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Curate Martial, Bearer of the Black Shield - Seneschal of Shadow, Harrower (female human, Urban Sarcosan) <br> '''Ahimia Gaskindin ''' <br> ''"... beyond that point Hyuri, I fail to see your logic to the arguement.  I take issue that he offers such easy alliance for anyone that would follow his cause.  Might I add that I fear that his cause is not our own.  Even now the Orc and Undead march to the treeline but what does he do?  He toils his time with the stars, leaving before the initiates that are to become during HIS ritual on the moon.  He twists in plots with the misguided contention of meaningless whelps making their way to us from the ShadowWall..., hoping they will grant we Spire-folk favor  to overcome King Jahzir..."''  <br>  although you are unable to see her, you can hear the temper and budding angst in the fiery heart of the woman's voice, walking backwards up the aisle barking at the others... as she is cut off.
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Curate Martial, Bearer of the Black Shield - Seneschal of Shadow, Harrower (female human, Urban Sarcosan) <br> '''Ahimia Gaskindin ''' <br> ''"... beyond that point Hyuri, I fail to see your logic to the arguement.  I take issue that he offers such easy alliance for anyone that would follow his cause.  Might I add that I fear that his cause is not our own.  Even now the Orc and Undead march to the treeline but what does he do?  He toils his time with the stars, leaving before the initiates that are to become during HIS ritual on the moon.  He twists in plots contending on meaningless whelps making their way to us from the ShadowWall, hoping they will grant we Spire-folk favor  to overcome King Jahzir..."''  <br>  although you are unable to see her, you can hear the temper and budding angst in the fiery heart of the woman's voice, walking backwards up the aisle barking at the others... as she is cut off.
  
  
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''OOC:  Kyuad's doing a Lorebook check on legate ranks and such, looking for what'' Harrower, Curate, Barrack-Master, Surgeon Knife, ''and'' Seneschal of Shadow'' mean for the legates and their purpose within the greater church.  Modifier is +11''
 
''OOC:  Kyuad's doing a Lorebook check on legate ranks and such, looking for what'' Harrower, Curate, Barrack-Master, Surgeon Knife, ''and'' Seneschal of Shadow'' mean for the legates and their purpose within the greater church.  Modifier is +11''
  
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Thanks a lot Kevin!  This is awesome!!
 
 
I edited some minor typos this morning, and again when I added to it just now.  I'm unclear about this portion however:
 
"''He toils his time with the stars, leaving before the initiates that are to become during HIS ritual on the moon. He twists in plots contending on meaningless whelps making their way to us from the ShadowWall... ''"
 
 
Is she referring to the initiates as "the initiates-that-are-to-become" as a single long-winded term?  Is his ritual on the moon or is he leaving before the 'moon (as a shortened term for the New Moon or whatever phase that they understand as her meaning), which is when the ritual takes place?<br>
 
She said that his plots contend on whelps, which means "conflicting/fighting/rivaling on whelps."  I don't think this is a proper use of the word.  Should that be depending instead of contending?  Or should it be "contending with"?
 
  
 
 
== Kevin ==
 
Thanks for the typo fixing, I don't mind at all.  Just make sure you are NOT editting the meaning of the phrase.  If you wonder, please ask before you change it.  -thanks.
 
 
 
*  [KYUAD]  '''Though from just hearing her, she could have meant 'pathwalker' in the plural, meaning all of us.'''
 
** ['''A''']:  ...possibly...
 
 
 
*  [KYUAD]  '''Kyuad's doing a Lorebook check on legate ranks and such, looking for what'' Harrower, Curate, Barrack-Master, Surgeon Knife, ''and'' Seneschal of Shadow'' mean for the legates and their purpose within the greater church.  Modifier is +11'''
 
** ['''A''']: '''ROLL:'''  Kyuad (Lorebook +11)  ROLLED:  8+11 =  19 ''  <br>  Oooo... crappy roll Bill, sorry about that... Luckily I rolled a 11 on the 50/50 though.  So...  ''With this roll - Kyuad gains Common, known by at least a substantial minority of the local population.'',  luckily some of this information is somewhat easily known... <br> IN FACT... Zal might know this info as well. <br> '''ROLL:'''  Zal'Kazzir (Know: Shadow +10)  ROLLED:  2+10 =  12 ''  <br> <br> So what I have listed here is the information that either Kyuad or Zal'Kazzir would both have.  Bill, I've continued a little bit of your [http://wiki.rpg.net/index.php/Kyuad%27s_Lorebook#Ways_of_the_Legates Lorebook] information in your Lorebook.  (ADAM - do not read the Lorebook)
 
*** '''Harrower''':  ''Harrowers are granted a considerable amount of autonomy and expected to scour the land with merciless efficiency. The Order of Harrowers is under the leadership of the grim legate Janavar, who oversees his harrowers’ activities from his quarters in Theros Obsidia. ''
 
*** '''Curate''':  ''A prefix title for temple legates.  Curates are aids to the Prelate (Prelate is the highest-ranking temple legate).''
 
*** '''Barrack-Master''':  ''A prefix title for temple legates.  Barrack-Masters are responsible for the cleanliness and orderliness of the temple living quarters.''
 
*** '''Surgeon Knife''':  ''A dominion within the "Umbral Catholicon" group.  These legates are clerics who are too weak and ineffectual to carve a niche elsewhere in the order. The Umbral Catholicon are considered the lowest of the dark god’s priests, openly despised by their brethren and treated as little better than common lackeys by the orcs.''
 
*** '''Seneschal of Shadow''':  ''A rank within the "Soldier Legate" group.  The Seneschals of Shadow are often the head of a chapter of the Fulminate Shield. Others command the bodyguards of greater legates.''
 
 
 
*  [KYUAD]  '''I'm unclear about this portion however: "''He toils his time with the stars, leaving before the initiates that are to become during HIS ritual on the moon. He twists in plots contending on meaningless whelps making their way to us from the ShadowWall... ''"''' <br> Is she referring to the initiates as "the initiates-that-are-to-become" as a single long-winded term? 
 
** ['''A''']:  She is referring to "Initiates" that will "become" something by attending/aiding in the "ritual on the moon".  Who these "Initiates" are could be:  your group, the incoming slaved orcs, the three legates with the slaves, or someone else.  She didn't say.
 
 
 
*  [KYUAD]  '''Is his ritual on the moon or is he leaving before the 'moon (as a shortened term for the New Moon or whatever phase that they understand as her meaning), which is when the ritual takes place?'''
 
** ['''A''']:  She said he left "'''BEFORE''' the ... ritual on the moon".  Which PHASE of the moon or whether he's gone and already come "back" by now is unclear, she did not say.
 
 
 
*  [KYUAD]  '''She said that his plots contend on whelps, which means "conflicting/fighting/rivaling on whelps."  I don't think this is a proper use of the word.  Should that be depending instead of contending?  Or should it be "contending with"?'''
 
** ['''A''']:  The word/phrase I meant to convey was more like "contention" (struggling together in opposition).  I editted it above to read this way:  ''"He twists in plots with the misguided contention of meaningless whelps making their way to us from the ShadowWall..."''
 
  
  

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