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*  [KYUAD]  '''Though from just hearing her, she could have meant 'pathwalker' in the plural, meaning all of us.'''
 
*  [KYUAD]  '''Though from just hearing her, she could have meant 'pathwalker' in the plural, meaning all of us.'''
 
** ['''A''']:  ...possibly...
 
** ['''A''']:  ...possibly...
 
  
 
*  [KYUAD]  '''Kyuad's doing a Lorebook check on legate ranks and such, looking for what'' Harrower, Curate, Barrack-Master, Surgeon Knife, ''and'' Seneschal of Shadow'' mean for the legates and their purpose within the greater church.  Modifier is +11'''
 
*  [KYUAD]  '''Kyuad's doing a Lorebook check on legate ranks and such, looking for what'' Harrower, Curate, Barrack-Master, Surgeon Knife, ''and'' Seneschal of Shadow'' mean for the legates and their purpose within the greater church.  Modifier is +11'''
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*** '''Surgeon Knife''':  ''A dominion within the "Umbral Catholicon" group.  These legates are clerics who are too weak and ineffectual to carve a niche elsewhere in the order. The Umbral Catholicon are considered the lowest of the dark god’s priests, openly despised by their brethren and treated as little better than common lackeys by the orcs.''
 
*** '''Surgeon Knife''':  ''A dominion within the "Umbral Catholicon" group.  These legates are clerics who are too weak and ineffectual to carve a niche elsewhere in the order. The Umbral Catholicon are considered the lowest of the dark god’s priests, openly despised by their brethren and treated as little better than common lackeys by the orcs.''
 
*** '''Seneschal of Shadow''':  ''A rank within the "Soldier Legate" group.  The Seneschals of Shadow are often the head of a chapter of the Fulminate Shield. Others command the bodyguards of greater legates.''
 
*** '''Seneschal of Shadow''':  ''A rank within the "Soldier Legate" group.  The Seneschals of Shadow are often the head of a chapter of the Fulminate Shield. Others command the bodyguards of greater legates.''
 
  
 
*  [KYUAD]  '''I'm unclear about this portion however: "''He toils his time with the stars, leaving before the initiates that are to become during HIS ritual on the moon. He twists in plots contending on meaningless whelps making their way to us from the ShadowWall... ''"''' <br> Is she referring to the initiates as "the initiates-that-are-to-become" as a single long-winded term?   
 
*  [KYUAD]  '''I'm unclear about this portion however: "''He toils his time with the stars, leaving before the initiates that are to become during HIS ritual on the moon. He twists in plots contending on meaningless whelps making their way to us from the ShadowWall... ''"''' <br> Is she referring to the initiates as "the initiates-that-are-to-become" as a single long-winded term?   
 
** ['''A''']:  She is referring to "Initiates" that will "become" something by attending/aiding in the "ritual on the moon".  Who these "Initiates" are could be:  your group, the incoming slaved orcs, the three legates with the slaves, or someone else.  She didn't say.
 
** ['''A''']:  She is referring to "Initiates" that will "become" something by attending/aiding in the "ritual on the moon".  Who these "Initiates" are could be:  your group, the incoming slaved orcs, the three legates with the slaves, or someone else.  She didn't say.
 
  
 
*  [KYUAD]  '''Is his ritual on the moon or is he leaving before the 'moon (as a shortened term for the New Moon or whatever phase that they understand as her meaning), which is when the ritual takes place?'''
 
*  [KYUAD]  '''Is his ritual on the moon or is he leaving before the 'moon (as a shortened term for the New Moon or whatever phase that they understand as her meaning), which is when the ritual takes place?'''
 
** ['''A''']:  She said he left "'''BEFORE''' the ... ritual on the moon".  Which PHASE of the moon or whether he's gone and already come "back" by now is unclear, she did not say.
 
** ['''A''']:  She said he left "'''BEFORE''' the ... ritual on the moon".  Which PHASE of the moon or whether he's gone and already come "back" by now is unclear, she did not say.
 
  
 
*  [KYUAD]  '''She said that his plots contend on whelps, which means "conflicting/fighting/rivaling on whelps."  I don't think this is a proper use of the word.  Should that be depending instead of contending?  Or should it be "contending with"?'''
 
*  [KYUAD]  '''She said that his plots contend on whelps, which means "conflicting/fighting/rivaling on whelps."  I don't think this is a proper use of the word.  Should that be depending instead of contending?  Or should it be "contending with"?'''

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