."  
 
"Ooooh, a horsie! He's like those horsies the Delzahn riders ride..."  
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"Horsie wanna apple?" she giggles, leaning forward.
 
"Horsie wanna apple?" she giggles, leaning forward.
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The horse shies away at first but then cautiously takes the apple from Mari's hand into its mouth.
 
The horse shies away at first but then cautiously takes the apple from Mari's hand into its mouth.
  
"The Delzahn trade for our horses. They honor the horses as they should be."  
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"The Delzahn trade for our horses. They honor the horses as they should be." The horse satisfied with the treat turns to the side as the Marukani horselord turns it. "I know of the mountain you speak. I would take you to the temple but we ride for Lookshy. We need their help but if they need saving..."
 
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The horse, satisfied with the treat turns to the side as the Marukani horselord turns it. "I know of the mountain you speak. I would take you to the temple but we ride for Lookshy. We need their help, but if they need saving..."
 
  
 
"Well, it'd be nice if you could take us there... but yeah, the Masky of Winters is going to attack Lookshy soon, in a couple of weeks or so. I think what we find in the temple could help us... but well, if you want to go to Lookshy, I understand. Although, could you spread the word that we're friends? I'm, er, running low on apples... oh, and what's your horsie's name?"
 
"Well, it'd be nice if you could take us there... but yeah, the Masky of Winters is going to attack Lookshy soon, in a couple of weeks or so. I think what we find in the temple could help us... but well, if you want to go to Lookshy, I understand. Although, could you spread the word that we're friends? I'm, er, running low on apples... oh, and what's your horsie's name?"
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"Hm, troubling. We have reasons to suspect the same is happening to us now. Nothing so organized as an army, but entire villages to the south are being sacked and burned. We haven't found the culprits. We suspected a neightboring kingdom or possibly the Mask of Winters. I will have to hold court with the General Staff." He looks back toward the mountains and points to the highest peak.
 
"Hm, troubling. We have reasons to suspect the same is happening to us now. Nothing so organized as an army, but entire villages to the south are being sacked and burned. We haven't found the culprits. We suspected a neightboring kingdom or possibly the Mask of Winters. I will have to hold court with the General Staff." He looks back toward the mountains and points to the highest peak.
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"The place you seek is atop that mountain. Few go there, it is considered a test of one's strength and will to climb to the top. Few try it for fear of death, fewer still survive."
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"Ooooh," Mari says as she looks in the direction of the man's finger. "Thank you for your help," she bows. "I hope everything works out for you... and rest assured, my friends and I will definitely keep Lookshy and you safe," she smiles.  
 
"Ooooh," Mari says as she looks in the direction of the man's finger. "Thank you for your help," she bows. "I hope everything works out for you... and rest assured, my friends and I will definitely keep Lookshy and you safe," she smiles.  
 
"The place you seek is atop that mountain. Few go there, it is considered a test of one's strength and will to climb to the top. Few try it for fear of death, fewer still survive."
 
  
 
"A test of strength, hm..."
 
"A test of strength, hm..."
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"Oh well. Onward, guys!" she enthuses. "And thank you, Mr. Kordak!" she calls to Kordeth.
 
"Oh well. Onward, guys!" she enthuses. "And thank you, Mr. Kordak!" she calls to Kordeth.
 
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'''The foothills of the mountain...'''
 
  
 
The rest of the trip is marked by occasional meetings with Marukani horesmen who seek to trade but once they discover why the three are there they move on. Mari's supply of apples dwindles quickly so that by the time they reached the mountains there are none left.  
 
The rest of the trip is marked by occasional meetings with Marukani horesmen who seek to trade but once they discover why the three are there they move on. Mari's supply of apples dwindles quickly so that by the time they reached the mountains there are none left.  
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Seven moans, "We have to climb that thing? This had better be the first of the three tests."
 
Seven moans, "We have to climb that thing? This had better be the first of the three tests."
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"And we won't have any apples to do it with either," Mari pouts. "Hmmm," she hmms as she looks at the mountain. "Yeah, that's a huuuuge mountain. I don't suppose anyone knows a way to summon a cloud or a horsie so we can go straight up?" Mari asks.
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"Although... that would kind of go against the spirit of the whole thing too," she says."Well, I could carry you guys," she beams. "It's not [I]that[/I] hard."
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"And we won't have any apples to do it with either," Mari pouts. "Hmmm," she hmms as she looks at the mountain. "Yeah, that's a huuuuge mountain. I don't suppose anyone knows a way to summon a cloud or a horsie so we can go straight up?" Mari asks. "Although... that would kind of go against the spirit of the whole thing too," she says."Well, I could carry you guys," she beams. "It's not ''that'' hard."
 
