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The deceptively stupid raptor hops to a branch revealing itself to the dark light of the few stars in the sky.  Neega seems larger than before.  Nearly the size of a bird of prey, this raven seems to have had this 'new' body bred in dark nests of hearty life.  Clearly clutched in the beast's sharp talons appears to be a twisted thatch of parchments, twined with string to the thing's ankle...  It hops a stagger step as it speaks up again, not waiting for a real answer...
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The deceptively stupid foul hops to a branch revealing itself to the dark light of the few stars in the sky.  Neega seems larger than before.  Nearly the size of a bird of prey, this raven seems to have had this 'new' body bred in dark nests of hearty life.  Clearly clutched in the beast's sharp talons appears to be a twisted thatch of parchments, twined with string to the thing's ankle...  It hops a stagger step as it speaks up again, not waiting for a real answer...
  
  
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You are MORE than welcome to TALK with Neega... hehe... fun fun...]
 
You are MORE than welcome to TALK with Neega... hehe... fun fun...]
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==UNRAVELLING the Parchment reveals...==
 
==UNRAVELLING the Parchment reveals...==

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