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== Bill / Kyuad ==
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*  [''For sake of easy, and because its no real secret, I've labeled the names of the legates present.  Assume that they say enough in their conversation that you can get the jist of their names/ranks.'']
  
Kyuad readies to grab at Zal'Kazzir in case he decides to get out from under the table to make friendly with the legates.
 
  
  
== Kevin ==
 
  
  
*  [''For sake of ease, and because its no real secret, I've labeled the names of the legates present.  Assume that they say enough in their conversation that you can get the gyst of their names/ranks.'']
 
  
  
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Curate Martial, Bearer of the Black Shield - Seneschal of Shadow, Harrower (female human, Urban Sarcosan) <br> '''Ahimia Gaskindin ''' <br> ''"... beyond that point Hyuri, I fail to your logic to the arguement.  I take issue that he offers such easy alliance for anyone that would follow his cause.  Might I add that I fear that his cause is not our own.  Even now the Orc and Undead march to the treeline but what does he do?  He toils his time with the stars leaving before the initiates that are to become during HIS ritual on the moon.  He twists in plots contending on meaningless whelps making their way to us from the ShadowWall, hoping they will grant we Spire-folk favor  to overcome King Jahzir..."''  <br>  although you are unable to see her, you can hear the temper and budding angst in the fiery heart of the woman's voice, walking backwards up the aisle barking at the others... as she is cut off.
  
  
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Harrower,  Sunulael’s Handmaiden - Inquisitor (female human, Urban Sarcosan) <br> '''Hyuri Dezba-Kahon'''  <br> ''"...'HIS' ritual is to support the..."'' <br> pulsing in defense the second woman bumps the shoulder of the first, turning her as they walk. You still cannot see their faces, only the curves that are made by the well tones women.  The first nearly a foot taller than the second.
  
  
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Curate Barrack-Master, Surgeon Knife (male human, Urban Sarcosan) <br> '''Yungat Titkan'''  <br> ''"...'HIS' ritual is the point Lady Dezba-Kahon... 'HIS' ritual should not be noted.  It is because the master chooses to go his own way that..."'' <br> the man walking behind them preaches to the women.  His hands sway scuttering vermin from their path with a short staff with five large black crow feathers, as he stoops to straighten a pew seat - so very nearly making eye contact with you...
  
Curate Martial, Bearer of the Black Shield - Seneschal of Shadow, Harrower (female human, Urban Sarcosan) <br> '''Ahimia Gaskindin ''' <br> ''"... beyond that point Hyuri, I fail to see your logic to the arguement.  I take issue that he offers such easy alliance for anyone that would follow his cause.  Might I add that I fear that his cause is not our own.  Even now the Orc and Undead march to the treeline but what does he do?  He toils his time with the stars, leaving before the initiates that are to become during HIS ritual on the moon.  He twists in plots with the misguided contention of meaningless whelps making their way to us from the ShadowWall..., hoping they will grant we Spire-folk favor  to overcome King Jahzir..."''  <br>  although you are unable to see her, you can hear the temper and budding angst in the fiery heart of the woman's voice, walking backwards up the aisle barking at the others... as she is cut off.
 
  
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'''Ahimia Gaskindin'''  <br> ''"Shadow have you Hyuri! Listen to Yungat... The Vile continues to step closely to the boundries watched by those such as us within the Devout. Some have feared that his elfin ways cloud his mind from the stars, yet he continues to rely on them as the long dead Sahi did.  Not only does he tempt fate by having the slave-master bring his latest batch in such a large contingent in one massive drive, but he continues to toil with that damned eye.  Truly Hyuri can you believe that it speaks as he postulates, true it has power, true it has raised these halls from obscurity but it is but a sick tool for a self-annointed would be scientist driven mad by the things he saw beneath the Spine of the World.'' <br> ''Do you truly believe that it was Lord Sunulael's wish to taunt the orc traitor who can see through the eyes of the Cadaverous thing?  Do you think the Shadow compels him to use the Spire as his personal fortress for conquest on which he can hang the bodies of the pathwalker's allies?  Do you think the orc legions, that would have his head, are so far from the truth told them by hundreds of years of raw instinct?  And do you think Master Kulos would..."''<br> As the hot tempered legate stops the procession as the reach the center of the cathedral room.
  
== Bill / Kyuad ==
 
  
'''Kyuad:''' With a tone of amazement, "That must be us... they know of the ShadowWall!"
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'''Yungat Titkan''' (gasping as he walks)  <br> ''"...blasphemous Lady Gaskindin!  Speak not of it here!"''  <br> As the man looks upward into the shadow as if he fears being overheard in this unholy debate...
 