  
 
"I can climb it lass," Kraik says. He's out of his hood for the first time in days. "It shouldn't be that big of a problem."
 
"I can climb it lass," Kraik says. He's out of his hood for the first time in days. "It shouldn't be that big of a problem."
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"I'll maintain my dignity as well and climb," remarks Seven. He cracks his knuckles and his neck moving his head in a full circle.  
 
"I'll maintain my dignity as well and climb," remarks Seven. He cracks his knuckles and his neck moving his head in a full circle.  
  
"I don't believe I'll have any problems, mistress," Shy replies.
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"I don't believe I'll have any problems mistress."
 
 
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'''Halfway up the mountain...'''
 
  
 
The way up is treacherous and Mari can see why the Marukani revere the mountain for its deadliness and challenge. Kraik isn't able to keep up with Mari but he does not struggle to climb either. His pace is slow and efficient.  
 
The way up is treacherous and Mari can see why the Marukani revere the mountain for its deadliness and challenge. Kraik isn't able to keep up with Mari but he does not struggle to climb either. His pace is slow and efficient.  
  
Seven slips several times, once almost falling to his doom except for Mari's quick reflexes and strength. Midway through the day they come to a ledge. It is large enough to fit a small campsite and the group sees that it has been used as such in the past. A fire pit has been formed in the stone and the stone is black from much use.  
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Seven slips several times, once almost falling to his doom except for Mari's quick reflexes and strength. Midway through the day they come to a ledge. It is large enough to fit a small campsite and the group sees that it has been used for such in the past. A fire pit has been formed in the stone and the stone is black from so much use.  
  
 
In the face of the mountain is a small recess with a statue slightly taller than Mari.  
 
In the face of the mountain is a small recess with a statue slightly taller than Mari.  
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"We should have a good rest here, she says. "Although, I don't know how to make food or water come out of nowhere..."
 
"We should have a good rest here, she says. "Although, I don't know how to make food or water come out of nowhere..."
  
 
Her voice trails off as she studies the statue. She's not sure what exactly it is, or what significance it has, but it's the closest thing to a person she's met on the mountain. Mari scratches her head as she tries to remember if any of the books she read referred to anything like this.
 
Her voice trails off as she studies the statue. She's not sure what exactly it is, or what significance it has, but it's the closest thing to a person she's met on the mountain. Mari scratches her head as she tries to remember if any of the books she read referred to anything like this.
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Mari remembers back to her time in the library poruing over the mountain of books available to her. She remembers the mention of the three challenges and how one is outside of the Manse. The first challenge was the key to entry into the manse and its mystery. Each challenge is held by a statue of ordinary statues. She remembers the sketch in the diary looked similar to the one before her now, but some features are missing.
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Mari remembers her time in the library, poring over the mountain of books available to her. She remembers the mention of the three challenges and how one is outside of the Manse. The first challenge was the key to entry into the manse and its mystery. Each challenge is held by a statue of ordinary statues. She remembers the sketch in the diary looked similar to the one before her now, but some features are missing.
 
  
 
"Hrm... okay, so this statue looks like stuff I've seen in the books back in the library, but the face isn't quite right. Maybe I have to mess with it..."
 
"Hrm... okay, so this statue looks like stuff I've seen in the books back in the library, but the face isn't quite right. Maybe I have to mess with it..."
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"Let's see... I think it looked like this..." she murmurs, a look of supreme concentration on her face.
 
"Let's see... I think it looked like this..." she murmurs, a look of supreme concentration on her face.
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Mari steps up to the statue placing both of her hands on the side of the statue's head. The edges of the statue begin to shine like the noon day sky over head. The bright yellow light destroying all shadows around. The statue begins to move its head, the sound of grating stone. Finally it steps forward causing Mari to step back.
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When both feet touch the ground the statue appears human. The head is a little too round. He's a baldy too, but he's suffused with a faint yellow glow. He wears a yellow gi with the Unconquered Sun's emblem on his chest.
  
