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She looked to her side, her private amusement showing only the sparkle in her eyes as she cast furtive glances at the tiny hobbit beside her.  Pricilla was, if anything, Neecy in a corset, the tiny rosebud lips pressed into a pleasant expression that was not a smile, but not far from a frown.  The nanny’s, ''no'', she corrected herself, the housekeeper’s hands were folded properly in her lap, her tiny hat pinned in hair done up as neatly as any that Katherine had ever seen.  Despite the wind of the morning, not a hair seemed to have moved out of place on the little hobbit woman, not a bow or a ribbon or even a stray eyelash out of place.  And even though the train journey had been long, somehow the hobbit still looked fresh and clean, something that Katherine was positively certain that she herself did not look.   
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She looked to her side, her private amusement showing only the sparkle in her eyes as she cast furtive glances at the tiny hobbit beside her.  Pricilla was, if anything, Neecy in a corset, the tiny rosebud lips pressed into a pleasant expression that was not a smile, but not far from a frown.  The nanny’s, no, she corrected herself, the housekeeper’s hands were folded properly in her lap, her tiny hat pinned in hair done up as neatly as any that Katherine had ever seen.  Despite the wind of the morning, not a hair seemed to have moved out of place on the little hobbit woman, not a bow or a ribbon or even a stray eyelash out of place.  And even though the train journey had been long, somehow the hobbit still looked fresh and clean, something that Katherine was positively certain that she herself did not look.   
  
  
She could only hope that she would not embarrass her husband when she met his family.  ''No'', she corrected herself again.  Only before the Host were they husband and wife.  Here in England, they were merely engaged.  Neecy had immediately reverted to calling her Mademoiselle as soon as their feet had hit the boards on the boat that would take them back to merry England, their marriage stripped away as neatly as it hadn’t happened.  Deep down inside, it made her more furious than she would ever reveal.  Not a soul beyond hers would know how very frustrated she felt; she had accepted the rules as stated and knew what rules she labored under once she was home.
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She could only hope that she would not embarrass her husband when she met his family.  No, she corrected herself again.  Only before the Host were they husband and wife.  Here in England, they were merely engaged.  Neecy had immediately reverted to calling her Mademoiselle as soon as their feet had hit the boards on the boat that would take them back to merry England, their marriage stripped away as neatly as it hadn’t happened.  Deep down inside, it made her more furious than she would ever reveal.  Not a soul beyond hers would know how very frustrated she felt; she had accepted the rules as stated and knew what rules she labored under once she was home.
  
  
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''I have faced monsters and wizards, machines and man, and yet I am more weak in the knees than I have ever felt in the face of battle,'' Katherine thought with wry humor as she waited for Ezekiel to speak with his mother.  If I could run and hide in Prissy's skirts like a child, I would.  She studied them discreetly as the pair spoke, hoping that their conversation would be irrationally long.  But all too quickly they began to walk towards her.
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I have faced monsters and wizards, machines and man, and yet I am more weak in the knees than I have ever felt in the face of battle, Katherine thought with wry humor as she waited for Ezekiel to speak with his mother.  If I could run and hide in Prissy's skirts like a child, I would.  She studied them discreetly as the pair spoke, hoping that their conversation would be irrationally long.  But all too quickly they began to walk towards her.
 
   
 
   
  
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When they entered, Ezekiel stood up, still holding Katherine's hand in his as he had her rise with him. "Jacob. Malcolm. If I might introduce my fiancee, the Lady Katherine Fleming, daughter to Colonel Sir William Fleming." He made a particular emphasis on her social status, hoping that it might keep his brothers in line.
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When they entered, Ezekiel stood up, still holding Katherine's hand in his as he had her rise with him. "Jacob. Malcolm. If I might introduce my fiancee, the Lady Katherine Fleming, daughter to Colonel Fleming." He made a particular emphasis on her social status, hoping that it might keep his brothers in line.
  
  

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