Editing Marigold the Infamous

{| class="wikitable"
|+ 
| IC Thread[https://forum.rpg.net/index.php?threads/thirsty-sword-lesbians-gal-paladins.873888/]
| OOC Thread[https://forum.rpg.net/index.php?threads/thirsty-sword-lesbians-gal-paladins.873695/]
| [[Marigold the Infamous - Notes|Notes]]
|}

[[File:Marigold the Infamous.jpg|thumb|600px|right]]

=Bride of Valthrax=
''The Dragon's Butcher''

Victim turned victimiser, Marigold was an imperial enforcer while the empire still stood. Cruelly bound to the dragon Valthrax, she and her sword Ash-Tongue took countless lives in the emperor's name - most undeserving. And when the emperor was slain - when the empire toppled - she found herself alive and adrift. Lacking purpose in a world that saw her evil for what it was. Slowly, falteringly, she has begun trying to make amends: to carve out some kind of life for herself in this new and brighter world. But Mary's road is paved with many skulls and she dares not ask for a forgiveness she surely does not deserve. 

==STATS==

 '''Daring:''' +1
 '''Grace:'''  -1
 '''Heart:'''  +0
 '''Wit:'''    +1
 '''Spirit:''' +2

==CONDITIONS==
 '''Angry:'''      [ ] (-2 to FIGURE OUT A PERSON)
 '''Frightened:''' [ ] (-2 to FIGHT)
 '''Guilty:'''     [ ] (-2 to EMOTIONAL SUPPORT)
 '''Hopeless:'''   [ ] (-2 to DEFY DISASTER)
 '''Insecure:'''   [ ] (-2 to ENTICE)

==MOVES==

'''Wicked Past:''' when you hear about a villain for the first time, you may decide that you know them from your past. If so, give them a String on you to ask a question from the ''Figure Out a Person'' list and take +1 forward against them. 

'''Make It Right:''' when you allow yourself to be vulnerable to someone you hurt during your villainous past, they choose 1: 

    '''* Decline to Engage''' - they gain a String on you.
    '''* Lash out''' - you stagger.
    '''* Guide you''' - they mark XP and give you a task to help make amends. 
    '''* Show vulnerability''' - you take +1 forward to interact with them. 
    '''* Forgive you''' - you each clear a Condition, and this move no longer triggers with them. 

'''Always Suspect:''' when you pretend to be a villain to win a villain's trust, they trust you enough to offer you an opportunity and you gain a String on them. You must choose one of the following options:

    * Someone watching comes to the worst possible conclusion.
    * The villain requires an act of villainy to prove your intentions first.
    * The villain is only pretending to trust you and the opportunity is a trap. 

'''Talons of the Past:''' when you gain a String on someone associated with your villainous past, or vice versa, mark XP. The first time this happens for a given person, you can each define a secret or vulnerability you know about the other.

==STRINGS==

     [X][ ][ ][ ] '''Constance''' 
     [X][X][ ][ ] '''Ophelia''' 

===Relationships===

* I have wronged '''Constance''' terribly. Many of her order died at my hands, and she knows it was me.
* '''Ophelia''' believes in me more than I believe in myself. She is on her own journey, and has to trust that even someone like me can be saved...to trust for sure that she can be saved herself.

==What Cannon Be Undone==

* I am most proud of how easily I have come to serve Galladia. I was worried I would find it hard to adapt to something so different.
* What causes me the most grief is how little what I did mattered. Every drop of blood I split was all for nought - I killed needlessly, and thoughtlessly, and caused harm for no cause worth fighting for. 
* I have sworn these things to myself, and breaking these vows will cause me to ''Stagger'':
    '''*''' I will never kill when told to again. If I must take a life, it must be my decision.
    '''*''' I must not demonise people simply for being different. It makes evil all too easy.
    '''*''' I cannot allow myself to use Valthrax's fire. It is a murderous thing that threatens to escape my control.  

==ADVANCES==

     [ ] Take another move from your playbook
     [ ] Take another move from your playbook
     [ ] Take a move from any playbook
     [ ] Take a move from any playbook
     [ ] Add 1 to a stat (max stat of 3)
     [ ] Add 1 to a stat (max stat of 3)
     [ ] ''Switch to a new playbook''
     [ ] ''Live happily ever after''
@@ Line 27: / Line 27: @@
   '''Hopeless:'''   [ ] (-2 to DEFY DISASTER)
   '''Insecure:'''   [ ] (-2 to ENTICE)
-==TRUTHS OF HEART AND BLADE==
-'''Undeserving:''' when you become ''Smitten'' with someone, say why and give them a string. Then answer this question:
-    '''*''' why do you think they would be wrong to forgive you?
-'''Your Wicked Heart:''' when you ''Figure Out a Person'' during physical conflict you my additionally ask one of these questions (even on a 6-):
-    '''*''' What are you most ashamed of?
-    '''*''' How could I get you to betray your ideals?
 ==MOVES==
@@ Line 53: / Line 42: @@
 '''Always Suspect:''' when you pretend to be a villain to win a villain's trust, they trust you enough to offer you an opportunity and you gain a String on them. You must choose one of the following options:
-     '''*''' Someone watching comes to the worst possible conclusion.
+     * Someone watching comes to the worst possible conclusion.
-     '''*''' The villain requires an act of villainy to prove your intentions first.
+     * The villain requires an act of villainy to prove your intentions first.
-     '''*''' The villain is only pretending to trust you and the opportunity is a trap.
+     * The villain is only pretending to trust you and the opportunity is a trap.
 '''Talons of the Past:''' when you gain a String on someone associated with your villainous past, or vice versa, mark XP. The first time this happens for a given person, you can each define a secret or vulnerability you know about the other.