Mari steps up to the statue placing both of her hands on the side of the statue's head. The edges of the statue begin to shine like the noonday sky over head, the bright yellow light destroying all shadows around. The statue begins to move its head, the sound of grating stone. Finally it steps forward, and Mari takes a step back in turn. When both feet touch the ground the statue appears human. The head is a little too round. He's a baldy too, but he's suffused with a faint yellow glow. He wears a yellow gi with the Unconquered Sun's emblem on his chest.
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"Welcome traveler," his voice is that of a teenage boy. "Do you seek passage to the Temple of the Sun's Evershining Light?"
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"Welcome traveler," it speaks, in the voice of a teenage boy. "Do you seek passage to the Temple of the Sun's Evershining Light?"
 
  
 
The statue's lack of hair on its head instantly makes her suspicious, but her air of unease is dispelled by the sight of the radiant symbol of the Sun on its chest.  He also had a youngish voice, and all the bad baldies tended to be old and crusty and stuff. Plus, they never asked her nicely.
 
The statue's lack of hair on its head instantly makes her suspicious, but her air of unease is dispelled by the sight of the radiant symbol of the Sun on its chest.  He also had a youngish voice, and all the bad baldies tended to be old and crusty and stuff. Plus, they never asked her nicely.
  
 
"Um. Is that what it's called, the Temple of the Sun? Mmmmm, well... yeah! Yeah, I guess we're looking for it. May we enter, please?" she smiles. Perhaps a more savvy Solar might not have felt the need to be nice to an automated greeting / defense system, but Mari's never been one to worry about such details.  
 
"Um. Is that what it's called, the Temple of the Sun? Mmmmm, well... yeah! Yeah, I guess we're looking for it. May we enter, please?" she smiles. Perhaps a more savvy Solar might not have felt the need to be nice to an automated greeting / defense system, but Mari's never been one to worry about such details.  
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"Only those that possess the proper soul may seek the manse out and call it their own. The Sun shines on but requires the proper sacrifice to cpntinue on its journey"
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Ryan says (9:47 AM):
 
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"Only those that possess the proper soul may seek the manse out and call it their own. The Sun shines on but requires the proper sacrifice to cpntinue on its journey"
"The proper soul? A... sacrifice?"
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Dante - I have a habit of leaving my computer unattended for long periods for time without indicating my Away status. says (9:50 AM):
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"The proper soul? A... sacrifice?"
  
 
Mari wonders what the strange baldy statue could be talking about. She knows what sacrifices are; after all, she's seen people make offerings to Ahlat before, and some of his Brides even told her what their lives were, while taking her on their knee.
 
Mari wonders what the strange baldy statue could be talking about. She knows what sacrifices are; after all, she's seen people make offerings to Ahlat before, and some of his Brides even told her what their lives were, while taking her on their knee.
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"Hey, do we have any sacrifices left?" she asks.
 
"Hey, do we have any sacrifices left?" she asks.
 
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Ryan says (9:52 AM):
"The Sun is Purity, Excellence , and Unconquerable. The worthy must prove they are all three."
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"The Sun is Purity, Excellence , and Unconquerable. The worthy must prove they are all three."
 
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Ryan says (9:53 AM):
Seven shrugs his shoulders, "Sorry I'm all out." Kraik shakes his head no.
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Seven shrugs his shoulders, "Sorry I'm all out." Kraik shakes his head no.
 
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Ryan says (9:54 AM):
"The first test is the Test of Purity."
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"The first test is the Test of Purity."
 
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Ryan says (9:55 AM):
"Purity?" Mari says to herself as she scratches her head, considering all the terrible, sinful things she's done recently. "Oh dear."
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The boy statue turns on its heel and points to the recess. The blank space shimmers. Then a scene appears:
 
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Dante - I have a habit of leaving my computer unattended for long periods for time without indicating my Away status. says (9:56 AM):
The boy statue turns on its heel and points to the recess. The blank space shimmers. Then a scene appears: a small lake is surrounded by a barren ridge on all sides. Birds can be seen flying about the lake and nesting on its edges. In the center of the lake is a stone, natural pillar. Atop it is a nest at least 10 meters in diameter.  
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"Purity?" Mari says to herself as she scratches her head, considering all the terrible, sinful things she's done recently. "Oh dear."
 