 
 
 
== Kevin ==
 
 
 
 
 
Harrower,  Sunulael’s Handmaiden - Inquisitor (female human, Urban Sarcosan) <br> '''Hyuri Dezba-Kahon'''  <br> ''"...'HIS' ritual is to support the..."'' <br> pulsing in defense the second woman bumps the shoulder of the first, turning her as they walk. You still cannot see their faces, only the curves that are made by the well-toned women.  The first nearly a foot taller than the second.
 
 
 
 
 
Curate Barrack-Master, Surgeon Knife (male human, Urban Sarcosan) <br> '''Yungat Titkan'''  <br> ''"...'HIS' ritual is the point Lady Dezba-Kahon... 'HIS' ritual should not be noted.  It is because the master chooses to go his own way that..."'' <br> the man walking behind them preaches to the women.  His hands sway scuttering vermin from their path with a short staff with five large black crow feathers, as he stoops to straighten a pew seat - very nearly making eye contact with you...
 
 
 
 
 
'''Ahimia Gaskindin'''  <br> ''"Shadow have you Hyuri! Listen to Yungat... The Vile continues to step closely to the boundries watched by those such as us within the Devout."''
 
 
 
 
 
== Bill / Kyuad ==
 
 
 
'''Kyuad:''' Kyuad quietly interjects, "I thought so - the Devout are in a position of contention, watching his actions."
 
 
 
 
 
== Kevin ==
 
 
 
'''Ahimia Gaskindin'''  <br> ''"Some have feared that his elfin ways cloud his mind from the stars, yet he continues to rely on them as the long dead Sahi did.  Not only does he tempt fate by having the slave-master bring his latest batch in such a large contingent in one massive drive, but he continues to toil with that damned eye.  Truly Hyuri you can believe that it speaks as he postulates, true it has power, true it has raised these halls from obscurity but it is but a sick tool for a self-annointed would-be scientist driven mad by the things he saw beneath the Spine of the World.'' <br> ''Do you truly believe that it was Lord Sunulael's wish to taunt the orc traitor who can see through the eyes of the Cadaverous thing?  Do you think the Shadow compels him to use the Spire as his personal fortress for conquest on which he can hang the bodies of the pathwalker's allies?  Do you think the orc legions, that would have his head, are so far from the truth told them by hundreds of years of raw instinct?  And do you think Master Kulos would..."''<br> The hot-tempered legate stops the procession as they reach the center of the cathedral room.
 
 
 
 
 
== Bill / Kyuad ==
 
 
 
'''Kyuad:''' "The orcs hate the Vile?"
 
 
 
 
 
== Kevin ==
 
 
 
 
 
'''Yungat Titkan''' (gasping as he walks)  <br> ''"...blasphemous Lady Gaskindin!  Speak not of it here!"''  <br> The man looks upward into the shadow as if he fears being overheard in this unholy debate...
 
  
  
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== Bill / Kyuad ==
 
 
'''Kyuad:''' "The 'traitor orc,' who they also referred to as 'the pathwalker,' must be Durgaz.  Though from just hearing her, she could have meant 'pathwalker' in the plural, meaning all of us.  Surely they know we are here already - if not for the spying then for what happened below.  I did not realize that Durgaz could see through the Cadaverous Eye himself.  Maybe they refer to a potential ability and not his current practice.  Though from some of his 'visions' I could suspect either to be true.<br>"They referred to him as a pathwalker, as though that were an important distinction about Durgaz.  Perhaps he and 'the Vile have this in common... it would be interesting to see if anyone else were able to use the 'Eye.  We shall see, if given the opportunity.  Speak not of my suspicions to Durgaz, I do not want him thinking that I expect him to ''use'' this tool of wickedness.<br> "I will try to fill the time waiting on the others by trying to reference the stations and ranks these legates mentioned."
 
 
''OOC:  Kyuad's doing a Lorebook check on legate ranks and such, looking for what'' Harrower, Curate, Barrack-Master, Surgeon Knife, ''and'' Seneschal of Shadow'' mean for the legates and their purpose within the greater church.  Modifier is +11''
 
 
==== Other questions ====
 
Thanks a lot Kevin!  This is awesome!!
 
