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*  Kyuad's white hawk lands dropping the fiery stone on a ledge above, spreading out its wings to sore down in a hop next to your lifeless body.
 
*  Kyuad's white hawk lands dropping the fiery stone on a ledge above, spreading out its wings to sore down in a hop next to your lifeless body.
 
*  Zal'Kassir, with his cloak in blood and gore, ties off your gaping wound tightly and leans the entire weight of his body on your chest.  Your body reacts as water pushes from your lungs, blood and swamp water choke from your mouth.  The Sarcosan has stopped the bleeding and your body beings to breath again!
 
*  Zal'Kassir, with his cloak in blood and gore, ties off your gaping wound tightly and leans the entire weight of his body on your chest.  Your body reacts as water pushes from your lungs, blood and swamp water choke from your mouth.  The Sarcosan has stopped the bleeding and your body beings to breath again!
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*  At the same exact time Nesse's wing feathers cover your head and eyes.  It brushes it's beak along your forhead and for a moment it's eyes focus on your spirit and glows...  Who saved you...  The bird, the horseman?  You can't say...  <br> '''ROLL:'''  Durgaz (Sense Motice +0)  ROLLED:  18+0 =  18 (a success with Zal'Kazzir not thinking he needs to "bluff" you)  
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*  At the same exact time Nesse's wing feathers cover your head and eyes.  It brushes it's beak along your forhead and for a moment it's eyes focus on your spirit and glows...  Who saved you...  The bird, the horseman?  You can't say...
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Zal'Kazzir slumps back into the water against a rock...  Half paniced, half relieved.  Looking at the bird, then to your body, then to his own cloak, then back to your body and the bandages he's covered you in... and he smiles to himself.  A grin of achievement.  Just for a second, them he closes his eyes as if considering the situation.
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* '''ROLL:'''  Durgaz (Sense Motice +0)  ROLLED:  18+0 =  18 (a success with Zal'Kazzir not thinking he needs to "bluff" you) <br> Zal'Kazzir slumps back into the water against a rock...  Half paniced, half relieved.  Looking at the bird, then to your body, then to his own cloak, then back to your body and the bandages he's covered you in... and he smiles to himself.  A grin of achievement.  Just for a second, them he closes his eyes as if considering the situation.
 
*  In the minutes that follow, there is time waiting.  Now and then a voice from Eranon above shouts down, worried about his friend Durgaz and the Sarcosan - knowing the Bone Monster had climbed out of the pit.  Zal'Kazzir yells in reply.  Above, they've taken down the Minotaur that fell your body as it climbed up above.  Kyuad asks if Nesse made it down and was of aid.  Zal'Kazzir replies with something like noting that HE had already saved Durgaz but the bird's light was helpful.  It takes them some time but in the next hour or so you see Eranon's wolf dangling from rope and vines as your fellow spelunkers descend into the hole.
 
*  In the minutes that follow, there is time waiting.  Now and then a voice from Eranon above shouts down, worried about his friend Durgaz and the Sarcosan - knowing the Bone Monster had climbed out of the pit.  Zal'Kazzir yells in reply.  Above, they've taken down the Minotaur that fell your body as it climbed up above.  Kyuad asks if Nesse made it down and was of aid.  Zal'Kazzir replies with something like noting that HE had already saved Durgaz but the bird's light was helpful.  It takes them some time but in the next hour or so you see Eranon's wolf dangling from rope and vines as your fellow spelunkers descend into the hole.
 
*  As they reach the shelf on which your body lies, Kyuad consults Nesse as Eranon looks worried seeing the proportions of your body's wounds.  He obviously fears you're done for.  Then Kyuad kneels to your side, energy sparkling between his hands and...........
 
*  As they reach the shelf on which your body lies, Kyuad consults Nesse as Eranon looks worried seeing the proportions of your body's wounds.  He obviously fears you're done for.  Then Kyuad kneels to your side, energy sparkling between his hands and...........

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