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Ryan says (9:58 AM):
"Ooooh... hey guys, come look!" Mari calls out excitedly. "It made a picture!"
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A small lake is surrounded by a barren ridge on all sides. Birds can be seen flying about the lake and nesting on its edges. In the center of the lake is a stone, natural pillar. Atop it is a nest at least 10 meters in diameter.  
 
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Dante - I have a habit of leaving my computer unattended for long periods for time without indicating my Away status. says (10:00 AM):
"The creature that resides there is unique. It neither ages or gives birth. It was a gift to the sun. Receive a wing as a gift and entrance shall be yours."
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"Ooooh... hey guys, come look!" Mari calls out excitedly. "It made a picture!"
 
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Ryan says (10:02 AM):
The statue points east to a part of the mountain range not far off. "There."
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The creature that resides there is unique. It neither ages or gives birth. It was a gift to the sun. Receive a wing as a gift and entrance shall be yours."
 
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Dante - I have a habit of leaving my computer unattended for long periods for time without indicating my Away status. says (10:03 AM):
"Ohhh... okay. Hm. Guys, I'll be heading out for a bit," Mari says. "Make something for me when I get back, ya?" she smiles.
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(Is she in the illusion thing, or is she just looking at it through a window... and can she see the others? I suspect it transported her into a mental landscape, but I'm not sure.)
 
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Ryan says (10:04 AM):
They nod and go about setting up camp as Mari heads off toward the lake.
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(Its just an illusuion showing her what to look for,)
 
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Ryan says (10:05 AM):
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The statue points east to a part of the mountain range not far off. "There."
 
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Dante - I have a habit of leaving my computer unattended for long periods for time without indicating my Away status. says (10:06 AM):
'''On the way to the first test...'''
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"Ohhh... okay. Hm. Guys, I'll be heading out for a bit," Mari says. "Make something for me when I get back, ya?" she smiles, and then she's off.
 
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Ryan says (10:08 AM):
"It neither ages nor gives birth. It was a gift to the sun. Receive a wing as a gift and entrance shall be yours," Mari repeats to herself. Hrm. Well, it definitely means she can't beat it until candy comes out; the wing has to be given as a gift, so pulling it out of its socket probably won't work...
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They nod and go about setting up camp as Mari heads off toward the lake.
 
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Dante - I have a habit of leaving my computer unattended for long periods for time without indicating my Away status. says (10:11 AM):
Mari reaches the edge of the mountain lake. Birds circle and dance through the air, occasionally diving at the water and coming up with a fish. The central nest appears barren of any bird or creature.
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"It neither ages nor gives birth. It was a gift to the sun. Receive a wing as a gift and entrance shall be yours," Mari repeats to herself.  
 
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Hrm. Well, it definitely means she can't beat it until candy comes out; the wing has to be given as a gift, so pulling it out of its socket probably won't work...
Out of idle curiosity, she picks up a nearby stone and tries to skip it to the other side  of the lake.
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Ryan says (10:15 AM):
 
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Mari makes it to the edge of the mountain lake. Birds circle and dnxe through the air occasionally diving at the water and coming up with a fish. The central nest appears barren of any bird or creature.
The stone makes part of the way across before something clear like water emerges from the water, swallowing the stone as it dives back into the crystal-blue lake. Its mostly-invisible body is as long as three of Frost's Cloud Runners.
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Dante - I have a habit of leaving my computer unattended for long periods for time without indicating my Away status. says (10:17 AM):
 
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Out of idle curiosity, she picks up a nearby stone and tries to skip it to the other side  of the lake.
"Hmm... so if I try to swim across, I'll probably get eaten. Might not be good," she thinks. "Plus, it's biiiig. Hmmm..."
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Ryan says (10:20 AM):
 
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The stone makes part of the way across before something clear like water emerges from the water swallowing the stone as it dives back into the crystal bue lake. Its mostly invisible body as long as a three of Frost's Cloud Runners.
Mari sits down on the edge, wondering how she should get across to the big center pillar thing,
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Dante - I have a habit of leaving my computer unattended for long periods for time without indicating my Away status. says (10:22 AM):
 