 
I edited some minor typos this morning, and again when I added to it just now.  I'm unclear about this portion however:
 
"''He toils his time with the stars, leaving before the initiates that are to become during HIS ritual on the moon. He twists in plots contending on meaningless whelps making their way to us from the ShadowWall... ''"
 
 
Is she referring to the initiates as "the initiates-that-are-to-become" as a single long-winded term?  Is his ritual on the moon or is he leaving before the 'moon (as a shortened term for the New Moon or whatever phase that they understand as her meaning), which is when the ritual takes place?<br>
 
She said that his plots contend on whelps, which means "conflicting/fighting/rivaling on whelps."  I don't think this is a proper use of the word.  Should that be depending instead of contending?  Or should it be "contending with"?
 
 
 
 
== Kevin ==
 
Thanks for the typo fixing, I don't mind at all.  Just make sure you are NOT editting the meaning of the phrase.  If you wonder, please ask before you change it.  -thanks.
 
 
 
*  [KYUAD]  '''Though from just hearing her, she could have meant 'pathwalker' in the plural, meaning all of us.'''
 
** ['''A''']:  ...possibly...
 
 
 
*  [KYUAD]  '''Kyuad's doing a Lorebook check on legate ranks and such, looking for what'' Harrower, Curate, Barrack-Master, Surgeon Knife, ''and'' Seneschal of Shadow'' mean for the legates and their purpose within the greater church.  Modifier is +11'''
 
** ['''A''']: '''ROLL:'''  Kyuad (Lorebook +11)  ROLLED:  8+11 =  19 ''  <br>  Oooo... crappy roll Bill, sorry about that... Luckily I rolled a 11 on the 50/50 though.  So...  ''With this roll - Kyuad gains Common, known by at least a substantial minority of the local population.'',  luckily some of this information is somewhat easily known... <br> IN FACT... Zal might know this info as well. <br> '''ROLL:'''  Zal'Kazzir (Know: Shadow +10)  ROLLED:  2+10 =  12 ''  <br> <br> So what I have listed here is the information that either Kyuad or Zal'Kazzir would both have.  Bill, I've continued a little bit of your [http://wiki.rpg.net/index.php/Kyuad%27s_Lorebook#Ways_of_the_Legates Lorebook] information in your Lorebook.  (ADAM - do not read the Lorebook)
 
*** '''Harrower''':  ''Harrowers are granted a considerable amount of autonomy and expected to scour the land with merciless efficiency. The Order of Harrowers is under the leadership of the grim legate Janavar, who oversees his harrowers’ activities from his quarters in Theros Obsidia. ''
 
*** '''Curate''':  ''A prefix title for temple legates.  Curates are aids to the Prelate (Prelate is the highest-ranking temple legate).''
 
*** '''Barrack-Master''':  ''A prefix title for temple legates.  Barrack-Masters are responsible for the cleanliness and orderliness of the temple living quarters.''
 
*** '''Surgeon Knife''':  ''A dominion within the "Umbral Catholicon" group.  These legates are clerics who are too weak and ineffectual to carve a niche elsewhere in the order. The Umbral Catholicon are considered the lowest of the dark god’s priests, openly despised by their brethren and treated as little better than common lackeys by the orcs.''
 
*** '''Seneschal of Shadow''':  ''A rank within the "Soldier Legate" group.  The Seneschals of Shadow are often the head of a chapter of the Fulminate Shield. Others command the bodyguards of greater legates.''
 
 
 
*  [KYUAD]  '''I'm unclear about this portion however: "''He toils his time with the stars, leaving before the initiates that are to become during HIS ritual on the moon. He twists in plots contending on meaningless whelps making their way to us from the ShadowWall... ''"''' <br> Is she referring to the initiates as "the initiates-that-are-to-become" as a single long-winded term? 
 
** ['''A''']:  She is referring to "Initiates" that will "become" something by attending/aiding in the "ritual on the moon".  Who these "Initiates" are could be:  your group, the incoming slaved orcs, the three legates with the slaves, or someone else.  She didn't say.
 
  
  
*  [KYUAD]  '''Is his ritual on the moon or is he leaving before the 'moon (as a shortened term for the New Moon or whatever phase that they understand as her meaning), which is when the ritual takes place?'''
 
** ['''A''']:  She said he left "'''BEFORE''' the ... ritual on the moon".  Which PHASE of the moon or whether he's gone and already come "back" by now is unclear, she did not say.
 
  
  
*  [KYUAD]  '''She said that his plots contend on whelps, which means "conflicting/fighting/rivaling on whelps."  I don't think this is a proper use of the word.  Should that be depending instead of contending?  Or should it be "contending with"?'''
 
** ['''A''']:  The word/phrase I meant to convey was more like "contention" (struggling together in opposition).  I editted it above to read this way:  ''"He twists in plots with the misguided contention of meaningless whelps making their way to us from the ShadowWall..."''
 
  
  

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