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"Hmm... so if I try to swim across, I'll probably get eaten. Might not be good," she thinks. "Plus, it's biiiig. Hmmm..."
Mari looks out at the water examining the surface and thinking. She runs the image of the creature that ate the stone through the analytical part of her mind, though it takes a while on account of being so small. Its form was distinctly snake-like, but something seemed wrong about it. Then she has a revelation - the sea monster has a small set of wings on its back!
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Dante - I have a habit of leaving my computer unattended for long periods for time without indicating my Away status. says (10:23 AM):
 
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Mari sits down on the edge, wondering how she should get across to the big center pillar thing,
"Oh! That's it! Hrm. I'll have to go in there, though..."
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Dante - I have a habit of leaving my computer unattended for long periods for time without indicating my Away status. says (10:24 AM):
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(I don't think Mari can jump from where she is to the pillar, right? Her horizontal jumps are about 80 yards each...)
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Ryan says (10:26 AM):
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(Probably not. But give a sec. I'm slow on this thing.)
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Dante - I have a habit of leaving my computer unattended for long periods for time without indicating my Away status. says (10:29 AM):
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(Okie. :D)
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Ryan says (10:29 AM):
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Mari looks out at the water examining the surface and thinking. She runs the image of the creature that ate the stone through the analytical part of her mind. Its form was distinctly snake like but something seemed wrong. Then she has a eureka moment. The sea monster had a small set of wings on its back.
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Dante - I have a habit of leaving my computer unattended for long periods for time without indicating my Away status. says (10:31 AM):
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"Oh! That's it! Hrm. I'll have to go in there, though..."
  
 
With nothing else left to her, she launches herself through the air, coming down in a graceful swan dive that plunges her deep into the lake.
 
With nothing else left to her, she launches herself through the air, coming down in a graceful swan dive that plunges her deep into the lake.
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Ryan says (10:31 AM):
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(Brb)
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Dante - I have a habit of leaving my computer unattended for long periods for time without indicating my Away status. says (10:32 AM):
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(Okie ;) )
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Ryan says (10:42 AM):
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(Back)
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Dante - I have a habit of leaving my computer unattended for long periods for time without indicating my Away status. says (10:42 AM):
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(:D)
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Ryan says (10:47 AM):
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Mari is able to see the creature under water far easier. It looks like an everflowing evershifting current in the still lake.
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Dante - I have a habit of leaving my computer unattended for long periods for time without indicating my Away status. says (10:47 AM):
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"Hiiii~"she waves to it, the bubbles pouring out of her mouth. On a whim, she swims toward it, heedless of the fact that it might choose to suddenly eat her.
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Ryan says (10:53 AM):
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It changes course and heads in a serpentine fashion toward her. Its huge maw opening causing a tiny underwater whirlpool to form. Inside aren't flesh and guts it gleams like orichalcum in the noon day sun.
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Dante - I have a habit of leaving my computer unattended for long periods for time without indicating my Away status. says (10:54 AM):
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"Ooooh..."
  
Mari is able to see the creature much easier once she's underwater. It looks like an everflowing evershifting current in the still lake.
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And then, without a second thought, she swims into the serpent's maw.
 
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Ryan says (10:57 AM):
"Hiiii~"she waves to it, the bubbles pouring out of her mouth. On a whim, she swims toward it, heedless of the fact that it might choose to suddenly eat her.
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She enters the golden mouth and it closes shut as soon as it has eaten her. She is dumped without ceremony into a closed off section separate from the mouth. Inside are the remains half a dozen bodies. The flesh and cloth long departed leaving white bones behind.  
 
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Ryan says (10:58 AM):
It changes course and heads in a serpentine fashion toward her. Its huge maw opening causing a tiny underwater whirlpool to form. What's inside isn't flesh and guts' instead, it gleams like orichalcum in the noonday sun.
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The sound of churning can be heard over the vibrating shell. The insodes are lined with golden veins that pulse with white light.  
 
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Dante - I have a habit of leaving my computer unattended for long periods for time without indicating my Away status. says (10:59 AM):
"Ooooh..."
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"Oh dear. This looks bad..."
 
 
And then, without a second thought, she swims into the serpent's maw. She enters the golden mouth and it closes shut as soon as it has eaten her. She is dumped without ceremony into a closed off section separate from the mouth. Inside are the remains half a dozen bodies. The flesh and cloth long departed leaving white bones behind. The sound of churning can be heard over the vibrating shell. The insodes are lined with golden veins that pulse with white light.  
 
 
 
"Oh dear. This looks bad..."
 
  
 
She approaches the corpses, trying to see if there's anything shiny in them, or if they're just dried bones.  
 
She approaches the corpses, trying to see if there's anything shiny in them, or if they're just dried bones.  
  
 
"Wow. This is really neat," she says. She reaches out a hand to touch a vein, running her fingers along them...
 
"Wow. This is really neat," she says. She reaches out a hand to touch a vein, running her fingers along them...
 
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Dante - I have a habit of leaving my computer unattended for long periods for time without indicating my Away status. says (11:01 AM):
The veins and metallic flesh shift under her touch. Along the back wall is a gleaming red jade heart that appears attached to something blue and pulsing on the other side. It seems to be a door of sorts; it's circular and looks as if it opens in an ocular fashion. THere's a tiny hole in the wall next to it.
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(Also, go slowly if you have to, I don't want to make this a chore for you)
 
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Ryan says (11:03 AM):
"Hmm. A door. And a heart..."
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The veins and metallic flesh shift under her touch. Along the back wall is a gleaming red jade heart that appears attached to something blue and pulsing on the other side. A door of sorts,  its circular and looks as if it opens in an occular fashion is in the wall next to the heart. A tiny hole in the wall is next to it.
 
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Ryan says (11:04 AM):
Resisting the urge to simply punch it, she lightly touches the strange heart-shaped object, like she were caressing Nee-san's tender bits. On a whim, she presses her face to it, so she can see if it really beats like a heart. There is a pulse of sorts but not like a living heart. Nearing the heart raises the hairs on the back of her neck, the feeling of so much essence terrifying and exhilarating at the same time.
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(I don't have anything else to do. Other than read the mandate of heaven rules)
 
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Dante - I have a habit of leaving my computer unattended for long periods for time without indicating my Away status. says (11:04 AM):
"Mmm," she purrs, before glancing down to the tiny hole. Actually, she bends over to get a better look at it. It's rpughly half a foot deep, it's dark and appears absolutely lifelees. unlike the rest of the room.
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(Oh lord, I have no idea how those freaking work :p)
 
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"Hmm. A door. And a heart..."
"Hmm..."
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Ryan says (11:06 AM):
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(Figured id give the a shot since the group is heading into rulership territory)
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Dante - I have a habit of leaving my computer unattended for long periods for time without indicating my Away status. says (11:07 AM):
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Resisting the urge to simply punch it, she lightly touches the strange heart-shaped object, like she were caressing Nee-san's tender bits. On a whim, she presses her face to it, so she can see if it really beats like a heart.
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Ryan says (11:10 AM):
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There is a pulse of sorts but not like a life-giving heart. Nearing the heart raises the hairs on the back of her neck, the feeling of so much essence terrifying and exhilirating.
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Dante - I have a habit of leaving my computer unattended for long periods for time without indicating my Away status. says (11:11 AM):
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"Mmm," she purrs, before glancing down to the tiny hole. Actually, she bends over to get a better look at it...
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Ryan says (11:13 AM):
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It is ~6 inches deep, dark and appears without any sort of life to it like the rest of the room.
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Dante - I have a habit of leaving my computer unattended for long periods for time without indicating my Away status. says (11:14 AM):
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"Hmm..."
  
 
Not knowing what else she should be doing, she inserts a finger in there, then two, wonder how much of her hand she can fit in there.
 
Not knowing what else she should be doing, she inserts a finger in there, then two, wonder how much of her hand she can fit in there.
 
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Ryan says (11:19 AM):
She is able to fit her entire hand in the recess. As she does so, it comes to life, moonsilver enveloping her hand. She can feel the cool metal as it hardens around her flesh - then the sensation of something electric coursing through her. It doesn't hurt. It sort of tickles actually.
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She is able to fit her entire hand in the recess. if she does so it comes to life as moonsilver envelopes her hand. She can feel the cool metal as it hardens around her hand. Then she feels something electric coursing through her. It doesn't hurt. It sort of tickles actually.
 
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The electric sensation passes and the moonsilver sloughs of her hand back into an inert state. The iris door slodes open.
The electric sensation passes and the moonsilver sloughs off of her hand, back into an inert state. The iris door slides open to reveal another much larger chamber.
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Ryan says (11:20 AM):
 
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To reveal another much larger chamber.
"I can't believe that worked," she giggles. "Awesome."
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(Hopefully this doesn't feel too d&d and there's some cool about it. )
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Dante - I have a habit of leaving my computer unattended for long periods for time without indicating my Away status. says (11:21 AM):
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(Don't worry, it's neat. I mean, where else can you be swallowed by a giant glass serpent and unlock the door to its heart by placing your hand into the vagina of truth? :p)
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Dante - I have a habit of leaving my computer unattended for long periods for time without indicating my Away status. says (11:22 AM):
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"I can't believe that worked," she giggles. "Awesome."
  
 
And then she reflects on the statue's words. "It neither ages nor gives birth..."
 
And then she reflects on the statue's words. "It neither ages nor gives birth..."
  
 
Hrm. There's got to be some significance here, but it eludes her. Since there's something beyond... Mari goes forth.
 
Hrm. There's got to be some significance here, but it eludes her. Since there's something beyond... Mari goes forth.
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Ryan says (11:24 AM):
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The blue light that Mari saw attached to the heart proves to be one massive hollow blue jade sac that fills and empties water. A bank of consoles sits against one wall. Fluctuating patterns of essence being displayed. In the console is another recessed hole. The console appears to have no buttons dials or joysticks.
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(So true. The second hole must be its arse...of truth...)
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Dante - I have a habit of leaving my computer unattended for long periods for time without indicating my Away status. says (11:25 AM):
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(Teehee~ I really think Mari should pick up all-encompassing sorcerer's sight soon, so you can describe Essence flows and whatnot :p)
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"Hrm," she muses as she dances carelessly around the large room.
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Dante - I have a habit of leaving my computer unattended for long periods for time without indicating my Away status. says (11:26 AM):
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"Well, it worked the last time, so maybe this will work too!"
  
The blue light that Mari saw attached to the heart proves to be one massive hollow blue jade sac that fills and empties water. A bank of consoles sits against one wall, displaying fluctuating patterns of Essence. In the console is another recessed hole. The console appears to have no buttons, dials, or joysticks.
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She approaches the orifice and... inserts her hand into it as well."
 
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Ryan says (11:31 AM):
"Hrm," she muses as she dances carelessly around the large room. "Well, it worked the last time, so maybe this will work too!"
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The same moonsilver effect happens again. This time no door opens. An automated voice sounds in the room, "Identity verified, Essence signature approved, Purity scan complete. System override initated. Guard mode off." The voice cuts out and a sluing sound comes from the far end of the room. Something golden and small lays in the floor. As Mari gets closer she sees that the golden shape is a tiny wing.
 
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Dante - I have a habit of leaving my computer unattended for long periods for time without indicating my Away status. says (11:33 AM):
She approaches the orifice and... inserts her hand into it as well.
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"Is this it? Awesome!" she smiles,  going over to pick it up.  
 
 
The same moonsilver effect happens again. This time no door opens. An automated voice sounds in the room, "Identity verified, Essence signature approved, Purity scan complete. System override initated. Guard mode off." The voice cuts out and a sluing sound comes from the far end of the room. Something golden and small lays in the floor. As Mari gets closer she sees that the golden shape is a tiny wing.
 
 
 
"Is this it? Awesome!" she smiles,  going over to pick it up.  
 
  
 
"Although, I wonder... what exactly is this thing? Place? Or whatever it is?"
 
"Although, I wonder... what exactly is this thing? Place? Or whatever it is?"
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Ryan says (11:38 AM):
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"I am Fapadis. Created as a gift to the Unconquered Sun. Given as a gift to the Solar Exalted known as,<entry deleted> to serve as protection and guidance system for dragon lines in the Sun's Enldless Light Lake to the temple."
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Dante - I have a habit of leaving my computer unattended for long periods for time without indicating my Away status. says (11:40 AM):
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"Wow, you can talk! So, hm... Fap-at-dis... I know you swim around in a lake, but there's a stone pillar thing in the center. What does it do?"
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Ryan says (11:42 AM):
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"It is the focal point of the dragon lines that intersect at the lake. It is also a trap for the unwary. So that the unworthy may be consumed to protect the manse."
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Ryan says (11:51 AM):
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(Hopes he didn't kill the player.)
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Dante - I have a habit of leaving my computer unattended for long periods for time without indicating my Away status. says (11:52 AM):
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"Would you be referring to those guys?" she asks, pointing to the half-dozen skeletons outside.
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Dante - I have a habit of leaving my computer unattended for long periods for time without indicating my Away status. says (11:53 AM):
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(Sorry, forgot to press enter and flooding CrazyIvan with airship pictures :p)
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Ryan says (11:54 AM):
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"Indeed. The intruders have been dealt with as programmed."
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(Np I was joking. Though I need to go to bed soon)
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Dante - I have a habit of leaving my computer unattended for long periods for time without indicating my Away status. says (11:54 AM):
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(*hug*)
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(Oh well, we should have mari make her way back to the others first...)
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Dante - I have a habit of leaving my computer unattended for long periods for time without indicating my Away status. says (11:55 AM):
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"All right, Fap-at-dis... can you return me to the shore? I, uh, need to make my way further into the Manse. And stuff."
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Ryan says (11:56 AM):
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(Mari can always come back later. To see what all it can do. The effect on it is more like the sid cba stealth effect than glass)
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Dante - I have a habit of leaving my computer unattended for long periods for time without indicating my Away status. says (11:56 AM):
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(Sweeeet.)
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Ryan says (11:57 AM):
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"As you wish." A few moments later and the iris door opens through it Mari can see that the mouth is wide open and land and air is visible.
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Ryan says (12:01 PM):
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Mari enters the campsite the smell of stew wafting in the air. The statgue sits with Seven and Kraik. Kraik and Seven greet her as one. "Great! You're back. Did you get what you were looking for?"
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Dante - I have a habit of leaving my computer unattended for long periods for time without indicating my Away status. said (12:04 PM):
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"Yup!" she beams, holding up the golden little wing "Given as a gift, too!" she exclaims.
  
"I am Fapadis. Created as a gift to the Unconquered Sun. Given as a gift to the Solar Exalted known as,<entry deleted> to serve as protection and guidance system for dragon lines in the Lake of the Sun's Endless Light."
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(Shy has a very small role in this. Can we assume he's taking refuge with Coral instead?)
 
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"Wow, you can talk! So, hm... Fap-at-dis... I know you swim around in a lake, but there's a stone pillar thing in the center. What does it do?"
 
 
 
"It is the focal point of the dragon lines that intersect at the lake. It is also a trap for the unwary, so that the unworthy may be consumed to protect the manse."
 
 
 
"Would you be referring to those guys?" she asks, pointing to the half-dozen skeletons outside.
 
 
 
"Indeed. The intruders have been dealt with as programmed."
 
 
 
"All right, Fap-at-dis... can you return me to the shore? I, uh, need to get into the Manse. And stuff."
 
 
 
"As you wish." A few moments later and the iris door opens once more. Through it, Mari can see that the mouth is wide open. Dry land and air is visible.
 
 
 
"Thank you~" she smiles, skipping back out of Fapadis the crystal dragon. It dives back into the lake as she hops back out.
 
 
 
----
 
 
 
'''Back at the campsite...'''
 
 
 
Mari enters the campsite the smell of stew wafting in the air. The statue sits with Seven and Kraik, who greet her as one. "Great! You're back. Did you get what you were looking for?"
 
 
 
"Yup!" she beams, holding up the golden little wing "Given as a gift, too!" she exclaims.
 
 
 
"Good job! Then, once we have dinner, we'll continue on."
 
 
 
"Awesome!" Mari smiles as she plops herself next to them. "More for me, please~" she grins.
 
 
 
----
 
 
 
'''At the gates of the Manse...'''
 
  
 
Mari, Seven, Shy, and Kraik ascend the mountain. They must climb up through the cloud bank that hugs the mountain peak. A temple sits against a part of the mountain peak, and the Unconquered Sun shines down brightly upon the group. His rays reflect off the light brown stone and white marble that are everywhere.
 
Mari, Seven, Shy, and Kraik ascend the mountain. They must climb up through the cloud bank that hugs the mountain peak. A temple sits against a part of the mountain peak, and the Unconquered Sun shines down brightly upon the group. His rays reflect off the light brown stone and white marble that are everywhere.

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